"Guest sentiment" in the poem refers to: "Guest" refers to the poet himself, who calls himself "Guest" because he is in a foreign land; "Love" means homesickness. So "guest affection" is to arouse the feeling of "me"
"Guest sentiment" is simplified to context. The rustling autumn wind blows the plane leaves, bringing chills, and the autumn wind blows from the river. This sight makes me miss my hometown when I am far away from it.
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I read it in a night book-Ye Shaoweng.
original text
The rustling leaves send the cold sound, and the autumn wind moves the guests on the river.
I know that children choose to promote weaving, and a lamp fell on the fence at night.
translate
The rustling autumn wind blows the leaves of the phoenix tree, bringing a chill. The autumn wind blows from the river, making me miss my hometown when I am in a foreign land.
Suddenly I saw the light under the fence in the distance. I thought it was a child catching crickets.
Keyword annotation
Rustle: the wind.
Guest feeling: the homesickness of passengers.
Pick: Pick and move.
Promote knitting: commonly known as cricket, and some areas are also called cricket.
Fence: A fence.
Creation background
The autumn wind is blowing on the river, and the buttonwood trees rustle, which makes people feel chilly. The sound of autumn wind can touch the homesickness of outsiders. Late at night, a child lit a lamp and looked for and caught crickets by the fence.
The migration of seasons and climate and the change of scenery are most likely to cause travelers' homesickness. Being in a foreign land, the author felt autumn in the quiet night and wrote this euphemistic poem.
Appreciation of works 1
The word "Jian" in Ye Shaoweng's ancient poem "What You See in Night Books" is an ancient and modern word, but in this paper it means to see and see. So you should read "Jian" here. The understanding of the whole poem should be: (title) Write what you miss on a lonely night. The rustling autumn wind blows the leaves, bringing chills, and poets who are traveling abroad can't help but miss their hometown. I miss my beloved children the most. At this time, I may still be fighting crickets with great interest and refuse to sleep in the dead of night.
This poem interweaves the author's sadness, warmth, joy and concern. We can appreciate the aestheticism of the ancient poem "What I See in the Night Book" and the ancient poem of Ye Shaoweng from nine aspects.
1, lyrical by scenery, and artistic conception by scenery. Write a sentence or two about the natural environment, the trees are rustling, the cold sounds are bursting, and the autumn wind is Qiu Jiang, conveying the feeling of wandering and desolation; The last two sentences are nostalgia, and the children at home may still be playing cricket late at night. When I am lonely, I fantasize about my family. The scenery of Xiaosuo reminds me of the fun of playing. As the scene blends into emotion, the scene blends, sets each other off into interest, and the artistic conception is wonderful.
2, dynamic and static combination, with dynamic lining static. Autumn leaves, autumn wind, autumn sounds, Qiu Jiang, autumn boats, solitary lamps, urchins and cricket fighting are all vivid and lifelike. The fence fell into the hut and the night was dark. This is a quiet scene, it is so sad and cold, full of melancholy. The rustling leaves also inspired the poet to miss his hometown relatives at midnight in the silent late autumn.
3. Sorrow and joy are intertwined to cover up sadness with joy. Write a sad scene in one or two sentences, the autumn wind sweeps the leaves and the sky sends a chill; Say three or four words about love, choose at night to promote weaving, and think about love in different places. One is sad and the other is happy, and both are covered by joy, which shows the loneliness, helplessness and strong homesickness of the wanderer.
4, virtual and real, reflecting the virtual with the real. One or two of the four sentences in the poem describe the real scene: the leaves are cold, the water is moving and the air is cool; Three or four sentences evoke imagination: night lights, children watching cricket fights. What you see and hear, bright or dark, set each other off. It is full of autumn sounds, autumn nights and homesickness. Reality is free, reality is free. Few words, endless meaning!
5, fascinated, far and near interaction. The poet suffers from the loneliness in the quiet night, and he has a heart attached to distant relatives. Although I am thousands of miles away, the scene of frolicking is still in front of me. The sound of cold leaves nearby is disturbing, and the family is happy to come. That thing, that scene, makes people sigh infinitely.
6, cold and warm, "cold" and "pick" vivid. The word "cold" is a pun, which has both the feeling of chilly autumn wind and the meaning of being stranded at the end of the world. The word "pick" in the details is very interesting. Write out the cricket fighting scenes in which children concentrate on playing, choose carefully, hold their breath and be suddenly enlightened, all in one "selection". "Pick out" people, "pick out" charm, and "pick out" the warmth of remembering loved ones!
7. "Move" and "know" in one go. Poetry uses fallen leaves to "send" the cold, and the cold sounds "move" the feelings, hug and miss the loved ones, and comfort the silence. "Motion" is the "bone" of the poem, and "knowledge (thinking)" is the "heart" of the poem, which makes the whole poem rise and fall appropriately and relax moderately.
8, metaphor, clear heart. The autumn wind on the river moves the guests, which implicitly uses the allusions of Hans Zhang's resignation. According to legend, Hans Zhang, an official living in Luoyang, missed his hometown when he saw the autumn wind, so he resigned and returned to his hometown, but he got his wish. "Autumn makes people sad" can better express the poet's feeling of being far away from home and full of homesickness.
9, clever use of words, affectionate. "The rustling leaves send a cold sound, and the autumn wind on the river is moving." This kind of "sending" and "moving" embodies the feelings of things and endows Wu Ye and Qiu Feng with modal thinking. Why don't these poems, which express feelings, bring readers into Qiu Jiang's artistic conception and make them obsessed and full of melancholy? The rustling leaves send cold sounds skillfully uses synaesthesia, urges desolation with rustling sounds, and conveys tactile feelings with auditory images, which is meaningful.
