Wang Xilian: General Comment on the Owner of Flower Protection
The Story of the Stone consists of 120 chapters, divided into 2 1 paragraphs, so that we can know the structural level. The first time is a passage about the origin of writing, such as the beginning of making art and the wedge of legend. The second time is the second section, in which the family background of Xu Ning and the two families, as well as the kinship of Lin, Zhen, Wang and Shi, such as the stock rise in art, are meaningful only by pointing out the eyebrows. Three or four times is three paragraphs, which tells the reason why Baochai, Daiyu and Baoyu are together. The fourth paragraph of the Five Dynasties is the procedure of The Story of the Stone. Six to sixteen times is five paragraphs, which is the beginning of Qin's murder. According to the sixth time, after the old man entered the mansion, he should have told the story of the mansion immediately, but he turned to Ning, winning glory slightly. Jia Fu's defeat began in Ning. Qin is the first of the fornication in Ningfu. Although Xifeng was in Fu Rong, her tactics actually began in Ningfu, which caused Fu Rong's conviction in the future. Let me describe it in detail first. From the 17th to the 24th, Princess Sumun and Baoyu moved to the Grand View Garden, which was the heyday of Fu Rong. Twenty-five to thirty-two times is seven times. This is the first time that Baoyu was killed by Yan. Although he met two true gods, he was fascinated by lust and evil, causing endless right and wrong. Thirty-three to thirty-eight times is eight times. This is the second time that Baoyu has been exhausted by several people. Although strict father lambasted him, he was infatuated and went on a business trip with Jia Zheng, which made him more relaxed. Thirty-nine times and forty-four times are nine times. Mrs. Liu and Wang Xifeng won the favor of grandma. Forty-five to fifty-two times is ten paragraphs. When poetry and painting are pleasing to the eye, suddenly the autumn window is stormy and the snow is cold. In the affectionate abuse, the words are ruthless and unpredictable, suggesting that Thai Taiji will be rejected and prosperous. Fifty-three times to fifty-six times, the eleventh period, Xu Ning and Rong Er had a family dinner at the shrine, and the Grand View Garden was reorganized in the spring, which was a new time. Article 12 refers to the first half of articles 57 to 63. It is written that there are many people in the garden and there are many troubles. The so-called prosperity has both advantages and disadvantages. The thirteenth paragraph, from the second half of sixty-three to sixty-nine, tells the story of Jia Jing and Jia Lian's indulgence and Xifeng's malice, and ends the case-solving of You Erjie and You Sanjie. The fourteenth paragraph is from seventy to seventy-eight. There was a storm in the Grand View Garden, and the ancestors of Jia ancestral hall lamented that it was a sign of peace and glory. The fifteenth paragraph is from seventy-nine to eighty-five. Xu broke off his marriage and married Yingchun by mistake. Baoyu went home to school and became enemies with Jia Huan. Later, he sold things. In the sixteenth paragraph, from eighty-six to ninety-three, it is written that the shrew of the Xue family and the bandits of the Jia family are all called the disaster of losing their homes. The return from ninety-four to ninety-eight is the seventeenth paragraph, which is a fairy tale. The psychic lost, Princess Yuan died and Daiyu died young, which is a symbol of the end of fate. Ninety-nine times and one hundred and thirty times are eighteen times. The Grand View Garden is scattered and Jia Guan is dirty. The case is settled. The nineteenth paragraph, from 140 to 112, describes the complete failure and wonderful jade ending of Ning and Rong. Back to 113 to 119 is the twentieth time, ending the things of Xifeng, Baoyu, Xichun, Ning and Rong. -one hundred and twenty times is the twenty-first paragraph, which summarizes the ins and outs of the Story of the Stone. So are the large paragraphs in this book. As for the small paragraphs in the big paragraphs, or telling other things, or tracing the past, or ambushing the later article, or taking care of the previous article, they are prone to misfortune, good fortune and bad fortune, and the changes are complicated, such as threading, such as moving the ball, not messing up, and not making rough comments, all of which are carefully approved in each time.
In the book "The Story of the Stone", the most important thing is the word "true and false". Readers should know that there is truth and falsehood, and falsehood is truth; There is falsehood in truth and truth in falsehood; It's not true, it's not fake. Knowing this number means that Zhen Baoyu and Jia Baoyu are one and two, and they will be clear-headed and know the author's ingenuity without catching a cold.
