Little brother, generally speaking, middle school writing, junior high school pays more attention to basic writing ability, including narrative, description, discussion and so on. And high school composition pays more attention to the ideological connotation of the article. So the requirements of the two are different.
At present, you are in grade three. If you want to use writing techniques flexibly, you must first determine what kind of expression you want to use, and then use rhetoric and expression techniques on this basis. According to my experience in middle school, I suggest you use it more: personification, metaphor, exaggeration, synaesthesia, duality, arousing, setting off (between things of the same nature), setting off (between different things, for example, setting off the atmosphere with environment, setting off feelings with scenery, etc. ), foreshadowing (suspense) action, combination of reality and reality, association, etc.
Synaesthesia is something that describes a feeling to another person, such as: I saw the sound of the waves and stood in the center of the city (heard through vision). I strongly recommend you to use: parallel, symbol, line drawing, thimble.
Because, the old-fashioned pie ratio can be used by poor students, and teachers are tired of watching it. Anyone can use it, and there are not many functions. Of course, if you use it well, you can. Symbols are basically difficult to use because the composition in our middle school is of little significance. The teacher knows what you want to say at a glance. Even if you use something to hint at a certain spiritual thought, he won't think you are using symbols.
What is more difficult is the sketch and thimble commonly used by writers. We can't. If you sketch, the teacher will say that you are boring. Therefore, using the skills I suggested above, mostly rhetoric, is easier to use. I hope you can practice often.
However, flexible use is based on your accumulation, and the accumulation of words, sentences and materials is necessary. In addition, we should read more ancient poems and famous sayings for easy reference. Adopt me. I'm a fan of Ka Kui, too.
2. As a means of expression in literary creation, how to write a composition about yourself by symbolic means? Symbolism refers to expressing some abstract concept, thought or emotion with the image of concrete things.
Its characteristic is to make use of some similarities between symbols and symbolized objects, so that some contents of symbolized objects can be expressed implicitly and vividly. The artistic image of some works will even be expressed by symbolic means.
Symbol is an artistic technique, similar to figurative rhetoric. Just as metaphor requires that there are some similar characteristics between the vehicle and the implied object, symbol also requires that there are some similar characteristics between the symbolized object and the symbolized object, which can make people associate.
However, metaphor belongs to the category of rhetoric, which can be used to describe both abstract things and concrete things. Symbol is an artistic technique, which is related to conception and belongs to writing conception skills, not just language processing. Symbol is generally used to express some abstract concepts or thoughts and feelings, that is to say, it expresses deeper meaning through a concrete image, so that readers can understand and enjoy beauty by themselves.
This is a subtle, implicit and aesthetic technique, which can make readers feel happy. If carefully analyzed, symbols can be divided into homogeneous symbols and heterogeneous symbols.
Homogeneous symbol means that the symbol and the symbolized object have some similarities in essence. Readers are more likely to associate this with that.
For example, Shu Ting's "To the Oak Tree" directly expresses symbolic meaning with concrete images. The poet used oak and kapok to symbolize male masculinity and female femininity respectively. The "copper branches and iron stems" of oak trees and the "red flowers" of kapok are concrete images of masculinity and femininity.
Another example is the essay Firelight by Russian writer Korolenko. The author wrote about the experience of boating on a gloomy river in Siberia on a dark autumn night. When the ship is sailing in the dark, a little fire suddenly appears in front, no matter how far or near, it is always so attractive.
But here, is the author just describing the fire? Obviously, no. He obviously has a profound meaning.
With a little association, you can realize that the fire here is a symbol of hope and light. When the long river of life flows between the gloomy banks, isn't it the fire ahead that attracts people to March forward bravely? No matter in the years of hard struggle or on the dark road of life, people will have such an experience: even a faint and faint hope is so precious, it can give people comfort and strength.
In this paper, the author uses fire as a symbol to express this subtle feeling and complicated life experience at once. Heterogeneous symbols mean that symbols and symbolized objects are essentially opposite.
For example, Su Tong's novel goddess peak. Traditionally, goddess peak is a symbol of love constancy.
In the novel, Li Yong and Tuoyue are lovers. They plan to take a boat from Nanjing to the Three Gorges goddess peak, hoping to make their love more solid. After they boarded the ship, they were accidentally in the same cabin with rich old Cui.
At first, he looked down on the rich old Cui and thought that he lacked culture and sentiment like many rich people. Later, in several contacts, Xunyue gradually felt that Lao Cui was generous, careful and considerate.
