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Wulingchun
The wind has stopped the dust, the fragrant flowers have blossomed, and I am tired of combing my hair at night. Things are people, not everything, and tears flow first.
It is said that Shuangxi Spring is still good, and it is also planned to make canoes. I'm afraid the ship can't carry much worry.
Appreciation of words
This poem "Wulingchun" was written by the author after his middle-aged widowed, and it is an ordinary poem in my heart that can never be compared. This word uses the scene of late spring to write the poet's deep depression and sorrow. The whole word is full of sighs, beautiful language, beautiful artistic conception and beautiful scenery. This word inherits the traditional writing and adopts the first-person narrator, which is similar to later plays. With the first-person tone and deep melancholy melody, she created an image of a talented woman wandering in the lonely and desolate ring.
This word is concise and implicit, which shows Li Qingzhao's skill in refining words and making sentences.
Among them, the phrase "the wind and dust make fragrant flowers" is even more extreme: it not only points out the scene of the previous storm, but also draws the charm of falling flowers turning into dust after the rain has cleared; It not only describes the author's depression that she can't go out in rainy days, but also her feelings that she is afraid of spring and hurts her body. It's endless.
This word goes from the outside to the inside, from the outside to the inside, step by step, layer by layer, with the upper part focusing on form and the lower part focusing on heart. "I am tired of combing my hair at night" and "I want to cry first" are descriptions of the external movements and demeanor of the characters. "Comb my hair at night" written here is another state of mind.
At this time, she went south because of Jin people. After several funerals, her like-minded husband Zhao Mingcheng had already passed away and lived alone in Jinhua. What she sees before her eyes is the annual spring scenery. Seeing things and thinking about people, things are different, and she can't help but feel sad and feel that everything is over. Therefore, she gets up early and is lazy to comb. "Tears flow first when you want to talk" is clearly written and profound. Here Li Qingzhao wrote tears, first with "desire for words" as the foreshadowing, and then tears poured down her face. Simple five words, the language seems simple, but the intention is extremely profound, and it suddenly pours out uncontrollable sadness, which is touching.
The second half of the word focuses on excavating inner feelings. First of all, she used three groups of function words: "Wen Shuo", "Yi Shu" and "fear" as an opportunity for ups and downs, which were full of twists and turns and touching. The first sentence "I heard that the spring scenery of Shuangxi is just right" suddenly rose, and the poet just shed tears. But when she heard that the spring scenery of Shuangxi in the suburbs of Jinhua is beautiful and tourists are everywhere, she, a person who usually likes to visit, became interested in traveling and "planned to go boating". Words such as "spring is still good" and "boating" are relaxed and lively, which just shows the poet's momentary joy. The word "Ye Fu" before "boating" is even more graceful and low, indicating that the poet's interest in travel is temporary and not very strong. The word "canoe" laid a good foundation and foil for the following sadness, and the last two sentences "only fear" were followed by a violent ups and downs, which made the feelings extremely deep. Here, the truth of "combing your hair at night" and "tears flow first when you want to talk" mentioned in the first half of the story has also been deeply revealed.
The outstanding feature of the artistic expression of this word is the clever use of various rhetorical devices, especially metaphors. Metaphor is a common phenomenon in poetry; However, it is very difficult to use it in a novel way. Good metaphors often turn spirit into matter and abstract feelings into concrete images, which are innovative and unique. In this poem, Li Qingzhao said, "I'm afraid the ship can't carry much on its mind." It is also an exaggerated metaphor to describe "trouble", but she coined new words herself and used them naturally without trace. We say it is natural and appropriate because it comes from the previous sentence "canoe" and "canoe" comes from "Shuangxi", which is full of feelings and natural, and constitutes a complete artistic conception.
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Appreciation of Wulingchun Ⅱ
The wind has stopped the dust and the fragrant flowers have come out.
Tired of combing my hair at night.
Things are people, not everything,
Tears flow first when you want to talk.
It is said that Shuangxi Spring is still good.
