The company asked me to write a poem reciting various departments of the company. Please help me revise it~~Thank you~~If you answer well, you will get extra points~~

If an enterprise is a person’s body

Then the general manager is the brain

Your nerves penetrate into every corner of the body

Every perception is controlled by you

If the enterprise is a person's body

Then the production department is the central nervous system

Every production order of yours It will be related to the rise of the enterprise

If the enterprise is a person's body

Then the supply department is the mouth

All the nutrients we need come from you There

If the company is a person's body

Then the finance department is the stomach

Responsible for digesting all the food, you maintain the lifeblood of the company

If the company is a person's body

Then the general department is the hand

Touch and care about the life of every employee, you are so gentle and meticulous

If the enterprise is a person's body

Then the sales department is the breast

It is you who have nurtured the children of the whole factory with your sweet milk

If An enterprise is a person's body

Then the quality control department is a kidney

Use your unyielding iron mesh to filter out all defects

If an enterprise is a The human body

Then all our employees are the cells that make up the body

As long as we work together to advance and grow together

Our enterprise will Will continue to grow, prosper, and rise bravely