Accustomed to the brilliance of the full moon, it is perfect, but the curved moon allows lonely people to peep at the true meaning of life with silence and wisdom vacancy.
I have seen the vast sea for no reason, but the trickle is smart and meaningful, allowing thinkers to explore the mysteries of life.
Knowing the hustle and bustle of the world of mortals and the calmness and freshness of the empty mountains, the hermit realized the profound meaning of the universe.
As a result, there is an imperfect vacancy in life in the form of concession, which opens the silence in the crowd and leaves a blank in the perfection.
Tea: bring peace to the mind.
Westerners like strong and heavy coffee. That kind of black is like iron, with mechanical and metallic luster. Take a sip, and let the bitter taste, strong refreshing effect and dense water vapor seize your thoughts and wrap your nerves without leaving a gap, like an overbearing person, occupying all the spaces at once. So westerners like adventure, exploitation and possession.
Tea, on the other hand, was born on the shady slope of the valley, saturated with the gentle breeze and drizzle, absorbing the tranquility of moonlight and the Shan Lan wild dew, and its bones are quiet. Then carefully select the tender leaves, carefully develop them by hand, and wait until the dead of night, when the new moon is like a hook, a pot of purple sand and hot water are injected, slowly brew, and wait until the water vapor gradually dissipates, then one will savor the tranquility on the tip of the tongue, and vaguely feel that a touch of delicate fragrance has melted the moonlight mountain: it has merged into a blank of thought, so orientals who like to drink tea are calm and wise, everyone.
Being a man is like drinking tea. Slightly indifferent fragrance, give your mind more living space, let you take your time.
Painting: the blank of attracting love.
A leaf, Picasso will carefully draw its clear vein in the sun, Gauguin will silently depict the shadow of the leaf in the sun, and Van Gogh will obsessively depict the sadness of life and the madness of death with large pieces of color. No matter who they are, they are too single-minded and pay too much attention to the appearance of those things. In other words, they are perfect.
The painters in China, on the other hand, will vaguely draw those lonely mountains on a long roll of rice paper, in a large blank, and then only a lonely leaf will remain helplessly in a large blank, just like it floats alone in the world. The description of poverty reveals infinite feelings. Among them, blank, a simple and profound form, undertakes this important task, and carries a kind of unrestrained and emotional situation with a nihilistic and substantial carrier.
This is the choice of the wise.
Perhaps people's hearts are picturesque, sometimes a little blank will hide the world, and people who understand this world are aware of that little blank.
M: My heart is empty.
A flower, a world, a bird and a heaven.
The origin of the world is also hidden in that tiny and incomplete place.
The Buddha presented flowers to the public, and all the disciples were puzzled. Only Kaya crossed his hands and said, "Amitabha, the disciples had an epiphany." It is the wisdom of human beings to follow the great cause of Buddha and peep at the true meaning of the world in the incomplete blank.
When people are like this, they will be completely free and easy, and the meaning of life will be revealed.
When we dance alone in a blank, we quietly find that what we have is a perfect world.
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It is a masterpiece of American writing, the beauty of writing reveals the author's talent, and the full text has some aesthetic flavor. However, if the article is limited to this, it lacks the soul of life. What is rare is that the center of the article presents a strong tension, and the philosophical concept of "harmony between man and nature" runs through it, and the beauty and exquisiteness of the article has become a writing style.
The moon rises in the clouds, and the breeze sends snow.
(Beijing 2008 College Entrance Examination Full Score Composition)
He has been practicing calligraphy for five years. He walked from the study to the yard, and then walked back to the study. I don't know when the spring breeze is blowing in the yard, and the green shoots have been quietly pulled out from the willow branches.
He held a piece of paper tightly in his hand, on which was a newly written word "Da".
Ink is freshly ground, round and black; The handwriting is vigorous and gentle, as if full of aura between heaven and earth, and all the spring scenery is injected into it.
I appreciate the handwriting in my hand again, and finally took a long breath, held my head high, straightened my chest, and knocked on my father's door with the spring breeze.
Xihe studied his son's handwriting without saying a word. He picked up a pen on the table, slightly wetted the ink, and nodded a little under the word "big".
