How to write a composition to correct the comment 1 1, and how to use metaphors and personification appropriately in the text to make the green in different seasons full of vitality and fragrance.
2. The little author captures the unique scenery of spring and can accurately and aptly write beauty by using figurative rhetoric. At the same time, he praised the hard-working gardener, the teacher, and sublimated the theme of the article.
3. The little author's careful investigation, vivid and meticulous appearance and vivid metaphor personification make people feel immersive after reading it, and also make the author's favorite spiritual feelings more natural and fully revealed.
4. The beginning of the article is very clear, which plays a leading role in the full text.
The spring in your works is rich and beautiful: red flowers and green grass, green mountains and blue sky. ...
6. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life and friendly to read.
7. Make full use of the combination of static and dynamic writing, supplemented by metaphor, personification and other techniques, and make readers feel like they are in a dream through vivid language description. The praise of the characters at the end is sincere and touching.
8. Pay attention to specific things and expand your imagination appropriately. This is success. The article melts into the scenery, describes the scenery while expressing emotions, and is good at using analogy to make the article vivid.
9, the article echoes from beginning to end, the sentence is concise, hit the nail on the head, and point out the theme. Through the description of the scenery of the four seasons, the article explains the beauty and intention at the beginning. It is best to pay attention to the clear level of paragraphs.
10, the scenery of the four seasons is really beautiful. Your practice is clear and rich in content, and your words are particularly vivid and accurate.
1 1. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and smooth, and the feelings are sincere and touching.
12, through enriching the characters' language and actions, set off the characters' ideological quality. The article is reasonable in imagination, natural and vivid in narration, compact in structure, coherent in connection with nature and prominent in center.
13, concise language, clear center, reasonable concept and clear writing level.
14, it is really commendable to write the inner activities of the characters very vividly and leave a deep impression on people.
15, the center of the article is clear and the structure is complete.
16, the full text is hearty, with joy and expectation, and the beginning is sincere and touching.
17, the article has a strong sense of reality, three-dimensional sense, strong readability, strong interest and keen social insight. It is profound to use fairy tales to reflect the dark side of reality and vivid language to describe a series of greedy people.
18, this article takes … as a clue, and the article on the right to use is coherent, smooth and natural. Criticize at the same time ... By comparing the concrete cases before and after, the language of the article is vivid and rich, and it is readable.
19, the article is well-founded, convincing, highlighting the personality of the characters, the context is natural, the organization is clear, coordinated from beginning to end, ending with points and highlighting the central idea.
20. The author observes … carefully, describes it delicately, and has vivid language and novel expression.
How to write a composition and correct comments 2 1? This composition has novel materials, strange ideas and vivid language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
2. The article narrates the events according to the sequence of events, with fluent language and clear levels, and looks very happy from beginning to end.
The article is full of respect and gratitude from beginning to end, affectionate and touching, which is the shocking force of this article. The tone of the article is relaxed and humorous, full of fun, and people can't put it down.
4. The author is ingenious in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing. The language is lively and interesting. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching. The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
5. The story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics. It can be seen that you are a conscientious person in life. The article comes from life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is really interesting and well written.
6. The full-text language is concise and the structure is natural ... The article has a rigorous structure and echoes from beginning to end.
7. The language is humorous and interesting, the plot arrangement is tortuous and vivid, and the first and last echoes are clever. Although this picture is short, its content is vivid and concrete, its paragraphs are clear and its language is easy to understand.
8. A series of verbs that express the actions of the characters in the text are used accurately and well.
9. This paper adopts the first-person writing method, which makes … have great advantages and plays a good role in characterization and performance center. It is friendly, natural and credible to read, with clear thinking and lively rhythm.
10, the process of this article is concrete, clear and coherent. At the same time, the author added appropriate psychological description, which fully expressed …
1 1, the article is narrated in children's language, which is natural and simple, just like the ending of a clear spring, and plays the role of making the finishing touch.
12, the article is vivid and sincere, especially the article about the right to use is very infectious and thought-provoking.
13, the narrative is clear, the verbs are used correctly, and the metaphor is appropriate. After reading it, you can educate vivid suggestions.
14, simple and natural childlike innocence is reflected in the article, which makes the article exude a fresh and lively atmosphere.
15, this paper expresses sincere praise for a beautiful mind with concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language and novel and unique writing style.
How to write a composition and correct comments 3 1 The plot is lively and interesting, the narrative is clear and complete, and it also shows the author's intelligence, wit, interest in family life and smooth and lively writing.
2. You are very good at grasping the characteristics of things and describing them in detail, which shows that there is affection between writing and writing.
The article is very convincing and thought-provoking. In writing, the plot is vivid and the article is ups and downs, which is very enlightening to read.
