How about this calligraphy?

1, good basic skills. The frame structure and strokes of Chinese characters are standardized and have their own characteristics.

2. The shortcoming is that the layout of the article is worth pondering. The connection and echo between words are not enough, and the spacing and density are not reasonable. Therefore, reading words is good, but the whole article is incoherent and difficult to show momentum. There is even a sense of disorder.