When the ship stopped at Hankou Port, the moon left the ship, got on the dock, left Li Yong and left with Lao Cui. Before a couple arrived in goddess peak, the so-called love collapsed.
The ending of the novel gives readers a strong shock. Contrary to expectations is not the aesthetic value of this novel. What really makes readers enjoy the aesthetic feeling is that the writer skillfully chooses the destination of the couple-goddess peak, and the symbolic object and the symbolized object fundamentally constitute an antagonistic relationship.
After reading the novel, I can't be calm for a long time. Heterogeneous symbols produce aesthetic effects on the basis of strong contrast, so this technique can leave a deeper impression on people.
From this, we can think further, as one of the modern conception techniques, what is the function of symbolism? The theme sublimates. Sublimating the theme is an important link to enrich and deepen the theme connotation and improve the theme significance in the writing process.
In the Tang Dynasty, Sun Qiao said in "Essays with Friends": "Words must be high and then strange, meaning must be deep and then successful." Only when the theme is profound can we reveal the essence of things and guide readers to appreciate the purport of beauty.
Symbolism is to extend the writing content from nature to human social life through similar associations, and to symbolize a certain spiritual quality or character with those features originally written, thus raising the theme to a new height. For example, Mao Dun's prose "Praise of Poplar" is a good example.
This paper first tries to show the characteristics of poplar, such as integrity, simplicity, stubbornness and hard work. Then through similar associations, the description and praise of poplars are extended to farmers in the north, and poplars are used to symbolize a valuable "spirit and will" of our nation. In this way, through symbolic means, the praise of poplar has become a praise of a nation's "spirit and will", and at this point, the theme has been sublimated to a lofty realm.
Another example is the text "Light" in the third volume of high school Chinese. In this article, Mr. Ba Jin first wrote that when he got up in the middle of the night and saw other people's lights, his heart lit up. He recalled that the lights gave me the way. Go back to reality and write about the comfort and encouragement given to me by the lights tonight; Reminiscent of the lighthouse, the lonely night light on Harriet Island and the torch of ancient Greece, they show people the way and then return to reality, writing that they have drawn infinite power from the light; Finally, recall the story of a friend who was saved, return to reality and firmly believe that the light will not go out.
Appreciate the writing of this article from beginning to end.
I have an example of how to write a composition with symbolism:
Chinese plum
Petals are small, branches are thin and strong, pale pink, and fragrance surrounds the whole body. This is a flower that blooms proudly in winter. This is a flower that looks whiter in the snow. It is a flower that cannot be crushed by snowflakes. Yes, it is plum blossom. Flowers standing proudly in the winter snow.
May, spring and summer seasons. The sun is shining and colorful. Just after the defeat of Jasminum nudiflorum and Magnolia grandiflora, small buds, strings of pink peach blossoms and lush green grass appeared in the Chinese rose. All this is just as people say, yes, I agree, spring is indeed the season when everything recovers. She gives people the feeling of light green, faint green, endless green, and in summer, the green is deeper, that is green, and the green is deeper.
However, winter, the most lifeless season of the four seasons, gives people the feeling that it is a vast expanse of whiteness, and the snow is overwhelming and sweeping, which can only add a little pine and cypress to this withered winter, and at this time it is covered with thick snow.
Those flowers in summer are just dead branches and rotten leaves at this time. There is no longer the charm, wealth and air of the past, and their only twigs are too tired to breathe under the weight of snow, so they can only wait for death sadly.
At this time, in the snow all over the sky, in the lament of everything, plum blossoms appeared and stood proudly in the snow. Her tall and thin branches are not affected by the snow at all. Snow proud first frost. In full bloom in the snow, full of pride, stand upright, stand upright, regardless of the wind and snow blowing. ...
This is why I love plum blossoms. I am strong and unyielding. Although it is too cold to go out in winter, plum blossoms bloom in the snow. The spirit symbolized by this small flower is far more noble than the colorful roses, Chinese rose and peony in that summer.
Look at that plum blossom. Seemingly pure white snow, only a pool of stains is left after the snow melts, which is flashy. And plum blossom, she is really pure white, sometimes with a little pink, she left a fragrance that seems to be absent. Her simplicity and elegance are beyond the reach of ordinary people.