Father didn't make any comments, and he was puzzled. He had to cross the hall and knock on his mother's door.
"My son has been practicing for several years, which is a bit like Xizhi."
………
Unconsciously, the willow branches grow, and you can touch its green with your hand.
The handwriting is six points vigorous and four points gentle and lovely. He can't stand his father's silence and his mother's laughable praise. He stayed in the study all day and all night. The nearby pool has long been a sauce jar, piled three feet high with a broken pen.
He believes that his calligraphy is perfect this time.
Xizhi still didn't say a word, and his face was a little heavy.
Mother continued to admire, and her approving eyes remained at that point.
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The geese return to the south, the wind sweeps away the leaves, and the willows are green, but they look gaunt.
The handwriting is four points vigorous and six points gentle and lovely. There is a thick cocoon on his right hand, and his heart is full of flames. He hung his wrist and raised his pen. With all his strength, he wrote a word "big" that was very happy and swallowed mountains and rivers.
Xizhi still didn't say a word, and his face was a little heavy.
Mother continued to admire, and her approving eyes stayed at that point.
……
Snowflakes are flying and the flames are soaring, and five years have passed unconsciously.
The hand that provided it is still waving, but he no longer writes "big". He wrote, "Its shape is strange, but if Youlong is graceful and restrained. ..... It's like the moon is covered by Qingyun, and if the wind flows back to the snow, it's swaying ... "
Five points are pungent, five points are gentle and lovely, and they are very chic and cheerful.
Xi Zhi looked up at his seventh son. He remembers pulling his pen in the back when he was a child, but he didn't. At that time, he predicted that "this son will be famous in the future." Unexpectedly, the prophecy of that year has now become a mantra.
Xizhi said thoughtfully, "Good, very good!"
The offering hand was not raised in the air, but hung down and stood respectfully.
If it had been five years ago, he might have proudly shouted his grades. Now, he finally understands his distance from calligraphy.
Comments by famous teachers
With the help of imagination, Wang Xizhi's story contains the meaning of the topic, which can be described as open-minded, strong in comprehension, unique in imagination and fluent in language, which constitutes the unique innovation consciousness of this paper and stands out among many candidates; Several fragments are connected together, thinking jump and full of movement.
The language expression is accurate, and the description of Wang Xizhi's psychological activities and language is successful, which is really a rare article in the examination room.
3. Dream of dancing in reality
Looking up at the starry sky, it seems that flawless stars shine in the Milky Way, which brings us infinite reverie. How many beautiful dreams have been released in the spotless starry sky! People who fly to the stars know that there are dust and debris like the earth, so they lose their desire for fantasy. Although you can't indulge in your own fantasies, you can't let the idea of flying freely get lost in the ruthless reality.
Ruan Ji stared at the confusion of the world and his best friend, and escaped from reality through drunkenness. He has been escaping, escaping and escaping all his life, but in the end he was spurned because of a short message from Zheng Chong to the King of Jin. Ji Kang, on the other hand, lives completely in reality and refuses to make any compromise to life. Finally, it became a masterpiece with a song "Guangling San". In fact, one step forward from Ruan Ji's drunkenness is Ji Kang's Guangling San, and the next step from Ji Kang's Guangling San is Ruan Ji's drunkenness. The situation of those who reach the same goal by different routes is so different. If two people each take a step and neutralize fantasy and reality a little, maybe the living will not end up in psychedelic, and the dead will merge into the sky, leaving only endless disappointment for future generations.
How can we make people who look up at the stars understand the reality, and how can we make people who fly to the stars keep their dreams?
In that era when everyone complained, Mr. Shen Congwen knew the cruelty of reality, but he still wrote the small town in the south of the Yangtze River as a paradise with beautiful mountains, beautiful water and beautiful people. Reality didn't destroy his hope for life. He looks at this society and his life with the most primitive feelings and a pure heart. He didn't indulge in his fantasies, nor did he let reality numb his mind.
Mr Zhang Yunhe is also a wise old man. She has experienced great wealth, war and ten years of catastrophe in her life, but she has always maintained a feeling of compassion and a childlike innocence that will never age. Her compassion enabled her to face up to reality and overcome it, while her childlike innocence enabled her not to give up the right to fantasy in any difficult situation.