Appreciation of works ii
Emotional evaluation
1, the author expressed a feeling of homesickness, homesickness and homesickness.
One or two sentences in the poem say that the leaves of trees are flying, the cold sound is blowing, the autumn wind is rustling and the river boat is drifting, which effectively sets off the poet's sad mood of being in a foreign land and wandering around. Three or four sentences describing the life scenes of children playing tricks on crickets with burning lamps will naturally arouse the poet's association. He will remember that his childhood was so naive, romantic, happy and interesting; He will think of the warmth and beauty of his hometown; He will think of the voices and smiles of his relatives and friends, and feel at home, like returning to childhood.
2. Poetry expresses the author's feeling of loneliness in a foreign land and without a fixed place.
Write a sentence or two about the scenery, and use fallen leaves, autumn wind and cold to set off the desolation of wandering and loneliness. A river of autumn water, the sky is dark, and the ears are cold. The poet couldn't sleep all night. He must be depressed and his meaning is not smooth. Write three or four sentences about children catching crickets at night, which is very interesting, cleverly contrasts sadness and shows the loneliness and helplessness of living in a foreign country.
3. Poetry expresses the author's nostalgia for childhood.
Looking at the whole poem, generally speaking, three or four sentences are seen by the poet. Children catch crickets at night with great interest, forgetting the autumn wind and chill, regardless of the fall of trees and the cold in Qiu Jiang, catching crickets at midnight with relish. That kind of obsession, that kind of caution, that kind of sensitivity to ups and downs are all shown in one gesture. This cheerful and interesting life scene naturally evokes the poet's memories and nostalgia for his childhood. One or two sentences can also be understood in this way. Autumn scenery, with the rustling cold sound and fallen leaves, reveals a feeling of wandering and inexplicable melancholy, which further embodies the poet's nostalgia and yearning for the carefree childhood life in a foreign country.
Writing method
1, borrowing scenery to express emotion and blending scenes. All four sentences in the poem are about scenery. Write one or two sentences about the natural environment and three or four sentences about life scenes. The fallen trees are rustling, the cold sounds are bursting, and the autumn wind is Qiu Jiang, conveying the feeling of drifting and desolation; Playing tricks on cricket makes the child happy, revealing the meaning of getting carried away and forgetting the fish. A sadness and a joy, set each other off and become interesting, all of which are integrated into the environmental description without trace.
2, dynamic and static combination, with dynamic lining static. Autumn leaves, autumn wind, autumn sounds, Qiu Jiang, autumn lights, Qiu Er, autumn boats and autumn meaning are all vividly written, with light and shadow; Dark as ink, deep and unpredictable, endless darkness, this is quiet writing, quiet and cold, full of melancholy. Whistling wind and naughty children, these dynamic scenes skillfully reflect the deep silence in late autumn, and even arouse people's appreciation of the poet's sad and sleepless heart in the cold and silent night.
3. Contrast the joys and sorrows, and set joy and sadness against each other. One or two sentences describe the scenery, the autumn wind sweeps away the leaves, and it is freezing in the cold, which is a sad scene and conveys sadness; Writing three or four sentences about people, encouraging weaving in the middle of the night, and bright lights shining on the fence are a happy scene, spreading joy. Sadness and joy are mixed, and joy sets off sadness, which shows the loneliness, helplessness and sleeplessness of wandering wanderers.
4. Express your feelings and use allusions in secret. The autumn wind moving on the river secretly uses the allusions of Hans Zhang. According to legend, Hans Zhang, an official living in Luoyang, missed his hometown when he saw the autumn wind, so he resigned and returned to his hometown, but he got his wish. The poem conveys the poet's thoughts and feelings of being far away from home for a long time, unable to return home and missing his family.
5, personification, synaesthesia, add luster. "The rustling leaves send cold sounds, and the autumn wind on the river moves guests' feelings", and "sending" and "moving" reflect feelings in things, giving the leaves and autumn wind a human modality. It seems that these poems of material state and emotion bring readers into an artistic conception of sending cold air and moving Qiu Jiang, which is fascinating and full of melancholy. The rustling leaves send cold sounds skillfully uses synaesthesia, urges the feeling of cold autumn with rustling sounds, and conveys tactile feelings with auditory images, which is meaningful.
6, careful choice of words, "cold" and "pick" vivid. On both sides of the word "cold", there is a chilly and threatening feeling of autumn wind, which means the end of the world is stranded. The word "pick" in the details is very interesting. The child's concentration, sensitivity and delicacy, and the child's breathless observation, surprise and excitement are all in one "pick".
7. The combination of reality and reality embodies virtual reality. The four sentences in the whole poem describe the scenery and characters, and everything you see and hear, whether bright or dark, is realistic. Full of autumn sounds, full of autumn nights, a autumn river and a group of children, just like a photo of the scene, give people the feeling that they have heard their voices, seen their people and been in the environment. This vivid scene skillfully conveys the poet's sad and lonely feelings full of sadness and sleepless nights. Free time in reality (guest feelings), contained in reality, reflected in reality, has endless meanings!
Brief introduction of the author
Ye Shaoweng, a poet in the mid-Southern Song Dynasty, was born in Longquan. The ancestral home is Jian 'an (now Jian 'ou, Fujian), surnamed Li, and the heir is Longquan (now Lishui, Zhejiang) Ye. The year of birth and death is unknown. He used to be a junior official in the imperial court. His knowledge comes from Ye Shi, who has lived in seclusion for a long time by the Qiantang West Lake. He has close contacts with Zhen and once sang with Ge.