4. The theme is concise, focused, profound, powerful and shocking.
5. The words used in this article are accurate and rigorous, the language is plain and natural, and the use of rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification makes the article even more icing on the cake.
6. The article you wrote is vivid, with accurate words and appropriate metaphors, especially the imagination in the last natural paragraph, which closely follows the theme and expresses your wishes.
7. Your words are accurate and vivid, and your language is fluent. You can also use many people's poems to describe plum blossoms. It turns out that you are as unique as cotton.
8. Your knowledge is really rich! Not only do you know the origin of the name "Milan", but you can also compare "Milan" with Chinese rose flowers to highlight your own characteristics.
9. The article you wrote is really vivid, with accurate words and appropriate metaphors, especially the imagination in the last natural paragraph, which closely follows the theme and expresses your wishes.
10. Correct format is your advantage, and scribbling is your disadvantage. I hope you can carry forward your advantages, correct your shortcomings and be a model of "good homework".
1 1. Your article is very creative in structure and deeply shows your love for chrysanthemums.
12. Your article is humorous and colloquial, giving people a cordial feeling. That's great. I believe your composition will be better next time.
13. The teacher is very happy to see your article. The writing is clean and tidy, and the content is novel and interesting. I hope to continue to work hard next time!
14. You carefully observed the grass, and at the same time, you associated it with the teacher and praised the teacher by praising the grass. Don't you think such an article will have a novel artistic conception?
15. Your article describes a scientific and interesting robot for us through rich imagination. The description is very touching, the language is vivid and fascinating. The teacher is very happy to see your progress.
How to write a composition and correct comments 4 1 The article is novel in material selection, full of rural life and full of children's interest. It makes people feel very happy and comfortable after reading it.
2。 The article not only expresses the author's love for his father, but also expresses his thoughts about his father. It has vivid descriptions, especially in words and sentences. Romance in language and style stimulates readers' interest in reading.
3. The article is realistic, three-dimensional, readable and interesting. Fairy tales reflect the dark side of reality with keen social insight, and with vivid language, they can be said to be profound.
4. With the clue of …………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
5. Be able to have a reasonable imagination, embody meaningful philosophy, write fluently and concisely, and give full play to your imagination. The article is elegant, fluent and clear, especially the humor of the characters' language, and the use of some subtle words invisibly adds a lot of interest to the article.
6. The article is vivid and sincere, especially the article about the right to use is very infectious and thought-provoking.
7. Make things clear, use verbs correctly, and use metaphors appropriately and vividly. Make suggestions and get education from them after reading them.
8. Simple and natural childlike innocence is reflected in the article, which makes the article exude a fresh and lively atmosphere.
With concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language and novel and unique writing style, this paper expresses sincere praise for the beautiful mind.
10, this paper has three main advantages:
(1, this article can closely follow the requirements of the topic and write it completely. ...
(2) The structure is rigorous and focused.
(3) The language is concise, concise and fluent, and the beginning and end are natural and accurate.
1 1, the beginning is simple and natural, the structure is clear and the psychological description is true, which shows the author's good language control ability.
12, the characteristics of this composition can be summarized as cordial, warm and meaningful.
13 ... The description in the article is fresh and lively, cheerful and clear. The childlike innocence between the lines makes the article have vitality.
14. With rich imagination and colorful language, the article presents ... to readers.
15, the article is concise and the language is plain and simple.
16, the appearance description has both form and spirit, and the characters are outstanding. What is commendable is that the theme of the song has aroused readers' interest in reading.
17. Vivid and detailed description is the main factor for the success of the article.
18, the article comes from life, and young authors are good at capturing the materials in life. Yes, without detergent, our environment will become unsightly. The language of the article is simple, the words and deeds of the characters conform to their own identity characteristics, and the life atmosphere is strong.
19. This article is a mature narrative work. The whole process of the experiment was shown in accurate and fluent language, which was full of ups and downs and interesting. The little author observes carefully, narrates orderly, and describes the characters carefully and comprehensively. This article is interesting to read.
20. The soundtrack was clear at the beginning of the article, which played a leading role in the full text. The last few sentences show the author's lofty ideals and firm confidence in exploring the mysteries of science, which is inspiring.
How to write a composition and correct comments 5 1 The content of this article is vivid, and it feels like just eating a piece of fresh milk cake, with endless aftertaste.
Your exercise is no longer like boiled water. It's a little sweet now. Keep working hard and I will shout "Come on" for you!
3. Persistence is victory;
4, the phenomenon of losing words is serious, I guess you often break your umbrella in rainy days?
