Regular script, official script or seal script are dignified and solemn; Walk and grass wisely.
Judging from this work, I am a little hesitant to start writing, so the word "far away in the Yellow River" is full of enthusiasm, which is incompatible with the cursive script behind it.
There is a lack of communication between "one" and "film", the word "flute" is a bit neither fish nor fowl, and the word "mountain" is not well written.
In the overall layout, because the strokes are beautiful, the whole picture should be written smaller or better.