It was a hot summer day and I looked out of the window. One thing touched me deeply.
The thing is this: I was sitting at home watching TV when suddenly there was a quick cry outside the window, and I couldn't help looking out of the window. It turns out that in a bird's nest, there are a group of birds singing, which are chicks who have not learned to fly. At this time, I found a snake crawling slowly towards them. The birds were frightened and made unnecessary resistance, but the snake completely ignored it.
Just then, the mother bird looking for food flew back and found that the snake had climbed into the nest. I spit out the food in my mouth at once, but it was too late, because the snake had swallowed a chick, and the mother bird launched a fierce attack at first sight, but the snake was not easy to provoke because it was raising a child. Look at the difference between birds and snakes. In this way, the bird has no chance of winning at all.
But the mother bird has been pecking at the snake's abdomen, and the snake is not to be outdone. It has been barking and craning its neck to scare it from time to time. Mother bird doesn't know what to do, and she is not afraid of death. She attacks like a desperate person. Finally, the snake was tired and had no intention of fighting with the mother bird again, and wanted to slip away. Mother bird should have let it go, but she was desperately chasing it. The snake pecked around and accidentally fell from the tree. Female bird
At this time, the snake became angry and used its own "killer"-spraying venom. The battle has become fierce, and the mother bird risked her life to peck the snake. Finally, the snake was pecked to death, and its body was covered with small holes pecked out by the mother bird. The mother bird flew to the branch and stood for a while, then flew away with another chick.
This is a struggle between animals, and it is also a "family defense war" for mother bird. In order to protect the child, in order to avenge the child, she can even give up her life. This let me see the greatness of maternal love. No matter how fierce the enemy is, she will eventually shrink back in front of maternal love.
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This narrative prose has sincere feelings and vivid description. The topic of "thrilling struggle outside the window" aroused readers' interest in reading. The author elaborates the struggle between birds and snakes and draws a profound conclusion: this is a struggle between animals, and it is also a "family defense" of a mother bird. In order to protect the child, in order to avenge the child, she can even give up her life. This let me see the greatness of maternal love. No matter how fierce the enemy is, she will eventually shrink back in front of maternal love. The feelings finally sublimated.
Birds want to fly, but feel sorry for their broken wings, with a hesitant face; Bamboo dream regrets that it was full of emptiness; The grass should be fragrant, but it complains about the small growth, and I am confused all my life ... Yes, give me a pair of wings.
The wind, cold as blood, stands with a long back in the sunset, with a sad haggard.
Love hurts and leaves since ancient times. Spring is the same, people are empty, and tears are red and sad. Lu you just looked at the distant Tang Wan figure, and unspeakable sadness welled up in my mind.
Twenty years ago, Lu You made peace with his cousin. They followed Qi Mei's example and they hit it off. Such a talented person and such a beautiful child should be made for each other.
Unfortunately, Lu You's mother is not satisfied with this beautiful and exquisite daughter-in-law. In order not to let his son indulge in beauty and neglect his studies, and also to prevent his son from marrying his daughter-in-law and forgetting his mother because Tang Wan was too good, Liu Mu couldn't help feeling sick and forced Lu You to take Wang away, and Tang Wan remarried. Loving couples disappear in an instant.
After a lapse of 20 years, they met again in Shenyuan, which is really fate. "Time was long before I met her, but after parting, the east wind started and a hundred flowers blossomed." Lu You's heart was like a broken spider web, shivering in the air and falling. At this time, how he wishes to have a pair of wings. He left the secular society with Tang Wan. They used to watch the autumn moon spring breeze in Zhu Jiang, and then they lived in seclusion in the countryside.
But after all, it is a knot that can never be blown open by the wind in my heart. "When the sun sets, heartbroken people are at the end of the world." He sat quietly, his face was covered with fine dust, and I couldn't see a trace of expression. I think, at this moment, his heart has gone with the wind, but all he sees is tears. It is strange that his heart has no fingers. It can't catch anything and can't let go. Alas, wrong! No! No! Mo! Mo! Mo!
Lu you howled in the sky, and his anger was sad and unspeakable. He obviously longs for a pair of wings.
Love is a thing of the past, but it lasts forever. I seem to see Lu You, a young poet, rushing to finish his book, throwing his hair away, and he was deeply grieved and sobbing. I seem to see Tang Wan, a talented and tender poetess, gazing lovingly at Lu You with beautiful and sad eyes and reciting his bloody lyrics word by word. ...
