The voice of prosperity fled into an empty door and destroyed the dream of the world. It has turned over a lifetime of love debts and your default life and death rings.
Appreciation: modify "withered" with "equal" to highlight the haggard in the empty door; Comparing the withered tree to the annual rings is very vivid, which makes the withered tree sadder.
How many floors has the pagoda broken? Whose soul was hurt, went straight to the gate where a broken lamp collapsed. Let me wait for history to turn around, for the wine to be mellow, and for you to play a guzheng.
Appreciation: these people are so tragic and poetic, as if history can turn around for them and go back to the past. When the spirit of Iraq is still there, the wine will be mellow and I will wait for you to play the guzheng. This is so sad, regrettable and unforgettable in the face of this irreversible time, which is implicit and intriguing.
There is heavy rain and deep vegetation in my hometown. I heard that you are always alone. The mottled city gate is full of old roots, and the echo on the slate is waiting.
Appreciation: the sound of rain beating on the slate is intended to "wait", which makes people hear and feel; At the same time, it actually expresses the mood of "you", which is implicit and profound.
A thousand years later, who is waiting?
Appreciation: A question is memorable. All the feelings in this world together, I know that "you" will still wait for me, and only "you" will wait for me.