I also plan to canoe Pan.
I'm afraid I'll go boating in Shuangxi,
I can't worry much.
"Romantic love is always blown away by the wind and rain." When the wind is swept away, spring will fade away. Only a wisp of fragrance remains in the muddy petal dust.
"All scenery and words are sentimental" is an unbearable landscape in front of the poet.
The poet is still immersed in sadness, in confusion and in no mood. Why would he be interested? The sun has risen so high that the poet is not in the mood to freshen up.
How did this happen? The scenery is vaguely like the past, but you love each other so much. My dear husband left her and left her alone in the war. The scenery remains the same, and things are different.
How many happy days, how many beautiful memories, drifting with the wind, leaving endless thoughts and endless sadness.
Lost the most precious thing in life, everything in front of me has changed, lost its luster, "everything has fallen", sad! It hurts! Sad! Love your car! Write down all your feelings.
It's hard to arrange the scene, and I can't control myself.
A lonely woman bears such a huge burden alone. How she wished her heart would calm down and her repressed worries would be relieved for a moment.
I heard that the spring scenery of Jinhua Shuangxi is still good and the scenery is pleasant. The poet doesn't want to go boating and relax. However, no matter how beautiful Shuangxi is, the poet just used his head. There is too much sadness in the poet's heart, even if there are thousands of rivers and streams. Is it a boat that can only be carried?
"I'm afraid the ship can't carry much." The poet's sadness has gained weight and texture, and it has become amiable and sensible.
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Appreciation of Wulingchun No.3
Writing background
The creation of every poem or word is inseparable from the specific environment, which directly restricts the style of the poem or word and its content to be reflected.
Li Qingzhao's Wuling Spring was written in Shaoxing, Song Gaozong for five years, that is, 1235. At that time, the nomads from the Southern Song Dynasty faced the situation that the country was ruined and the family was destroyed. Li Qing
Zhao Zhao and his family fled to a place called Jinhua, looking at the bleak environment around them and recalling their tragic past, and wrote this word on the spot.
Li Qingzhao's Ci probably took the change of Jingkang as a watershed, showing two different situations. The former mainly writes about her yearning for her husband Zhao Mingcheng's boudoir works, expressing her longing for her husband's return, while the latter mainly expresses her sadness of wandering alone after her husband's death, and the feeling that Jin people went south to the Northern Song Dynasty and perished. Complementing Quan Yi words and 10 month 1 134 belong to the latter.
2. The content is divided into two parts.
"The wind has lived in fragrant flowers, and combing my hair at night is tiring. Because people don't want to talk about everything, they cry first. "
It belongs to the first film. Emotion is mainly expressed by describing the behavior of the characters. Combing my hair at night shows the author's depressed and boring appearance at that time. The phrase "cry first if you want to talk" is your true emotion. Tears had already flowed down before the words were finished, which shows how painful the author was at that time. The reason for the author's boredom and unspoken tears is that "the wind has stopped the dust and the fragrant flowers have run out" and "things are not exhausted." Spring has passed and the flowers have withered. The fragrance of flowers that can stay in the dust still exists, and the happiness and laughter that used to be a thing of the past. The stones and stone products that my husband Zhao Mingcheng and I used to collect are still neatly placed on the table, and her husband has already gone to another world. This horrible artistic conception can only be remembered by personal experience.
"I heard that the spring scenery in Shuangxi is still good, and I plan to float a canoe. I am afraid that Shuangxi grasshopper boat can't bear much worry."
It belongs to the next movie. Even if the flowers have faded, you can still see the shadow of spring. (Shuangxi, place name, specific location has not been verified. ) The boating festival in Shuangxi is also being held grandly. In a beautiful stream, several boats were playing in the stream, which should have been a happy time, but the author was not interested in enjoying it, and his mind was full of thoughts about her husband and sadness about the broken mountains and rivers. So it caused the author's feeling that "I'm afraid the grasshopper boat in Shuangxi can't bear much worry" is the most ingenious sentence in the whole word. Turn the intangible into the tangible, and turn the static into the dynamic. It's not that the ship can't move, it's the author's sorrow. Just answer that sentence, "I ask you how much you are worried, a stream of smoke, the whole city flying catkins, plum yellow rain."