Although the Story of the Stone is about the ups and downs of the Jia family, it is actually written for Baoyu, Daiyu and Baochai. As far as Jia and Xue are concerned, Jia's family is the main one and Xue's family is the guest. As far as Ningfu and Fu Rong are concerned, Fu Rong is the master and Ningfu is the guest. As far as Guo Rong is concerned, Shiyu, Daiyu and Baochai are the main three, and the rest are guests. As far as Baoyu, Daiyu and Baochai are concerned, Baoyu is the main one, and Chai and Dai are the guests. Tell Chai and Dai Lai that Daiyu is the host and Baochai is the host and guest. Deputy book Xiangling, a guest in the guest; Attacking people in teaching AIDS, etc. , can't sit down. Readers must be clear.
Zhen He, as the people described in the book, may be written in an empty space, but they are not real people, just used to describe ups and downs and alert their obsession. The old gentleman is a man to the core, and he is a man who has nothing to do with it. Gaiquanshu is a village story, and there must be a village story running through it. So this person is used at the beginning and end. Therefore, if the famous old man Mr. Liu's family fortune declines, his beloved son's wife, beautiful maid and singer, relatives and friends, guests and guests, rich slaves and servants will all disappear, but the old woman will be left to pack the chess pieces. Things are different, words are sour, and the listener is chilling.
The Story of the Stone focuses on the rise and fall of Ningfu and Rongfu. Because Xue Baochai is Baoyu's match, the family relationship is closer and the fate is the same, so Xue Pan's family affairs are also described in detail.
It's never a legendary novel, and there are many words in the dream. For example, the dream of Caoqiao in The West Chamber and the nightmare of the hero in The Water Margin are all dreams. Rebirth died in a dream and came back from the dead. The Story of the Purple Hairpin looks similar, but the situation is completely different. Conan and Handan, the careers of fame and fortune, are all in their dreams, each with its own advantages and disadvantages. The Story of Stone is also about dreams, but the idea and practice are completely new. Before and after the two big dreams, they all went to the dreamland. One is a real dream, although reading and listening to songs, but at a loss; First, fugue, destiny takes a hand's fate, clearly remember. However, half of Zhen's dreams are dreamland, Jiang's dreams are vague, Wang Zhenbao dreams and changes her mind, and Lin Daiyu dreams and becomes more and more infatuated. Liu Xianglian woke up and became a monk. Xiangling dreamed of writing poetry. Baoyu's dream combined Zhen Baoyu's dream of Miaoyu and Xiaohong's infatuation. Especially, Margo's dream sister advised to behead a jealous woman, and Wang Fengjie's dream robbed a brocade horse. Baoyu's dream was a ghost, an attacking dream, and Baoyu's dreams were dreamless. It is different from other novels about dreams. A scholar's mind is incredible.
The book "The Story of the Stone" has positive pen, reverse pen, lining pen, borrowing pen, clear pen, hidden pen, foreshadowing pen, caring pen, colored pen and light pen. All kinds of brushwork, everything.
In a book, Momo wrote poems and songs, artistic letters, operas, couplets, riddles and storytelling jokes, all of which are excellent works. Skills include piano, chess, calligraphy and painting, medical astrology, and crafts, planting flowers and fruits, raising birds and cooking with needles. There are evil characters, chastity and stubbornness, virtue and heroism, strength and cowardice. The female generals, foreign poets, immortals and ghosts, nuns, prostitutes, slave servants, thieves and demons, drunkards and rogues of the previous generation all have colors; These deeds are prosperous banquets, extravagant and profane, honest and upright, court ceremonies, ups and downs celebrations, prison sentences, satirical altars, trade drilling, and everything is complete; Even at the end of his life, he died suddenly, accidentally, committed suicide, jumped into a river and jumped into a well, was forced to hang a beam, swallow gold, take poison, and smashed the steps to remove sperm. It can be described as all-encompassing, all-encompassing, which is invisible in other novels.
There are a lot of words in the book that are blurted out, or a few words don't say one or two words, or a few words don't say two or three words, and then the words are swallowed. Among them, there may be taboos and they cannot bear to export; There may be something hidden, which is not convenient to explain clearly, so it is best to swallow it with abbreviated grammar.
