Writing ideas and key points: Take the poem "Qingming" as an example to rewrite.
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On the day of Qingming Festival, the sky was gray and drizzling. I was walking on the road far away from my hometown, thinking about my relatives who had passed away, and I felt very sad. sad. I wanted to go to a restaurant and drink some wine to relieve the sadness, sorrow, upset and depression in my heart, so I asked the shepherd boy on the roadside: "Excuse me, is there a restaurant nearby?" I saw the shepherd boy stretched out his hand and pointed The faint village behind the apricot blossom forest.
I walked over, and the white apricot blossoms made me very happy. I walked to the village and saw a restaurant. After entering, I drank a lot of wine. I always believed that wine can relieve troubles. , I very much hope to be successful today. I drank for three hours, and my mood became cheerful. At this time the sun came out, and my mood became more like before.
I sincerely sighed: "This year's Qingming Festival, I am really sad and happy at the same time. Thank you so much for these wines!"
After the rain has passed and the sky has cleared up, everything has gone smoothly. Became fresher and brighter. The dust on the grass was washed away by the raindrops. The flowers gave off their sweet fragrance, butterflies were flying among the flowers, and everything changed.