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This is a sentence of forgiveness and self-correction.
The application of self-alignment of conjunctions in long sentence couplets can create an effect similar to that of "laying out" in Ci. This practice can be said to draw lessons from the expression of overlapping sentences widely used in traditional Chinese opera and Sanqu. Let me give some examples of self-alignment of overlapping sentences in long dialogues:
Look at the gods of the east, the spirits of the west, the winding in the north, the white mourning in the south ... while the crab is on Luozhou Island, there will be wind and fog; It is even more beautiful, dotted with some jade feathers and Danxia. Live up to fragrant rice, clear sand, September hibiscus and March willow. (This is part of the couplet of Daguanlou in Kunming, which consists of three groups of sentences. The first group of four overlapping sentences; The second group has two, and * * * has four clauses; The third group is four overlapping sentences. Pay attention to their explanatory text. )
I want to learn from China Ship, Tang Biao Iron Column, Song yu fu and Yuan Dynasty Leather Bag. ..... Do bead curtain painting, the volume is not as good as the twilight rain; Then I broke the wreckage and gave it all to the pale smoke. Only won a few minutes, fishing in half a river, two rows of autumn geese and a pillow of frost removal. (This is a part of the bottom line, which is far from the top line and forms a sentence of its own. The co-author is Sun Ranweng. )
Look at the lonely Phoenix Cave, the parrot's weekly release, the oriole's fishing lodge, the Jiege in Qingchuan, ... When did Cui Hao write a poem, and when did Violet stop writing? (This is part of Li Lianfang's couplet on the Yellow Crane Tower in the Qing Dynasty. There are two groups of sentences that are self-correcting. A group of four sentences, a group of two sentences, all have a leading word. )
Looking at Hankou, the sun sets, the Dongting rises far, it rains at night in Xiaoxiang, the clouds dream and the morning glow ... All these are accompanied by the ethereal flute and the fluttering of crane shadows. This is part of this couplet. )
Finally, we introduced the small Guanghan Building on Crescent Mountain in Guilin to the teacher:
The world lives up to its reputation: strange as Huangshan, secluded as Qingdao, elegant as Chibi, beautiful as Zijin, high as Jiufeng Mountain, beautiful as geese, beautiful as Tiger Hill, and lofty sentiments flowing: Top Gun, high Philip Burkart, supercilious, dusty in the chest.
People all over the world yearn for: showing off their clothes, exploring the Seven Stars, sending proud waves, singing colorful songs, boating on tree trunks, enjoying the crescent moon, appreciating the Yuhua Bridge, and playing the flute with poems. This has aroused people's imagination: farmers are willing to stay in Gansu for a long time, scholars are happy, workers are willing to show their talents, enterprises are willing to win, rivers are clear, oceans are clear and people are happy.
As you can see, after four colons, two groups of antonym sentences are self-aligned. One group is eight sentences relative, and the other group is four sentences relative.
It should be said that in the creation of poetry and prose, it is difficult or even impossible to make every pair work. In parallel prose and modern poetry, we have created some "proviso" rules which are incorrect in some sentences. Among them, there are mainly people's names, place names, dynasties, year numbers and official titles. It's just that there is a relative tolerance in the above sentence. As long as the number of words is equal, the weight in the sentence should not be too much, less than half (such as three out of seven words), and tolerance is allowed. Here are a few examples:
Love words are super high and often served; (Gao Shi, a poet in the Tang Dynasty, was a courtier of Shi San)
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Calligraphy is clear and round, Zhao Jixian. (Zhao Mengfu, calligrapher of Yuan Dynasty, bachelor of Jixian County)
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The article focuses on Zhang; (Dong Zhanghan Yoko Hirako)
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Live in quiet Wang Youcheng. (Wang Wei was the right minister in Tang Dynasty)
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Prime minister, the word residual stone; (Qin Shihuang's six carved stones on his east tour were passed down as Prime Minister Li Sishu)
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Famous mountain continues Sima Zi's long article. (Sima Qian is long, and the original sentence of "Famous Mountain in Tibet" comes from his Letter of Appointment)
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Since the literal meaning is not opposite, Pinge must be more specific. At least two endings must be even and even.
Because there are too many rightness in this respect, if there are rightness occasionally, it will stand out and be considered right. There are even pairs of names and places, and such problems often appear in contemporary awards.
Lexical and grammatical problems in duality
This problem involves both equality and duality. It is a problem that couplets are not paid much attention to, but must be paid attention to.
As we have discussed before, from the perspective of modern Chinese, we should not only pay attention to the level, but also grasp the grammatical problems. Now let's be clear: this means that in relative confrontation, the words and sentences they use should be the same in word formation and syntax, or at least similar.
In Chinese word formation, monosyllabic words can be divided into notional words and function words, which is quite clear to the ancients. Of course, polyphonic words can also be divided into these two categories. Among word formation, the word formation of root compound words is the most widely used, and the word formation of root prefix suffix is the supplement of compound word formation. Next, I don't mind the cost of words, and then express the most basic word formation and syntactic types to readers, so you can listen to them when you are familiar with them.
The main types of compound words are juxtaposition, deviation, predicate-object, predicate-complement and subject-predicate. Syntax and word formation are consistent, and relatively simple sentences can also be divided into these five categories.