5, that metaphor is very subtle, even better than the idea that a clever fox came up with;
6. The handwriting is crowded. Aren't you afraid to heat them?
7. Young people who don't work hard are pathetic;
8. Titles with ellipsis are vivid and fresh, like green leaves.
9. Your article is like a withered flower, with no fragrance at all. Think about how to make flowers smell sweet again;
10, the content is specific, but the natural section is too small. Are you afraid of spending money and reluctant to divide it into several paragraphs?
1 1, there is a sentence in the composition that I don't know what it means, just like you told me to breathe with my ears, which makes me feel puzzled.
12, the movements are rarely written, like branches in autumn, without a leaf.
13, your sentence is a dead goldfish in a jar, not alive at all.
14 and xx are really beautiful. Your exercises are clear in level and rich in content, and your words are particularly vivid and accurate.
15, the little author wrote about his familiar place-school, which combined the writing of scenery with the writing of people wonderfully. There are people in the scenery, and the scenery sets people off.
16. In your pen, the scenery of xx in winter is meticulous and the language is fluent. The use of metaphor and personification rhetoric increases the vividness and significance of the article. If you can put the action of the characters into such a scene, the composition will be more colorful!
17. In your pen, the scenery of xx is so beautiful and moving, and the sports are so colorful. I love you too, beautiful xx.
18 The author expressed his love for the school through the scenery of xx itself, which is clear to the central authorities.
19, the author vividly and meticulously grasped the color, shape, fragrance and other characteristics of the landscape, and used various techniques such as metaphor and personification to make people feel the beauty of autumn everywhere.
20. The sentences in this article are simple and vivid, and the content is real and interesting. There are many places in the article that reflect the careful investigation of the little author at ordinary times, which is particularly remarkable in various interesting survival scenes of modeling xx, which makes people feel the joy of xx everywhere and feel immersive when reading it.
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22. The content is as dry as dead leaves in autumn. How can anyone want to read it? Read more extracurricular books to ensure that the dead leaves turn green again next spring.
23. With the help of rich imagination, the article uses rhetorical devices such as personification metaphor to portray, making the language fluent and beautiful and the article vivid.
24. All the colors are beautiful and full of vitality. Between the lines, through the appearance of xx in spring, summer, autumn and winter, the author expresses his love for xx's childhood survival.
25. The article reveals the love for xx between the lines, and wonderfully uses the dynamic stereoscopic perception, which makes xx melt into the fourth order of that year. As time goes on, it shows movement and vitality. There are also some young authors who are constantly exploring the unknown, eager for knowledge and loving their motherland, which makes every reader very happy.
26. You are like a little painter, painting the beautiful scenery of your xx one by one. The fourth order is different and the scenery is different. The short pen and ink circulation has exposed your love for xx and achieved a harmonious scene. Great!
27. Your composition and scenery are in harmony, and between the lines is your love for xx. Finally, express your heart and express your main idea: "Love xx, great!" Beautiful language and a large number of rhetorical devices such as personification vividly show the fourth-order landscape of xx.
28. The author wrote about the busyness and enrichment of xx morning and the beautiful scenery of xx morning. At the end, "a year's plan lies in spring, and a day's plan lies in morning." On this beautiful morning, we embarked on the journey of life, which expressed the author's good wish to cherish the good times and take the road of life well.
29. This article is beautifully written and expressive, and it is a beautiful ode to childhood survival. With expressive style, the author vividly describes the four-sequence scenery in the corner of xx, and deeply recalls the wonderful childhood life spent there.
Flying kites is children's favorite activity, and the fun is self-evident. Through detailed description, the colorful take-off scenes of kites in the sky are displayed.
How to write a composition and correct comments 6 1 Your article awakens the sleeping earth like spring thunder, adding new green to a new day ... "
2. "The teacher once told you that as long as you do one thing with your heart, you will succeed. Isn't it? Now you can write a good hand and dare to speak in class because you are quiet and timid. You are happy for your progressive teacher. In the future, carry forward the advantages of being polite and loving labor, study hard and write carefully, then you will achieve better results, and I believe you will do it! "
When you give your "masterpiece"-a beautiful painting to the teacher for appreciation, the teacher is really proud of you. Your mother must be as excited as the teacher! It took you a lot of effort to create this painting, didn't it? I tell you, studying is like painting. As long as we are willing to work hard, we will gain more. "
4. "I understand that Xiao Chang's literary talent is flying, and this exquisite language skill is unmatched by many candidates."
5. At the end of the article, the central sentence is really clear, and the conclusion is short and powerful.
6, with a feeling switch, ending with feeling. In this way, the article is coordinated from beginning to end, and the theme of the article is repeated, which is very infectious.