"Yellow flowers everywhere, like blood setting sun", everywhere is a sad scene; "The sky is wild", but my heart is still empty; "But since the water is still flowing, although we cut it with the sword, what is even sadder is worrying about the cup", which cannot be released ... Yes, give me a pair of wings!
There are 3 mistakes in the 600-word composition of the senior high school entrance examination 1. Don't pay attention to keywords when reviewing questions.
Ada, a Chinese teacher at Beijing Foreign Studies University No.8 Middle School, believes that in recent years, quite a few candidates have found that they don't pay attention to key words when examining questions, so it is difficult to grasp the key points when writing, and it is easy to digress. If the motivation comes from the key words of this composition question, candidates can only write good articles if they concentrate. Many candidates have no awareness of examining questions and grasping keywords, so they start writing at a glance. Some candidates recite some model essays before the exam and put them in the examination room as soon as they arrive. If you don't carefully examine the questions, it's easiest to write a thousand words, which digress from Wan Li. Junior three students should form the habit of examining questions, read the questions carefully word by word, and understand the requirements of the questions before writing.
Gao Chao, a teacher in the middle school attached to Beijing Normal University, reminds candidates to pay attention to the genre and wording requirements of the article when examining the topic, and see what genre the topic requires to write. The number of words cannot exceed or be less than the required number of words.
Mistake 2: Lack of language and literary talent
Ada said that some junior high school students can't write lyrical comments and have no rational thinking language, so it is difficult to get high marks for such compositions. Candidates should pay attention to the accumulation of language materials. On the one hand, you can read more famous articles and other people's words, so that you can refer to them when writing related articles; On the other hand, students in Grade Three can pay more attention to the excellent articles of their peers, communicate with their classmates and learn from each other. Usually, candidates can take time out to read some newspapers and magazines, such as Readers, and each issue has many articles about affection and inspiration, which is very helpful for the accumulation of composition materials. In addition, students in grade three should pay attention to the accumulation of ancient poetry, and proper use of ancient poetry in the article is also a good way to add a lot of color to the article.
Error 3. This article is bland and lacks details.
Some articles written by candidates have no details and no key points, which are as vast as keeping a running account. Junior three students should have two scissors when writing, one to cut off one thing they are best at and the other to cut off the part that should be described emphatically. For example, when writing about running, how to gather in the morning and how to prepare can be omitted, but how nervous you are when the starting gun goes off and the problems encountered during running need to be described in detail. Only articles with details can have true feelings and impress people. Generally speaking, it is enough for an article to grasp two wonderful details, which requires candidates to practice more at ordinary times.
Life is powerful, but at the same time, it is also fragile; Time is short, but at the same time, it is also very long. -inscription
Look at me, I'm spreading flowers, which have spread all over the mountains and plains. I can't help sighing the greatness of life. I think of sowing. I swear to take good care of it. I persisted for three days, regardless of it for a whole year. I didn't expect to see such a beautiful scenery. I wouldn't have believed it if I hadn't seen the brand "Zhuang Zhuang" I hung for it. It not only survived tenaciously, but also survived.
I have been in this world for more than 14 years, more than 5000 days, neither long nor short. From learning English to writing now, from being ignorant to being full of poetry books, it can be said that time has given me a lot, but it has also taken away a lot. My lovely childhood is long gone. As I grow up, I have lost my last heart. My white heart has already been filled with all kinds of pressure troubles, leaving only a small piece of pure white that will be filled at any time.
Although life is so great, there are times when it is fragile. When there is another drought, flowers everywhere wither and die. Although I water it and fertilize it every day, it still can't hold on. I can only pray that it will surprise me again next spring. Maybe people are similar to these plants, and sometimes they can't stand it, but there is a difference in any position. They can hold on and don't have to wait for the next spring.
Living in this world for more than 5000 days has touched me a lot, but I always feel that many touching stories are conveying a message that life is great and fragile; Time is short and long. I also have to sigh that life is very powerful, sometimes strong and sometimes weak, sometimes short, sometimes great and sometimes small; And time is even more wonderful, short and long. It makes you lose at the same time, but it must give you more than deprive you. Not selfless, but not stingy at all.
So that sentence, let me cherish life, but also let me cherish time.
Listening to the 600-word composition for the senior high school entrance examination, what light footsteps, what gentle wind, and what lively birds are singing.
You see, the girl in spring is striding lightly, wicker and flowers are dancing in the soft wind, and birds are passing on spring gifts to each other.
The rain doll rushed to the earth, floating on the leaves, nourishing everything, and floating in my heart, warming my heart. No umbrella, no raincoat, no? Li thinks the pride of the spring rain is as expensive as oil.