Look at the plum blossoms standing proudly and blooming in the snow. Don't you feel her beauty at all? Didn't you suddenly see a plum blossom standing in front of you in the vast snow, and you wouldn't be infected by her indomitable spirit of not being afraid of cold and frost? Have you ever thought that she is somewhat similar to the indomitable spirit of the Red Army soldiers? Don't you think this notice covered with heavy snow really symbolizes our revolutionary soldiers, their indomitable spirit, their courage to fight and their will quality?
People praise the peony because of its wealth, the lotus because it emerges from the mud without being stained, and I praise the plum because of her indomitable spirit, which also symbolizes those who are more and more brave in the face of difficulties!
In my eyes, dusk is beautiful, just because it is far away and the wind is so gentle, it drives the small trees and grass to dance together. A breeze blew, just like a mother's hand gently stroking her face. I like that feeling, cool. Looking up, a dozen old people are doing aerobics on the street, smiling and dancing, conveying a harmonious atmosphere and enjoying life. Look at the beautiful scenery created by nature, intoxicating warmth, clear tenderness mixed with deep warmth.
Dusk is a state.
Sometimes I feel that facing the pulse of dusk is like facing the kind face of a kind old man. He has rich experience but modest words, has gone through vicissitudes without complaining or shrinking, and is mature in wisdom but never makes public. He always listens to your anxious talk quietly, but often a few knowing smiles can heal the deep wounds in your heart. Dusk is full of charm in my heart.
Walking in the dusk, I will imagine that the story that happened in the dusk will be particularly unforgettable. Dusk is an eternal plot in my heart.
Autumn scenery
The chirping cicada has disappeared from the forest, the green trees have changed into golden pajamas, and the whistling west wind has come in a hurry. This scene tells us that autumn has arrived.
Whenever this autumn comes in a hurry, purplish maple leaves fall everywhere along the river and roadside; In the sky, flocks of migratory birds and swallows are flying to the warm south.
In the golden rice fields, hardworking farmers are tirelessly harvesting golden ears of rice, hoping to have a good harvest this year.
The bright moonlight accompanied me into the night. Every Mid-Autumn Festival, I always think about the autumn scenery and eat sweet moon cakes.
Ah, this beautiful autumn scenery is really a good season for reading. I want to praise it and use it.
Autumn scenery
"Quite critical", fallen leaves become a scene in autumn.
The autumn wind blew away the "wet" in spring and the "stuffy" in summer, bringing a little coolness. People say the autumn wind is dry. I don't think so. I like the feeling of mixing noodles in the autumn wind, which can make people clear-headed; Can make the dust on your body fly far away; Can bring our souls into autumn. When the autumn wind flashes, Wanshu will welcome warm applause and graceful dancing. The scene is as grand as the lively scene of a grand party, and butterflies are flying all over the sky. The sound of leaves colliding seems to be good news for Mother Earth. Children who leave home will return to the embrace of Mother Earth. The excitement is beyond words, and there is no need to express it, because the autumn wind has quietly informed the earth.
Autumn leaves take away the "green" in spring and the "shell" in summer, bringing a moving scene of flying all over the sky. Every leaf is the end of one life and the beginning of another. Fallen leaves dance gracefully in the wind, sometimes falling, sometimes turning in circles, and sometimes walking with the wind. They wore yellow shirts and said goodbye to the tree with the most beautiful dance. Thanks to the kindness of Mother Dashu. Autumn leaves cover every corner of the world. As soon as they pass by, they seem to be playing beautiful piano music. One after another, they have the momentum of "pouring pearls of all sizes into a plate of jade", and "the reverberation lingers for three days".
The color of autumn brushes off the "colorful" in spring and the "fiery red" in summer, and dyes it with a layer of dark brown. Brown is the main color in autumn. With the arrival of autumn, everything in the world welcomes it. Brown makes people daydream. I don't like "colorful", "fiery red" and "white", but I love brown. It represents a kind of solemnity and calmness, and it is also a piece of "amber" in people's hearts, and transparency is wrapped in a kind of bitterness. At the same time, brown is also the painter's favorite when depicting autumn scenery. The colors in autumn are very simple. Not elegant, not artificial, conquered me with simplicity.
The sunshine in autumn covers the warmth in spring and the heat in summer, bringing a little coolness. The autumn sunshine wakes up late and disappears quickly. It's also called "going out late and returning early". But it does not hinder its quality and beauty. It shines not only on everything, but also on the depths of human hearts. I think the sunshine in autumn is to know the secret of my heart, and I don't have to tell anyone. Because the autumn sunshine has told all things in nature that they will share joys and sorrows with me.
