1. Please use the techniques of transition and care to write an essay about maternal love
Love
In this world, everything will change over time. Pass away and disappear, even destroy. But only maternal love is always so great and selfless and will not disappear with the passage of time.
When I was a child, before I learned how to walk, I always liked to be held by my mother. The feeling was so warm that I will never forget it. And my mother often takes me for walks. Mom, do you know? In those days, whenever I was carefully held by you, I would feel extremely proud and happy. Through the eyes of other children, I know that they are also envious of me for having such a mother. So, my mother’s arms became my second cradle at that time.
After I entered elementary school, I could no longer let my mother hold me, and my mother could no longer hold me. Mom started going in and out hand in hand with me. She expressed her love for me in her hands that had experienced vicissitudes of life. When school is over, my mother always takes my hand, gently shakes it, and asks me how I did in school that day. Being naughty, I shook your hand vigorously and "reported" my performance to my mother in a mischievous tone. Day after day, year after year, this became the biggest tacit understanding between my mother and I in elementary school.
Another step up - after junior high school. I no longer have such a leisurely time to hold hands with my mother. Every time I see her, I just shake her hand in a hurry. My mother didn't force me to do this, and she changed the way she expressed love. Whenever it was late at night and I was doing the homework that seemed to never be finished, my mother would always walk into the study gently. Or bring me a cup of fragrant milk; or bring me a sweet apple; or hand me a cup of strong coffee... so that I can deeply appreciate it even during my busy studies. To the maternal love my mother gave me.
"The thread is in the hands of a loving mother, and the clothes are on the body of a wanderer." The love of mothers in the world is actually reflected in small things like stitches and threads. Maternal love is a warm coat that always cares for your body; maternal love is a thick piece of clothing on your body that surrounds you all the time. No matter you are thousands of miles away or at the end of the world, maternal love is with you. Tightly wrapped around the body.
Ah, Mom, I will definitely remember your love deeply! 2. Write an article using the writing technique of anaphora from beginning to end
1. Gratitude to parents. The love of parents is like an evergreen tree in all seasons, and it is an indelible landscape in my heart.
Five years ago, my father and mother boarded the southbound train to work in Guangdong, leaving me at home to be taken care of by my grandma. At that time, I thought they no longer loved me or wanted me. I blamed them and hated them.
How many times my grandma asked me to answer the phone, but I ran away and ignored her. One Spring Festival two years later, my father and mother finally came back. As soon as my mother came into the house and saw me, she grabbed me and held me in her arms and started crying. She was so excited and so sad; I also I burst into tears - because I felt wronged. I had lived without the care of my parents for two whole years! But have I ever thought about who my parents are? Have you ever experienced the deep love of licking a calf? 2. Cheer for others. Cheer for others. The stage of life is very big. Everyone is both a performer and an audience. Everyone hopes to get praise and applause from others when the song ends, because we are all looking for and looking forward to it. Approval from others and society.
This kind of recognition can also be regarded as a manifestation of a confidant in a narrow sense. After all, the encouragement and praise of a good friend will allow us to continue walking in a difficult and difficult environment. But the plaudits from opponents and enemies are even more valuable.
In this modern society full of competition, opponents are everywhere. Some people are deliberately waiting for their opponents to make mistakes. They are dismissive of the success of others, resentful, and never generous to others. Give applause and a spontaneous admiration. However, you should know how to appreciate life. While appreciating yourself, you should also appreciate your friends, colleagues, and opponents.
People who don’t know how to appreciate will not experience the joy of being happy for others. A person who cheers for others must have a broad mind and not hesitate to give sincerely.
They gain friends and are moved. People’s wisdom and cultivation are reflected at this time, and their nobility shines at this time. When Zhou Yu and Zhuge Liang confronted each other, they could be said to be two heroes of the same era, equally outstanding and extraordinary, but the sentence "If you are born with Yu, how can you be born with Liang", which points out the self-proclaimed talents and all the despicable villains in recent years. Suppressed in their hearts, they cannot tolerate those around them who are happier than themselves. They turn their inferiority and suffering into a kind of hatred towards society and others. They are unfair to themselves and deceive themselves and look down on those who have worked hard and succeeded. People think that other people's success comes from the favor given to them by their family or society.
After burning with jealousy, it was Zhou Yu who died in depression. There are many people in modern times who have lost the opportunity to grasp happiness because of their dark psychology. I can't help but sigh at the sympathy between Yu Boya and Zhong Ziqi, Xiao He's sacrifice for Han Xin, and Uncle Bao and Guan Zhong's disregard of their past grudges.