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Appreciation of Wulingchun No.4
This word was written by the author when he took refuge in Jinhua in his later years, after Jin and puppet troops joined hands to commit crimes in Shaoxing for four years (1 134). At that time, because her husband had passed away, the stones and stone cultural relics collected at home were also lost, and the author was alone, wandering in the war, and experienced a bumpy road and a bumpy life, so his feelings were extremely sad.
In Qing Dynasty, Wu commented on the second volume of Lotus Seeds Living in Ci: "The sadness is deep, which still makes people feel the weight of husband and wife." That's very pertinent.
The first sentence is very delicate with a pen: it just means that the wind blew the flowers away, not from the front, but left the ink on the ending of "the wind stayed" and "the flowers have been used up". The dust is fragrant because of the falling flowers, which shows that the flowers are everywhere, which in turn reflects the fury of the wind. There are three twists and turns in one sentence, which is really ingenious. The writing of the second sentence is slightly similar to "getting up and combing your hair carelessly" in his early poem "The Flute on the Phoenix Terrace", but there are differences in details and depth, so the author tends to use "carelessness" as "fatigue" in choosing words and sentences. Three or four sentences are rare in Yu Shu's ci. The reason why I changed my implicit style is because the surging tide of love has overflowed my heart and I can't contain it, so I have to let it vent freely. Things have changed, which shows that all the good things in her life have been lost, not one left. Although she put a straight book, she has a high degree of generalization. After the movie, the words "smell and talk" were written off, and it was written that I was interested in boating on the two streams and watching the spring scenery, and my spirit seemed to cheer up slightly. However, the word "I'm afraid" has turned back again and again, which has set off deeper sadness. "Trouble" is invisible and intangible, but now the ship can't move, so it can be seen again, and its shape can be imagined. This is the novelty of its conception. In addition, the words "Wen Shuo", "Ye Shu" and "fear absorption" in the next film are also vivid words to reveal the author's inner activities.
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Appreciation of Wulingchun 5:
This is what the poet did when he avoided chaos in Jinhua. She has been through a lot of separation, so her feelings are extremely sad. In the last film, I said that the scenery in front of me was terrible and I was in a terrible mood. The next film further shows the depth of sadness. The whole line is full of the pain of "things are different." Expressed her thoughts about her old country. The idea is novel and the imagination is rich. Through the scenery in late spring, the inner activities are hooked up, and many sorrows are expressed with the artistic image of no sorrow in the boat at the stern. The writing is novel and ingenious, and it is deeply sad, so it is a swan song.
After the demise of the Northern Song Dynasty, Li Qingzhao went south in the first year of Jianyan (1 127), and his hometown Qingzhou fell into the hands of Jin people, and a large number of books and cultural relics hidden at home were burned. After the death of her husband Zhao Mingcheng for three years (1 129), the Jin people invaded the south, and Li Qingzhao went into exile alone to avoid the mutiny. When Shaoxing lived in Jinhua, Zhejiang Province for five years (1 135), he wrote this poem Wuling Chun. At this time, she was 53 years old. She experienced the country's downfall, the fall of her hometown, the loss of cultural relics and the death of her husband. She is in a miserable situation, and her heart is extremely sad. This word reflects her real life fragments and thoughts and feelings.