Kawabata Yasunari's shallow sentence "At four o'clock in the morning, I saw the begonia flowers wake up" instantly touched many people's hearts, which is the perfect combination of dream and reality. Let those secular things fall apart in an instant, and let the numb heart feel warm in reality.
Face up to reality, but don't commit to reality, keep fantasy, but don't indulge in fantasy, let your dream dance a hearty dance in reality!
4. Butterfly change
(Shandong Volume in 2008)
Who doesn't expect the dawn to bloom and the glory of a gorgeous season? ?
Who doesn't want the flowers under the fence to win the glory of the garden? ?
Who doesn't dream of twins and double interest and envy the lake? ?
Who doesn't appreciate the graceful and light dancing of the butterfly, swaying gently under the moving melody, and who understands the anxiety, waiting and impatience of the butterfly when it is near the cocoon breaking, like a gentle knife stuck in a cage? However, the solemn butterfly that can't keep a season can enjoy the scenery in advance before the cocoon breaking period. Its wings are broken and intangible, and its broken body has given birth to a year of tolerance, but it can't resist this. ?
I feel extremely sad and hurt for the residual butterfly. They wriggled and crawled with their imperfect bodies, trying to drink dew on the grass. The faint yellow grass leaves have no green image, and the residual butterflies can't feel the coolness of dew, so they can't stand the heavy life of this broken branch. Butterfly butterfly, grass leaves know that the last gust of wind in late spring will end his childhood and begin to enter this pre-youth adult ceremony. Why can't you wait for a while, and you will flash your enchanting life in exchange for great regret in this life?
You need to wait, the grass needs to wait, the hungry chicks need to wait, the greatest hero needs to wait, waiting is not standing quietly, waiting is not sitting alone, but putting a more beautiful wreath on life and inserting more gorgeous feathers for life. Waiting is not a long stare, nor is it stupid to stay up late. In waiting, we honed our minds, forged a hard wall and guarded our fragile spiritual world. Waiting is not like a flower in a greenhouse, swimming freely in a humid and warm greenhouse, and never getting out of the warmth higher than the palm of your hand. The waiting of this pity flower, like the stars in the sky, lives in the Milky Way forever, where it lives smartly, but once it falls, it is as dull as a waste stone and loses its former moisture. This kind of emptiness is exactly the same as a butterfly that breaks its cocoon in advance. ?
Didn't the butterfly repent? I want to go back to my past efforts, although now I think it is so insignificant. If you go back to the past, I know you will seize that short season of hesitation. When spring goes and summer comes, the garden is full of fragrance, the sun bathes the earth, the rain washes the grass stems, the dark clouds cover the sun, and the birds sing to each other. Butterfly will be the most beautiful dancer in the garden, and your silent soul will not wither until the autumn leaves pile up! ?
Spring comes from the grassland, waiting for the arrival of early spring, mid-spring or late spring, let spring light up your colorful life, have heartfelt expectations, keep the truth, and we will all have beautiful faces when the butterfly changes, stunning the face of the whole world. ?
Comments by famous teachers
The genius of this article lies in innovation. The full text embodies the characteristics of beautiful picture, touching language and vivid literary image. ?
The picture is beautiful. The author organizes materials around the topic of "Butterfly Change", and the main object is beauty. "Butterfly Change" is a traditional aesthetic image in China culture. From Dream of Butterfly in Zhuang Zhou to Dream of Butterfly, and then to become a butterfly in Butterfly Lovers, its literary images are rich and colorful. In the author's pen, the meaning of "spring comes and grass grows" is interpreted from one angle, that is, we must wait and wait patiently for the cocoon breaking period to get our own beauty. ?
The literary image is distinct. In this paper, the author describes the psychology and behavior of "butterfly anxiety", resulting in "broken wings" and "residual touch", which "brings great regret in this life" because of the lack of necessary waiting. It shows that only by keeping the truth can we "have a beautiful face when the butterfly changes and surprise the face of the whole world".