If one day in this society, everyone is wary of others, and there is no sincere applause, only hypocritical deception, what kind of world will it be? Cheering for others is a kind of spiritual relief and comfort. Only when you give sincerely, you will experience the feeling of being happy because of others. I personally think Part 2 is good. On the sixth day of the first lunar month, people were still immersed in the celebration of the Spring Festival, but my father and mother told me that they had to go to Guangdong to work and had to leave that day.
I begged my mother: "Mom, I don't need pocket money every day, why don't you go out to work?" My mother said to me seriously: "Our family doesn't have much money. Think about how much it will cost to buy a house." A lot of money, you will have to spend a lot of money to go to high school and college in the future, what if we don't go out to make money?" Looking at my mother's face, I found that she was much darker than before, a lot thinner, and she seemed to be much older. . I don’t know how to dissuade him, but I just disagree with him in my heart.
In the evening, my mother let go of my hand and followed my father onto the train with tears in her eyes. The train started, and my mother leaned out of the window with her upper body, crying, waving her hands, and talking.
The ruthless wheel took away my parents, leaving me with a long wait. After my father and mother left, I couldn't eat for several days and couldn't concentrate on doing homework.
When my grandma saw this scene, she enlightened me and said: "Shang Feng, you are a sensible child. You must know that your father and mother work very hard. They have to work for more than ten hours a day, and sometimes they work overtime all night and cannot sleep. You You should eat well, study hard, and bring honor to them."
After listening to my grandma’s words, I understood that it was not easy for my parents to work outside the home, but I didn’t understand them, how I shouldn’t have done it! I burst into tears of regret. One night, the phone rang, and I picked up the phone and heard my mother's voice: "Shang Feng, are you not sick?...How are you studying?...Listen to grandma..." From then on, every Saturday, I would always hear from On the phone, I heard the greetings and instructions from my mother and father thousands of miles away.
I feel from the depths of my heart that the love parents have for their children is meticulous, selfless and great. My grandma told me that my mother had a difficult labor when she gave birth to me. She was in pain for three days and three nights in the hospital bed. At the last critical moment, the doctor asked whether to save the child or the adult. The mother said without hesitation: "Save the child and leave a root for the Zhao family!" The father signed the guarantee with tears in his eyes.
Fortunately, I was born, and my mother passed through hell twelve hours later. When I heard this, my throat was so stiff that I couldn't express it in words, so I could only express my gratitude to my mother and father for their overwhelming kindness in giving birth to me.
"Whoever speaks an inch of grass will be rewarded with three rays of spring." How can we repay our parents for their kindness in giving birth? I often tell myself to be self-disciplined and self-improvement, and not to let my parents worry about my study and life.
I study very hard and get excellent grades. Despite this, grandma still often nags me, and I never contradict her because I know she is doing it for my own good.
Grandma loves me, and I love grandma too. Once, my grandma suffered from high blood pressure and fainted. I was so panicked that I didn’t know what to do. I immediately calmed down, thinking that I was a little man in the family. My parents were not at home, so I should take care of grandma for them.
So, I invited my neighbors and sent my grandma to the hospital. I went to school during the day and sat by the bedside to take care of my grandma at night. Five days later, my grandma was discharged from the hospital. She was so happy that she always praised me when she met everyone. Her wrinkled face often smiled like a blooming peony.
Later, when my mother found out about this, she praised me for growing up and being grateful. My heart felt sweeter than eating honey. A father's love is as deep as a mountain, and a mother's love is as deep as the sea.
Let us always remember the kindness of our parents in giving birth and learning. 3. Write a 600-word morning reading composition using the technique of back-and-forth care
I have a class teacher who is loved by everyone. She is of medium build, has a face with an oval, and wears a pair of glasses high on the bridge of her nose. Hidden behind the glasses are bright eyes, always looking at others kindly. Sometimes he was smiling and not serious at all, so everyone felt cordial and comfortable. But sometimes, some classmates irritated her face, just like the weather in October, which changes at any time, from sunny to cloudy. Although she may be very serious sometimes, she really cares about her classmates.
I remember that once the test papers were handed out, my grades were not very satisfactory. At this time, the teacher happened to walk by and saw her, but she was not angry. She just patted my shoulder with one hand and pointed to the test paper with one hand. He solved the wrong questions for me and said to me: "Don't give up, keep working hard!" After listening to it, I felt much better. Teacher Zhuang also comforted other students and soothed their hearts.