Autumn wind, autumn leaves, autumn colors and autumn sunshine make up a wonderful Qiu Jingtu. There are many secrets buried in the picture. As long as we are good at finding them, we can uncover them. There are many philosophies of life in the picture, which we can understand as long as we actively seek them. The picture shows many colorful lives. As long as we have a correct attitude, we can have them.
Autumn scenery-Wonderful Life Planning.
5. Describe people's compositions in 500 words with various description methods. My old father, my favorite person, the world is very sweet, only you. . "Every time I hear this song" Father ",I can't help thinking of my father. He is a very kind person and I admire him most. He was, is and will be.
My father was born as a farmer. Because his family was poor when he was a child, he couldn't go to high school. Instead, I was admitted to a normal school and later became a middle school teacher. Dad is a very responsible person for his work. His love is always divided into two parts, one for students and the other for our family. At the critical moment, our love is still "unworthy". With a good teacher like Dad, his students will always be the first. There is a naughty student in my father's class. He doesn't want to study in the middle of reading. He is going out to work. Maybe my father thinks highly of this student. He visited his home several times, took the student to school, reasoned with him and told him to study hard. Finally, the student was admitted to a good university, and now he is the head teacher of a key class in senior three of a middle school. He visits his father every year and calls himself a "teacher". Sometimes I ask my father, "You have been teaching for so many years, why are you still enthusiastic?" My father said to me seriously: "lev tolstoy once said,' If a person has no enthusiasm, he will accomplish nothing, and the basis of enthusiasm is responsibility.' You got it? "It took me a long time to react and nodded.
In his spare time after work, my father always stays with our family. When I was young, other girls of my age learned to dance, play the piano, practice calligraphy, and had family education, while I only liked to play with sand and run around barefoot. My mother watched those children of the same age go home with prizes and enjoy them alone ... but my father said happily to me, "Baby, those children are not as happy as you, so let's not learn those things?" ! "I nodded happily and said," Yes, we don't want to learn. Those things are not fun, hehe. "When I was a child, my father never forced me to do something I didn't like, and now it is the same. Therefore, I had a very happy childhood without academic pressure, thanks to my father.
By the second day of junior high school, I began to enter adolescence, and my mood was very unstable and I began to rebel. So I made some mistakes at school, and they were very serious mistakes. At that time, my dad hit me because he couldn't figure out how my daughter, who had been a good girl, became like this. I am his only hope! But I, who was not sensible, actually blamed my father at that time and thought he was unreasonable. Later, my father talked to me and said, "You can't do this. Do you know why people live? People live to bring happiness to others, and if you make mistakes in school and don't study hard, it will bring trouble to your teachers, make your relatives feel sad and make your classmates look at you with new eyes. This is not good. Dad shouldn't have hit you that day, and he was angry. You are my only hope. Don't let me down on you. I know you blame dad now, but which parent in the world doesn't love their children? Dad loves you so much, I hope you succeed! " Only then did I realize my ignorance and ignorance.
This is my father. He is different from other fathers. He dares to express his love for his daughter. He is responsible, and I think he is the best father in the world. When I started in the vast ocean of knowledge, accompanied by my father all the way, I stumbled on the bumpy road of knowledge, and my father's generous chest always healed me. Father's love is selfless and father's love is priceless!
6. How to use ideographic method to write a composition test site: Analysis of model essay thinking: The writing feature of ideographic method is to use an object to compare or symbolize a certain spirit, personality, thoughts, feelings, etc. To write such an article well, we must master the internal relations between "things" and "aspirations" and "things" and "feelings". Secondly, when describing, one's ambition should be centered on the characteristics of the object. The object should be able to express his will. The way to write a composition by expressing things is 1, and the idea (1) is described by something. Show the spiritual quality of a certain kind of person or a certain person. (2) Some philosophies about society, the world and life. A, writing this thing implies another meaning. B, writing it clearly implies people. (3) To show people, to inspire people, to inspire people, to inspire people to live, to think, to struggle and to move forward. (4) Ideas can be divergent and diverse, from which the best ideas can be selected. Personalize the spiritual quality of ordinary people. (2) Take the sun, moon, stars, mountains, rivers, rain, snow, thunder and lightning to symbolically contain some philosophies. (3) Take objects, furniture and utensils to vividly reflect a kind of thoughts and feelings. (4) Take animals, birds and beasts to personify some ideas. 3. Language (1). & gt Free registration to see the answer, free registration to ask questions, quick registration to see.