The language is beautiful and moving. Take the beginning of the article as an example, such as "Who doesn't expect the bright season of dawn?" Who doesn't want the flowers under the fence to win the glory of the garden? Who doesn't dream of twins and double interest? "Three sentences constitute a compound sentence group, always quoting the full text, mentioning the following, and at the same time reading catchy and poetic. (Zhu Qinghe)?
5. A misty rain made Jiang Ping.
(Fujian Volume of College Entrance Examination in 2008)
As time goes by, the old traces are washed away, leaving only the dreariness and sadness of the desert. When you reach the water's edge, you drift away, leaving only the staring and sighing of Chu.
Or like sweetness, or love is bitter and sweet, who is like you-Zhuangzi, indifferent to everything, integrated with Tao, only clinging to that faint innocence. ?
When a kind of beauty makes people feel overwhelmed, they have to dance for it with their hands and feet; When a kind of insipid, light makes people unable to taste, we have to sigh and cherish it and praise it. ?
You are willing to be indifferent, content with being plain, complacent in being plain, only willing to have fun in become a butterfly in your dreams, only willing to wander around the world with hovering Peng, unwilling to be tired of state affairs and unwilling to set foot in the world. You are like the sweet and fragrant mineral water, giving people a desperate life, a quiet and far-reaching life, and a detached thing. I tried to touch your skirt, but I touched it at my fingertips.
But I can't get rid of the sweet temptation, and I can't forget the bitter or sweet fragrance. When I have no choice, I have to look at your calm eyes, which are unusually clear and long, and I can't see the end of the world. ?
I thought you were lonely, but you told me that a friend of a gentleman is as light as water. Keiko's departure didn't bring you anything like that. It turns out that you have already seen through life and death and the world of mortals. Why praise your plainness? I have nothing to say. ?
Miss the past and compete in prosperity. You are still wandering freely in the outside world, understanding the infinity of nature. The world is just your subjective product. You even know the happiness of river fish, the joy of butterfly dance and the guilt of mantis, swaying away and shuttling through the mire. Why care about the power struggle? Who says you have to bear the unbearable weight of that life? ?
There is a bright moon in the distance. When you watch the bright moon alone on a breezy night and let people sit back and relax, the bright moon will not be lost-just because your dull hearts are chasing each other. The world laughs at your madness, but your cold eyes are speechless. You suddenly realize that your faint spring-like philosophy is so profound, but you are already floating. ?
I only caught a glimpse of you, but I caught a glimpse of a dull and far-reaching attitude towards life. I will never be dominated by everything. I am alone in the turbid waves, and I only want to die holding the bright moon. There is a withered tobacco and a white mustard on the river. ?
Teach me how to follow in your footsteps, the essence of beauty is at a loss; Teach me how to touch your skirt, that kind of indifferent attitude. ?
This is you, as light as spring, your paranoid pursuit, a Bai Mudan fluttering beside spring, an ethereal song for you.
Comments by famous teachers
This paper adopts the writing method of cultural prose. The author crossed just visiting, entered the historical stage, and had a direct dialogue with Zhuangzi, a representative of ancient Taoism in China, in the second person tone. First of all, compare Zhuangzi's thoughts and sentiments of "indifferent to everything" and "willing to be happy in become a butterfly in my dream, only willing to drift with the hovering Peng" with my unwilling dull, lonely, impetuous and painful inner world, and turn them into a dramatic scene of asking Zhuangzi for advice when we have no choice. Absurdity shows the exploration of the pursuit of value orientation in real life and reflects the achievements of contemporary middle school students in rich inner feelings and noble morality. ?
This paper is not only profound in conception, but also worthy of reference in writing, structure and language expression. In the design of literary road, the author skillfully changed time and space, and for thousands of years, let thoughts drift back to history, talk to Zhuangzi and communicate with gods; After a while, I turned the reins of my thoughts and carried the philosopher Zhuangzi to today to discuss how to be a man. Language is poetic, rhetorical and vivid. For example, "You are like the sweet and fragrant mineral water, giving people a desperate life, a quiet and far-reaching life, a detached thing", and using the rhetorical device of analogy and parallelism, highly praised Zhuangzi's indifferent and insipid ideological essence. (Zhu Qinghe)
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