1. Although your handwriting is not standardized enough, I believe you will practice it well.
2. The language of this article is not fluent, the writing is not serious, and it lacks vivid description, so it is an unsuccessful composition.
3. The words are sloppy, and the words that are not refined can convey the meaning. Then put in order's words are still fluent, but the words that are not refined are repetitive and jumbled.
4. Your homework is well done, but your writing is not neat enough. Would you please write it neatly?
5, the meaning of the text is incomplete, the narrative is boring, dry and dull, and lifeless.