7. Although it is a trivial matter, it is vividly described by the author, and an indispensable stroke at the end highlights the theme of the article.
8. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing.
9. Focus on expressing emotions at the end, give consideration to the beginning and summarize the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.
10, the vivid description of details reveals the inner world of the characters in a beneficial way, which is success.
1 1. The article ends with …, which is concise and full of charm.
12, the ending is just right and the center is clear. The language is simple and profound, which is thought-provoking.
13, the ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, the words are poor, and the meaning is still unfinished.
14, the poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read and love to read.
15, the praise of the characters at the end is sincere and touching.
16. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching.
17, the end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
18, if there is no whimsy, childhood will not be colorful. It is not only a pleasure, but also a good thing to experience the prestige of commanding others from another angle and the taste of hard work in another way. The language and actions of "Commander" and "Xiao Bing" in the article are both "soldiers" and "childish". The two children are serious enough to be commanders and soldiers, which makes people laugh and admire the vividness described by the author.
19, it's the first time to cook alone, and it's hard to avoid being in a hurry. According to the order of cooking, the author wrote the whole process of rice washing, cooking and cooking in turn. Due to lack of experience, we must be extra careful; The more careful, the more panic. Fortunately, the little author is very smart, and he can use his quick wits at the critical moment to turn the corner. The author grasps the characteristics of cooking for the first time, and there are not many words; But it was written in wavelet. Although the author is in a hurry when cooking, the article can be written very orderly. "
20. You observed it carefully during your autumn outing! Beauty in your eyes is like a painting! If only you could write down your happy mood at that time!
How to write a composition and correct comments 7 1 Writing is like being a man. From your life experience, you can see that you are an enterprising young man. You have your own unique insights and profound understanding of things, which is really commendable.
Primary school students' compositions evaluate environmental protection.
As a casual feeling, your article is quick-thinking and full of wishes. The rich life experience and delicate thoughts and feelings revealed between the lines surprised the teacher. I hope you will make persistent efforts in your future writing and form a landscape of your own!
3, it is really "writing like a god." It seems that you must have read a lot of literary works. The content is so rich that it shows your literary skills. Only by adjusting the materials in a certain logical order will this article be more exciting.
4. This paper chooses a brand-new angle to let your thoughts run freely here, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world, there are always some rules that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".
5. The language is appropriate and romantic, and the context is smooth, showing the image of a bookworm's bosom friend and the affection between "I" and "bosom friend", which is smart and elegant.
6. Writing is like a person, and your article is as simple and open-minded as your person. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term tempering. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching articles in the future study process.
7. Wen Neng Yi Qing. You should not take writing as a burden, but record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate brushwork.
I think this article reflects your heart. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.
9. Although you don't like writing very much, you keep writing like a snail at every step, and never stop writing. Your spirit is really admirable. With your personality, you will definitely break into your own world.
10. Although you can live happily in your own world, the development of society has been globalized, so you should devote yourself to collective life with a brand-new attitude to adapt to the development of society.
1 1, the life of a teenager is always written with many fantastic stories; There are always many magical dreams in the hearts of teenagers. This essay, like a boat full of dreams, is full of the author's innocence, dreams, yearning and just beginning to mature, and sails far away.
12, exquisite and refined handwriting reveals your wisdom. Steady and down-to-earth, is the direction of your writing efforts in the future.
13, you are an independent student, and you don't lack real knowledge. I quite agree with you, but it would be even more icing on the cake if the writing arrangement was more compact.
14, it can be said that your article is full of true feelings. People, failure is inevitable, and it is even more valuable to have the courage to face it. I believe it is gold, and there will always be flashes. I hope you can adjust your mind as soon as possible, and you will find that the sky is bluer.
15, after reading your article, it seems like a stream flowing in front of my eyes, pure and lovely. I hope you can keep this style of writing and express rich connotations in pure language.
16, Jun Xiu's handwriting and clear and neat structure can not help but give people a refreshing feeling, which teachers should really learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?
17, careful conception and profound thinking show that you grew up in the world of writing. There is still a long way to write in the future. I hope you can think hard and keep innovating.
18, caring about life and society is not the privilege of adults. From the book "Protecting Nature", we can see that in your heart, there are not only childlike innocence, books and schools, but also endless concern for social worries. This passage is full of twists and turns, especially the psychological description is very prominent, and the discussion at the end sublimates the theme of the article.
19, reading your article is really a pleasure. The first is the pleasure of thoughts and feelings, which of course comes from the profound and fresh conception of your article. As the saying goes, "Climbing a mountain is full of emotion and watching the sea is full of meaning". You are a conscientious person in life, and you touched others with your true feelings. This is the greatest success of your composition.