The four words of happiness, longevity, talent and virtue are the most difficult to be complete in life. There is only one Jia in Ningrongfu, and his longevity is long. Although I can't know his deeds of managing the family as a teenager, I heard from his last words that "my heart is really bitter", which is kind and honest, and my virtue can be seen; It can be seen that gambling is strictly investigated, the disadvantages are well understood, and the rest are scattered and in good order. In addition, if a man is Jia Jing, Jia She has no virtue and no talent, Jia Zheng has virtue and no talent, Jia Lian has little talent and no talent, Jia Zhen has no virtue and no talent, Jia Huan has no opinion, and Baoyu's virtue is another kind, which will not help his career. Women, Mrs. Xing and Mrs. You, have no virtue and no talent. Although Mrs. Wang seems to be virtuous, she is easily confused. If she is not real, she is mediocre. To the twelfth golden hairpin: Wang Fengjie has no virtue and no talent, so his talent is not right; In the spring, morality was consolidated, but life was neither eternal nor blessed soon. Yingchun is incompetent and not virtuous; Tanchun is talented, but virtue is not beautiful; Cherish spring is remote, non-talent and non-virtue; Daiyu is infatuated, narrow-minded, virtuous and not beautiful, only talented in writing and ink; Baochai is virtuous and talented. Although her life is unknown, she is very independent. Miaoyu is almost grotesque, so it is trapped in thieves; Shi Xiangyun is broad-minded and first-class, not serious and virtuous; Qiaojie is just plain; Qin Xu's theory: None is a longevity device. These twelve golden hairpin are all transferred to the unlucky department.
The book Stone is full of dreams, and I hereby approve it. It's really love love love, which is even more ridiculous. However, in the three thousand worlds, from ancient times to the present, where is the dream and whose dream is it? People who see dreams may also dream in dreams.
Wang Xilian: Errors in A Dream of Red Mansions
A Dream of Red Mansions has a delicate structure and complex transformation. This is about perfection. Apart from The Water Margin, Romance of the Three Kingdoms, The Journey to the West and Jin Ping Mei, there is no other novel like it. But after careful reading, there are also some mistakes and unsatisfactory places. The pocket I see is square, and it is impossible to correct it whether it is original by the author or not. From what I have seen, pick out a few articles of good quality. Not afraid to loose orpiment, but still holding the meaning of asking questions:
The second time, Leng Zixing dictated that Jia She had two sons, the second Jia Lian. The name of his eldest son, whether he died young or not, has never been said, as if it were a leak.
Twelve times, it was said that Lin Ruhai was seriously ill at the end of winter, and she wrote a book to pick up Lin Daiyu, and the grandmother asked Jia Lian to send it. The fourteenth time Jia Lian sent Zhao Er back to deliver a letter, saying that Hai died on September 3, and Mr. Zhong and Miss Lin sent Ling to Suzhou and came back at the end of the year, asking for heavy hair clothes and other languages. If Lin Ruhai died in early September, writing a book to pick up Daiyu should be in July and August, not later than the end of winter. Besides, Jia Lian got up from Beijing at the end of winter, so he should take heavy hair clothes with him at any time. Why send someone to pick them up? At the end of the year, I will leave Beijing for Yang and send the spirit to Sue. How to return at the end of the year? I said there seems to be a contradiction.
Shi Xiangyun was listed among the twelve golden ladies, and later lived in Daguan Garden for a long time and joined the choir. He is bold and straightforward, with a different style. When you first enter Ningrongfu, you should also explain your background and attitude. I didn't mention it before the twelfth time. Until the thirteenth time, when Qin went to the funeral, Mrs. Xu Zhongjing and Hou came to offer their condolences, and suddenly Shi Xiangyun rushed out. I don't know when to go to Ningfu first. Sudden, rootless. I'm afraid there is a mistake, not the author's original creation.
The17th Grand View Garden Project has been completed, and Longcui Temple has been enclosed in the garden. As for when it was built, who inscribed it, when Miaoyu entered the temple, and how she met with Jia Mu, I won't check it in detail.
When Yuan Fei saw the Buddhist temples around the mountain for the eighteenth time, she went into the temple to burn incense. Naturally, it was a sacred temple. If Wei Shimiao has entered the Jade Temple, how dare she not go to see Yuan Fei? It seems that the suppression system has not yet entered the temple, or has temporarily avoided it.
Aroma went to Baochai for thirty times, and Baochai came back at the second watch without saying a word, just like not seeing Baochai, as if she had lost a word.
