Seven laws make fish cry.
In a fishnet, there are thousands of worlds in the lake.
That is, from Xiaoshui to Xiangshui, through Qingshan to Yushan.
Xiao Lu's sadness is heavy. Night Anvil hates the cold moonlight.
You don't remember every year that clinker finally tried a white plate.
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B. South window
Seven laws? Goldfish (new rhyme)
It is rare to sail to the lake, and it is not lonely to get together in two or three.
When you meditate, you will spend thousands of miles, and you will often get drunk with a pot of water in your life.
See a doctor before the court, and see a doctor after the case.
Even if there is no ink in the main house, it is not bad to add a gentleman to the seat.
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C, desire
Seven laws? Goldfish sighs (new rhyme)
Xiayi colorful reflected Yin Hui, deftly and lightly playing with the crowd.
There are only lofty aspirations and deep-sea ambitions, and there are only empty regrets.
Mo Yun loves fish and water, only knowing that prisoners are suffering, they are bound to be sad.
I hope to jump into the cage, leave the bones, laugh for a while and chase my dreams.
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Ding, Chen Meng
Seven laws? Braised Yellow River Carp (Yun Xin)
It turned out that the Yellow River was flying freely, and now it is lying flat beside the iron pot.
The baked noodles in the center of the dish are white and the chopped green onion is tender and fragrant.
Stick bamboo chopsticks with sauce and taste vinegar and sugar on the tip of your tongue.
Everyone was drunk, and fishbone whispered that the fish was not finished.
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E. Zhang Chengyu
Luqi fish
Cangshan fishing late, Canglang cool heroic.
There is no bait in the spring of a river, and there is danger in the spring.
Liu Mu should know that the lonely chrysanthemum is afraid, and the dragon and the viper cheated him.
You hate not being able to cross the pool in your life.
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F, the pearl river beach
Seven laws? Yongwuyu Life (Xinyun)
Swimming around is also like a person, and the rivers and lakes are dedicated.
The sea is rushing back and forth, and the small pot is slowly floating in the calm water.
Peng Kun in ancient times had to go through the fog, but now Carp Dragon has become a leap gate.
With the guarantee of fate, freedom is the truest.
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G, there is sunny snow in Xishan.
Luqi fish
Born only in the water, I can't feel the birds living in the forest.
The waves in the river are shallow and the ocean floor is ten thousand meters deep.
The sea cruises thousands of miles away, and the river is flat and dancing.
Colorful entertainment, solitary shadow, red heart.
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1, although the whole article is fluent, the mandibular joint is suspected of crossing hands.
2, the neck couplet "You Lianqiu Xi Ping?" It means incomplete.
3, the end of the sentence "sea" can be considered, the knot is a bit too much!
4, the antithesis is neat, which shows the author's skill in choosing words and making sentences!
This is John's own opinion. If there is any mistake, please laugh it off!
Leng Yue review
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J, China Xiang
Seven laws? fish
The bottom of the pool is like a bird, and the years of clear water are shallow and deep.
Dancing shadow is Tingting's dream of staying at home, and her fairy posture is intoxicating.
After a while, I went to the internet to attend a banquet. I left the pool for a long time to serve Yulin.
Where is the legendary swordsman's dream? Koi fish, look for it.
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K. Yan Shu
Seven laws? Fish (Yun Tong)
If you have wings, you don't want to cross the sky, but you can also roam the rivers and seas.
Dressed in a blue sky, dancing in a fairy posture, spitting white lotus, drifting with Zen.
The fallen leaves swim together at dawn in autumn, and the floating clouds disappear in summer.
It's rare that a bridge is raining, and an independent person talks to me.
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1. The greatest feature of this poem is to express people's feelings and aspirations with metaphors, which are ingenious and appropriate.
2. The writing is plain but not vulgar, with prominent themes and coherent techniques.
The neckline is a bit cross-legged, and the word "ambiguous" is a bit far-fetched.
4. The word "no" means "no", and the word "yes" is cumbersome in poetry.
This is a good work, whether it is conception or connection.
Comments on this small day
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Leizhu
Seven laws? Fish (new rhyme)
One night, thousands of feet was full of waves, and tigers roared along the way.
The weak river bank has swallowed up Yu, and the torrent is rushing to lose the boat.
Anger is only in the running water and the wind is rushing, jumping fish and breaking waves, full of joy.
Turn around and laugh at me. I throw nets. I'm trapped by life, but I'm not.
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Ah, Chunming
Luqi fish
I am happy to be optimistic, but how many people are stupid on the bright side?
The water in the pool is slightly wider, and the painting is as dry as a dream.
Travel together and feel lonely from the crowd.
Born in golden armor, I vomited.
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P, Langtaosha
Seven laws? fish
Adding fuel to the flames in the middle of the waves, I met a fisherman who turned his head sharply.
There is no need to dive to the rocky shore when it rains. The tide prefers canoes.
In my dream, I jumped into the dragon gate several times and was imprisoned in a ghost hole thousands of times.
If you don't believe that this body has no motivation, you will fight for the sea.
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Q: Han Ruomu
Seven laws? Fish (new rhyme)
Shuttle freely in the east, west, north and south, without wind and rain, carefree.
Stay away from the enemy, pay attention to avoid, and boldly search for food at close range.
Many people enter the mountains because of their love for the scenery, and the long hook is a national worry.
Longmen has to jump to say success or failure, and the lakes, seas and mountains are at your disposal.
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r、Pe r
Seven laws? Say fish
Kun swam in the northern space, and Longmen carp jumped beside the sky.
But watching the water go to the brocade scale, I only hope that there will be more words in the coming years.
Everyone envies each other, who cherishes and leans on lotus.
In ancient times, Weibin took the lead in fishing, but there was no hook to match the big fish.
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S, lemon cyanine
Qiyunchi fish watching (Xinyun)
A pool of spring water is blue, and Liu Cui Yi is drunk as smoke.
A tail wagged violently to welcome the fun of playing, and two fins danced with each other.
Eagle exhibition in the hot sun, geese in the sky.
Mu Ying Yumen Jin Liyue, blue clouds boundless.
Exhibition task
1 (Friendly Exhibition)
Lv Qi Fishing (Yun Xin)
The oblique wind blows the fallen flowers into the water, and people are beside them.
A five-foot pole moves shadows, and half a gallon of water attracts fish.
Green and red clusters around the wave, long suspended static pool.
I received a koi fish from myself, but there was no basket under my waist.
-Chang' an old man
2 (non-temperament)
Five laws? fish
It's Huangmei season again, and the bass feast is boasting.
Full of fragrance, delicious than Toona sinensis buds.
Besides thorns, the child is looking for a tooth.
Yu Xiang attracts visitors from afar, and swift horses attract farmers.
The herring is blowing waves.
3 Friendship participation
Lv Qi/Fishing (Xinyun)
Lotus leaves cover the clear water, and lotus flowers dance.
Grass carp is happy to surf, and red carp is happy to hide from kittens.
The sun is warm, the leaves are lush, the wind is beautiful and the magnolia is charming.
Under the setting sun on the Liutang River, fishing immortals are far away.
-Chamberlain
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