(one of the intensive training questions for the ninth grade remedial class in the fall semester of 2007)
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1. The following is an application form for joining the calligraphy interest group written by Welly Zhang to the school leadership office. Please find out four inappropriate places from the aspects of format, content, language and writing, and directly modify the original text with symbols (not necessarily all). (4 points)
Application form/application
Dear principal:
Holding extracurricular interest groups in schools is a good measure to enrich students' extracurricular life and cultivate our sentiment. I have a certain foundation in calligraphy, and I especially like pro-modeling. I won the silver prize in the national children's calligraphy and painting competition. I asked to join a calligraphy interest group to improve my calligraphy.
I hope the leadership will approve it.
March 6(th), 2007
Applicant: Welly Zhang, a student of Class 8 (3).
Second, read the following paragraphs and complete questions 2 ~ 4.
Unconsciously, we grew up. Like the rising sun, we are full of vitality; Like a green willow, we are full of hope. Young life is as beautiful as landscape painting. However, the disturbance of the world makes many people ignore their present and blindly pursue their future goals. We often regret the past and always look forward to the future. As we all know, between the past and the future, we often ignore the most important "present". Tagore said, "If you missed yesterday's sun, don't miss today's sun again." Young friends, please bid farewell to the past years, whether prosperous or painful. Let's seize every minute of life, interpret the wonderful present and carry forward the bright future.
There are two typos in the paragraph 1. Please find out and correct them. (2 points)
Change to; replace
2. The word "now" in underlined sentences uses quotation marks, and the function of quotation marks is: (1)
There are two ill sentences in the article, please find one and correct it. (Write the revised sentence directly without copying the original sentence) (2 points)
3. In the following paragraph, the underlined two places are wrong, please correct them. (2 points)
During the "May Day" this year, ① there were more leisure places for Dezhou citizens with relatively few tourism resources. In Jinxiu Chuan, 10,000 mu of Taoyuan, Dayan Island and other scenic spots, people are crowded everywhere. (2) In major shopping malls and supermarkets such as department stores and Hualian Department Store in urban areas, high-quality goods, warm service and good shopping environment have attracted tens of thousands of tourists.
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Draw a horizontal line under the place where there are language barriers and write the corrected sentences in brackets. [Answer any question, multiple questions will be scored as (1)] (2 points)
(1) "Five? During the Golden Week, tourists to Dalian spoke highly of this beautiful coastal city.
(2) This novel takes the village as a true story, showing the image of self-reliance of contemporary college students and giving people inspiration.
5. There is a language defect in each of the following two sentences. Please correct me. (2 points)
(1) After the party, her graceful dancing and beautiful singing still reverberated in my ears.
Replace with:
He is accomplished not only in poetry, but also in calligraphy and painting.
Replace with:
6. There are two underlined sentences in the following paragraph that are wrong. Please correct them one by one. Word order can be adjusted, words can be added, deleted or replaced, but the meaning of the original sentence cannot be changed. ) (4 points)
Qingdao seized the opportunity of preparing for the sailing competition of the 2008 Olympic Games and made every effort to build a "sailing capital". (1) The municipal government plans to launch sailing activities in all schools in the city. All schools should popularize and publicize sailing knowledge among students. In addition, the municipal government will also set up youth sailing bases and clubs to form the scale of sailing activities with more than 1000 ships at sea all the year round.
Revised version 1:
Revision 2:
Seven, the following sentence modification is not correct ()
A, due to a series of caring activities of the Youth League Committee, left-behind children feel the warmth of the extended family. (Delete "Due to")
B on March 14, 2004, the fourth session of the tenth national people's congress passed and deliberated the resolution of the 11th five-year development plan. (Replace "adoption and deliberation" with "deliberation and deliberation")
C BOCOG held a press conference to hold the first collection of Olympic songs. (Add "announcement" before "hold")
D this report lists a lot of facts and accuses human beings of destroying nature and killing animals indiscriminately. (The word "complaint" was changed to "disclosure")
Eight. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is () (3 points).
A. Liu Bei, Cao Cao, Lu Bu, Sun Quan, Zhou Yu and other figures are familiar to most middle school students, and the stories of Taoyuan Jieyi, Liuxia Qishan and burning Chibi can be clearly told.
B. During the May Day holiday, an endless stream of tourists made Fan Jing Scenic Area very lively.
C. "Development of production, affluent life, civilized rural customs, clean village appearance and democratic management" is the concrete embodiment of the new socialist countryside.
D. Fuwa, the Olympic mascot, conveys friendship, peace and initiative to people with its charming image, and conveys the beautiful wish of harmonious coexistence between man and nature.
Nine. The correct way to correct the following sentences is ()
A. The government continues to increase financial input to solve the shortage of funds for rural compulsory education.
Correction: Delete "problem".
B by carrying out the activity of "driving one day less every month", the air in Beijing can be cleaner.
Amendment: Delete "Pass".
At the 49th World Table Tennis Championships, China athletes won five championships.
Revision: change "get" to "complete all"
D. Whether children can be helped to establish a correct outlook on wealth is the key for them to form a good outlook on life.
Amendment: Add "may" after "yes".
The following is a news published by a certain media. There are three grammatical mistakes in the sentence of this article, please correct them one by one. (4 points)
(1) On May 25th, a stream of love surged among the children in Huangguoshu community. Huangguoshan Community is close to Shengli Canal Food Market. There are many migrant workers living in the vegetable market and working in our city. Children's Day is coming. The children of migrant workers in the community are concerned about the hearts of the residents' committee staff. In order to make these children feel the joy of the festival, the community neighborhood Committee organized the activities of community children donating their books and toys to the children of migrant workers.
Correction:
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1 1. The following paragraphs are wrong, please correct them as required. (4 points
When we rode over the mountains and headed for Argentina, we encountered obstacles under the green vault formed by towering trees. That is the root of a big tree. It is higher than our mountain and stands in our way. We tried our best and finally got through with an axe.
(1) The sentence with incomplete components is: (only fill in the period) Change the method:
(2) A sentence that is not properly matched is: (only fill in the period) Change the law:
12. One of the following sentences is not wrong:
A Qingdao is a beautiful city, and the seaside in summer is a good season for people to escape the heat and enjoy the cool.
Whether Scientific Outlook on Development can be implemented is an important guarantee for building a harmonious society and promoting sustainable economic development.
C. Broadband network can not only browse information, but also provide intelligent and personalized online video-on-demand and distance education.
D. At present, the growth rate of global water consumption is twice that of population, which leads to the aggravation of water shortage.
Thirteen. Revision of the paper. (4 points)
① On May 22nd, the commemorative meeting of "International Biodiversity Day" was held in Beijing. At the meeting, the author learned that biodiversity in China has been effectively protected and the deterioration trend of ecological environment has been effectively curbed.
③ By the end of 2006, there were 2,395 nature reserves of various types and levels in China, accounting for 15% of the land area, and a national nature reserve network with relatively complete types, reasonable layout and complete functions was initially formed. ④ These nature reserves have effectively protected 75% of terrestrial ecosystems, 88% of wild animals, 65% of higher plants and most rare and endangered wild animals and plants in China. ⑤ In order to integrate biodiversity protection into the pattern of social development, the government will strengthen the protection of ecological functional areas and nature reserves.
(1) There is a typo in the fourth sentence. Find out and correct it. Change it to (1)
(2) The second useful word is inappropriate, find out and correct it. Change it to (1)
(3) There is something wrong with sentence ⑤, please modify it in the original sentence below. (2 points)