Looking at everything in the rain, I can't help being intoxicated: endless green fields, hundreds of flowers, moist and fragrant air. A sharp and crisp spring thunder woke me up. Only then did I find that the rain had soaked me through, and the rain was dripping down my hair. You can't find me in the rain in an instant.
After a while, Mother Earth woke up and talked to her daughter. The grass took the opportunity to drill out of the ground and talk to the flowers; Dashan also woke up and talked to Grandpa Dashu.
At this time, I can't resist the temptation of sweet and refreshing air and appear in front of you again. At this time, all I feel in my heart is suddenly enlightened and full of hope for the future. The snow-white face washed by rain, because of a few rays of sunshine, looks white and red, moist and bright. Running in the soft wheat field, afraid to sit down, can only accelerate, why? Although I like her bright green, I don't want her wet green to wet my pants. After all, there is a hint of coolness in this fragrant air. But what can I do! It doesn't matter, the pants are wet, isn't there still sun? As a result, my pace is faster, and I seem to be running farther to find that incredible spring.
Some people say that spring is the seed of green and the daughter of the earth; It is also said that spring is information, hope, life and the shining flame of the earth.
Yes, spring is full of vitality, but in the writer's pen and the painter's drawing board, spring is more vivid. People praise the daughter of the earth, her selfless dedication and spotless green spirit. Yes, how much life she gave the earth and how much glory she added to it.
Spring is coming, have you caught it?
Du Fu is a leading figure in the history of ancient poetry in China. His poems have been circulated for a long time and are deeply loved by people so far. Therefore, he lived in a thatched cottage for a long time and naturally became a world-famous tourist attraction. Visiting the thatched cottage in the Mid-Autumn Festival is not as touching as the ancients' praise of thatched cottage, but it is also nostalgic.
Walking into the thatched cottage, I saw only a few tourists, and a quiet and solemn atmosphere: ancient trees towering, pine and cypress fragrant, beautiful beads lush, fragrant grass fragrant. Green world, green ocean. "Osmanthus fragrans is full of fragrance and intoxicating." In this green wave, there is an antique quadrangle, which is the temple of the Ministry of Industry. "Walking into a heavy door, face to face is a hall, solemn and solemn." On the plaque above the temple gate, the workers wrote three shrines, which sealed the building department. On the left and right sides of the door, there is a couplet: Jinjiang Spring Breeze has occupied the public, but the thatched cottage people say I have come back. "When I entered the temple, I saw a statue of Du Fu in the temple. He was beautifully dressed, sitting in danger, and his eyes were bright, showing the noble quality of the poet's concern for the country and the people." On both sides of the statue of Du Fu are the statues of Huang Tingjian and Lu You. "There is a stone tablet on each side of the statue to introduce Du Fu's life. There is an exhibition room outside the ancestral home of the Ministry of Industry, which displays the translations of Du Fu's poems and many foreign translations. " Singing these famous sentences of Du Fu is very touching. Du Fu's poem "God Bear" reflects a complex and turbulent era with sincere and profound feelings and solemn and simple language. Du Fu's famous work "The Wine in Ancient Zhumen stinks and the road is frozen" profoundly reproduces the real situation of sharp social contradictions at that time. Man, his poems are called the history of poetry, and it is meaningful for him to call them hymns.
Walk out of the business hall and pass by Meiyuan. You can see a green grass pavilion. Crimson columns and deep pavilions are simple, natural and elegant. A huge stone tablet stands in the grass pavilion, engraved with four characters of Shaoling Caotang. It is powerful, not only a historical relic, but also a precious calligraphy treasure.
Farewell to the thatched cottage and look back, people have infinite reverie. Du Fu Caotang has been praised by the world for thousands of years. Tourists are not only because of its pleasant scenery, but also because of people's infinite respect for poetic saints.
The idea of writing 600 words in the senior high school entrance examination is to comprehensively consider this composition in your mind according to the topic or materials and requirements. Cao Zhi's Seven-step Poem makes the world exclaim as a wizard. Zuo Si wrote Sandu Fu for ten years, so that Luoyang's paper is expensive, and his kung fu is all in mind. Then, how should candidates use flexible thinking to create a new situation of composition conception in the examination room?
First, the angle should be "alive". "Looking at the mountain side into a peak, the distance is different." This shows a truth: for the same thing, we will have different visual effects when we observe it from different angles. In other words, the more writing angles that ordinary people can't think of, the more wonderful they are. When conceiving a composition in the examination room, candidates will often get unexpected results if they can cut into life and express life from an angle that ordinary people can't easily think of.
