Correct the shortcomings in the composition

Lack of logic: the shortcomings of this kind of composition are chaotic structure, unclear thinking and lack of organization. Comments can be "the structure of the article is not clear enough and needs better organization and arrangement", or "the thinking is not coherent enough and needs better logic and organization".

Inaccurate language expression: the shortcomings of this composition are that the language expression is not accurate enough and the words are not appropriate enough to understand. Comments can be "words are not accurate enough and need better language expression ability", or "expressions are not clear enough and need better language organization ability".

Lack of depth and thinking: The disadvantage of this composition is that it is simple in content, lacking in depth and thinking, and can't arouse readers' interest and interest. Comments can be "the content is not deep enough and needs better thinking and analysis ability", or "the lack of original opinions and opinions requires better thinking and innovation ability".

Textual errors and grammatical errors: the shortcomings of this composition are manifested in textual errors and grammatical errors, which affect the overall quality and readability of the article. Comments can be "there are a lot of textual errors and grammatical errors in the article, which requires better language foundation and writing skills" or "better language cultivation and writing norms are needed"

Lack of examples and evidence support: The disadvantage of this composition is that it lacks examples and evidence support and cannot prove the author's views and arguments. Comments can be "need more examples and evidence to prove the author's views and arguments", or "lack of enough examples and evidence, need better research and analysis ability".