The first sentence of the last movie, "The flowers are all gone", explains the seasonal characteristics. After the spring breeze shakes, the flowers have scattered, leaving only the fragrance of flowers on the earth, indicating that it has reached the end of spring. Comb my hair in the middle of the night is to express my inner sadness through the fact that it is getting late and the author still has no intention to dress up. The reason and degree of sadness are described as follows: "Things are people, not everything, tears flow first." In spring, flowers bloom and fall year after year, and there is nothing new, but people are very different from before. The country is ruined, and the husband dies. She lost interest in everything. Even if you have the heart to tell your experiences and feelings, you shed tears before you say them, which is more profound than the description of "tears in your eyes". Her sadness is untouchable, not only can't say it, but also can't think about it, and tears will fall when she thinks about it. Here, the author expresses her deep sadness in detail with two external behaviors: "I am tired of combing my hair at night" and "I cry first". In the next film, I took a different approach and wrote: "I heard that Shuangxi Spring is still good, and I plan to go canoeing." It is said that the spring scenery in Shuangxi is not bad, and the poet once had the idea of boating there. She wants to go boating in Shuangxi, not because she longs for beautiful scenery and enjoys traveling, but because she wants to find a place to eliminate her sadness. However, in turn, he denied his plan. "I'm afraid Shuangxi's boat can't carry much sorrow." I am afraid that the grasshopper-like boat in Shuangxi can't bear the heavy sadness in my heart. People always compare sorrow and resentment to continuous running water and weeds that are still alive, but Li Qingzhao has found another new way of thinking, saying: His sorrow is too heavy for a boat to carry. She also used empty words such as "planning" and "fear" to clearly show the level of her ideological activities. The artistic conception and expression techniques like this are really novel and unique, and are praised as "creative and often unexpected" by ci theorists.
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Appreciation 6:
This is a word written by Li Qingzhao when she took refuge in Jinhua. At that time, the country was ruined, her husband was injured, everything was scattered, and she was also displaced and helpless. Therefore, her feelings are very painful.
The first sentence describes what we have seen so far, and the words "the wind stops the smell of dust" express the consequences of a small disaster: the wind destroyed flowers and countless flowers turned red. Flowers are stained with mud, but people still turn to dust when they step on horses, leaving traces, but they smell of dust. These four words are not only implicit, but also expand the capacity, so that the human body can feel the poet's richer and more complicated feelings. The second sentence was written because of what I saw and heard, so I did it. The sun is already high, and my hair has not been combed yet. Although it has the same effect as "getting up and combing your hair" in "Recalling Feng Tai Blowing Xiao", it is all where will you go's sorrow. This is the hate of death, and the scene is extremely different.
Three or four sentences, from implicit to vertical writing, point out all the suffering, and the origin is because things are different. And this change is extensive, remarkable and drastic, and endless pain and sadness are among them. Therefore, the poet summed up his despair with all the rest.
The first two sentences are implicit and the last two sentences are true. Implicit, because this situation has nowhere to sue; The truth rate is that although you know there is nowhere to sue, you still have to sue. So seemingly opposite, they actually complement each other.
The first movie was extremely sad about the scenery and the sad mood, so the next movie started from a distance. Li Qingzhao likes sightseeing very much. Shuangxi is a scenic spot in Jinhua, Zhejiang. She wants to travel to relieve her sadness. But in fact, his pain and sadness are so great that a boating trip can alleviate his pain? Therefore, before swimming, I had expected that I could not bear the heavy ship. The poet's ideas are both novel and true. The next * * * four sentences, the first two sentences open, a turn; After the two sentences are together, it is another round; Instead, the six empty word's are used to convey the spirit. Just imagine that Shuangxi is good in spring, just heard; Going boating was just a "plan", and then "fear" suddenly appeared below, killing the "plan" above. I heard, and I thought about it. What happened? Or sit at home alone and worry.
The writing of this word is novel, natural and appropriate, and there is no suspicion of affectation. Take a boat to carry worries, images are written, and worries are materialized. In terms of layout, the ancients judged it by "sweeping the floor and being born". Sweeping is sweeping, and life is life. Write the end of the previous scene first: the spring scenery has run out, which is caused by wind and fragrance, and it is a profound pain that things are different. The author shows the most moving part here. Due to the limitation of space, lyric poetry can only reflect a representative point or side. In this way, the omitted part can be used as a background to set off the text, thus unexpectedly enhancing the appeal of the text. Lecture for special-grade teachers
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