Thirty-six times, xiren embroidered Baoyu's abdomen. Here comes Baochai, loving her fresh life. Xiren accidentally embroidered two or three petals for her when she went out. The literary atmosphere is solid and charming, but the female workers embroider, the big ones are elongated, and the small ones are stabbed with their hands. It must be all embroidered inside, so that the reverse needle will not be exposed. Today, the belly is covered with white silk and red lining, but both sides are made, like embroidery at the back, which is not suitable.
Baoyu heard Daiyu talking in the courtyard thirty-five times and called for help. After all, whether she invited Daiyu or not, Daiyu has already gone back. She has nothing to do with the affair of Thirty-six times, which seems to be a mistake.
Fifty-three times, last year, the old lady celebrated the Lantern Festival and asked her to do riddles. She didn't mention it, as if she didn't care.
Fifty-eight times, women in Liyuan were assigned to each room, which seemed to have loopholes in drawing whether strong and small officials were dead or alive.
Sixty-three Pinger returned to the banquet, and You Shi came with Pei Feng and Kai Luan. He was working in the garden in autumn when he reported Jia Jing's sudden death. You's busy taking Larson out of town by car. Peifeng and Kailuan didn't go home early, so they felt a little careless.
You Sanjie committed suicide. After your mother's funeral, she didn't come home She should still live with your second sister. Wang Fengjie went to Second Sister You's home sixty-eight times, but she didn't see You Laoniang. When Sister You entered the garden, the mother and daughter did not meet each other. This is an oversight.
Sixty-nine times, second sister, you swallow gold. Since the cloud people don't know, the ghost feels it. How do you know she died of swallowing gold? When Jia Lian saw the body, he didn't tell the trace of swallowing gold, which seemed to be an omission.
Seventy-three times Jia Zheng went back to Beijing on business. On the first day, Jane, Lian and Baoyu came out to meet them and went home to wait on them. I went to tell Lady Jia and Lady Wang first, and met him at the door the next day. Why did Jia Zheng stay in Grandmother Jia's room until the maid rushed to find him, and Baoyu began to change clothes? The narrative here is a loss of care.
As early as 1977, Qingwen was forced to be critically ill, and Baoyu visited her privately. Qingwen gave Baoyu nails and a small coat. This is the night when Baoyu returned to the garden. When he was sleeping, Aroma never saw the red coat again. Baoyu will explain and ask him to collect it. But it is not said, and it is actually missing.
It is said that in 83, Xia Jingui drove Xue Fan away. Although there is a saying that "Xue Fan went out to take shelter" in "Eighty Back", it seems that he got temporary shelter and went home immediately. If you don't come back for many days, why doesn't Aunt Xue Baochai ask someone to look for it and listen for a long time? Today, Jingui and Baochan are quarreling, but Xue Pan seems to have not been home for a long time, so he is not very attentive.
The 112 taels of silver left by Grandma Jia was still in the building, so it was stolen. Did Yuanyang know before she died? For the 111th time, Yuanyang asked Feng if she had made any money. There seems to be not many bamboo shoots here. Although Lin Daiyu is a fairy grass, she is narrow-minded and infatuated, so that she has raised her age. That is, back to the original, back to the Yuan Dynasty, it should still be immortal grass, just like Baoyu's stone, which is its true colors. As for his lust before his death, he should not be extraordinary and holy, but should be the goddess of the upper world. It's for Princess Xiaoxiang, but because of the museum where she lives and because she is good at crying, it's called the poetry club. Besides, the word "concubine" does not mean "boudoir", so there is no need to sit down and do it.
Back to one hundred and sixteen, Baoyu wandered in a dreamland, as if in a trance with You Sanjie and others. He seemed to see something different and led to Cao Xian, where he saw the breeze blowing and swaying. And the immortal tells the karma, and it can be settled. After the curtain is over, please ask the waiter to send back a paragraph. If you think it is superfluous, it is superfluous to add it. Please ensure the quality if there are any abridgements.
Baoyu disappeared 119 times, and the next day Aunt Xue, Aunt Xue, Shi Xiangyun, Baoqin and Aunt Li all came to offer their condolences, except Xing Xiuyan. Richie should get married. Xing Xiuyan and Baochai are sisters-in-law. Baochai has been very good, but she didn't come, and finally she felt careless.