Second, order should be "alive". "The text looks like a mountain, not like peace." Clever conception is also reflected in the design of the plot. The plot of the article must have a climax. Without climax, the plot has no ups and downs, and it is difficult to attract readers. The climax of the plot needs organization and bedding. What will pave the way? It is necessary to create a strong suspense and prepare for the climax. Just like a river is blocked in the middle, more energy will be accumulated in the upstream of the dam, so that a more spectacular scene will be formed when the gate is opened, and the expected effect will be achieved.
Third, the way to "live". Rebound pipa and reverse thinking will often make your article find a new way to shine. The article focuses on "negative", with "positive" as the contrast, and "negative" as the "positive", which is thought-provoking and refreshing. If everyone narrates in the third person, you might as well narrate in the first person or even the second person; If everyone focuses on descriptive language, you might as well focus on descriptive language, and so on.
Fourth, the structure should be "alive". The structure of the article should be flexible, tortuous and winding. Among many methods, "inhibition method" is particularly common, and candidates try it every time. When using it, they either want to publicize the writing object first, or they want to publicize it first, and then suddenly turn around, which surprised the readers and made the article receive ups and downs. The "suspense method" is even more surprising. The method of forming an article suspense is generally "hanging-cushion hanging-hanging".
Hey, I quarreled with my mother again last night, and I began to find that understanding is the most important thing!
Just the night before yesterday, my mother turned her eyes to my brother's room for fear of waking him up. At that time, I was fascinated by a book. I didn't know she came to my room with an evil hair dryer. No, it's already done evil. Woo-hoo-it sometimes gives a demonic howl, sometimes growls like a tiger, and rises endlessly here like a nasty steam engine. The sound almost broke my eardrum. I started pushing my mom, but I couldn't. I called her. She pretended not to. My mother is angry, by the way, angry lion. Finally, my father, the people's mediator, came to the stage to solve this "war" and said that my mother should also ask my advice and tell me why I want to blow my hair in the room. And let me understand my mother and give her advice first, instead of pushing her rudely at once. Finally, I handed the hair dryer, and my mother moved to the living room to bring meow back to life.
In fact, our family not only lacks understanding in disputes, but also gives me a feeling in daily life-very lack of understanding. For example, no one talks when eating. In order to increase the relaxed atmosphere, I began to tell jokes about people listening to people laugh (at least I think so), but they didn't respond and began to preach to me that I didn't study hard and didn't eat. I want to bring them happiness, but they are ungrateful, which makes me very depressed! Hey! Understanding is really important! Long live understanding! In fact, if my mother went to the living room to blow her hair, and the air volume was low, she wouldn't bother us, or told me that she was afraid of noisy little brother, and the living room was too hot, so we wouldn't have an argument if she came to my room to rub the air conditioner.
Our family seems to lack everything except knowing such an important thing! I shouted from the bottom of my heart-long live understanding!
Do you believe that sunlight has sound? You may not believe it, but I believe it. I believe that everything has a sound, as long as we listen attentively.
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Have you ever heard the sound of sunshine? In fact, we can hear-not with our ears, but with our hearts.
Every morning, when the sun shines on the earth, it is singing a sweet song. It's singing everything, it's singing for everything. However, you must calm down and listen carefully to understand the wonderful music.
You see, flowers and grass can hear the sun. They feel happy in the sound of sunshine, so they grow up quickly. They can't help dancing in the sound of the sun, dancing with sweet songs and forming a band with the sun. By the way, Ye Ye, the flower brother, is also a member of the band. They make rustling sounds from time to time to accompany them.
You see, streams and lakes can hear the sound of sunshine. The stream is full of vitality in the sound of sunshine, running and jumping forward happily, singing the songs of the stream all the way. The sun has been singing from the east of the earth to the west, and the stream has never stopped singing. Under the sunshine, the lake is gentle and quiet. Although she doesn't have a song, her sparkling lake adds a little color to the singing of sunshine and provides a stage.
You see, animals can hear the sound of sunlight. Every morning, when the sun begins to sing on this land, the animals also respond. The rooster was the first to notice it, so he began to crow and spread the news of the new day to everyone. Other animals also heard the sound of the sun, so they opened their eyes and started a new day.
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There are too many sounds and beauties in the world, which need to be felt with your heart. So, let go of the trivial things in life and listen quietly, and you will hear the sound of sunshine and the beauty of life.