There were many times when the poor students in the class either couldn’t do their homework or they always made mistakes. However, Teacher Zhuang never lost confidence in these poor students and instead brought them to the office. She explained them question by question and taught them how to write question by question. She was very patient and never got bored. The students also made progress bit by bit with the help and encouragement of Teacher Zhuang. Teacher Zhuang saw it and was extremely happy.
Teacher XX, you are an excellent teacher and the best in our hearts! Thank you for caring for us; thank you for giving us a wealth of knowledge; thank you for not giving up on us and believing in us. We have thousands of things to say to you, but we want to say one thing to you the most: "Thank you, Teacher XX! 4. Use clues, anaphora, and structural skills to write a composition
I develop Before I got into a good habit, I really didn’t like reading extracurricular books
Because there were a lot of new words in the books that I didn’t understand.
And. Too annoying and tired. After I finish my homework, I just want to watch cartoons. Sometimes I go downstairs at night to skate, ride bikes, and play badminton in the community... My dad says that I look like a "little second-rate kid."
I said to my dad: "I don't want to be a 'little second-rate'. Dad said seriously: "Then you have to change it."
I reluctantly said to my dad, "I have to take my time." "Yes, yes."
‘Three feet of ice does not freeze in one day’. "Dad said to me with a smile.
I didn't understand, "What do you mean? "I looked at Dad with wide eyes. Dad said strangely: "That's right.
You have to read more books. The more you read, the more you will understand. "Then, my father told me how to read and assigned reading tasks.
My father went to the city library specially, got me a library card, and borrowed children's books with pinyin Show me the book. I am often moved by the stories of the characters in the book, and I cry quietly in my room.
Sometimes the stories in the book are very funny, and I often laugh. He smiled and said to me: “Crazy! ” Now, I like to read extracurricular books the most.
Sometimes, I read during recess. Sometimes at night, I don’t want to sleep, so I hide in the bathroom and sit on the toilet to read.
Dad often said: "It's so late, go to bed early.
Don't spoil your eyes. "
My mother said heartbrokenly: "My eyes are already nearsighted and I haven't paid attention yet. ah! " After reading too many books, I finally understood what "three feet of ice does not grow in a day" means: knowledge is accumulated slowly.
I now have a good habit of reading books. I I have read a lot of books and understood a lot of truths.
Extracurricular books are my best friends. 5. Use the method of before and after to write the composition "In the depths of my memory"
In my memory, there have been too many people, and they all come alive in my mind. But the person who impressed me the most is my grandma.
Fifth grade One day, when school was over, it suddenly started to rain heavily. The raindrops were as big as soybeans. They dripped on the ground like cannonballs and splashed water. The students all held their "shields" - umbrellas and bravely rushed to the ground. In the dense "fire", I was the only one standing in the classroom, helpless. Who told me to be too careless when I went out?
The wind was blowing, " The "artillery fire" came more violently. Several times I wanted to rush out, but every time I rushed out, I was blocked by the ruthless "cannonballs". There was no way, the formation was like a deserter on the battlefield who was defeated. .I had no choice but to wait for my mother to pick me up.
Suddenly, I saw a figure in the distance, walking towards me with difficulty. Several times, the person’s umbrella was almost blown by the wind. Blow down. At this time, she suddenly stepped into the pond and almost fell, but he still braved the biting cold wind and cold raindrops, and moved towards me step by step. I suddenly felt that this figure was very familiar, but I couldn't remember it for a moment, and after thinking about it, the figure was already in front of me. I looked closely, my God, it was my grandma! She was soaked all over, and her face looked tired. I couldn't control it anymore. Emotionally, I called "Grandma" and threw myself into her arms...
Along the way, the familiar scenery on the street was blurry in my eyes. I couldn't see clearly. Only the smile on Grandma's face was The sweat and rain were very clear in my sight. I couldn't bear it anymore. Tears flowed freely down my chin...
Grandma, my good grandma, you are the person I love most. , your weather-beaten face will always be engraved in my heart! 6. Use clues, echoes, and structural techniques to write an essay
Before I developed a good habit, I didn’t like watching extracurriculars.
Because there were many new words in the book and I couldn’t understand what they said.
I was so bored and tired after finishing my homework. I would watch cartoons, and sometimes go downstairs at night to skate, ride bikes, and play badminton in the community... My dad said that I looked like a "little second-rate kid."
I said to my dad, "I'm okay." I don't want to be a 'little second-rate'. Dad said seriously: "Then you have to change it."
I reluctantly said to my dad, "I have to take my time." "Yes, yes."
‘Three feet of ice does not freeze in one day’. "Dad said to me with a smile.
I didn't understand, "What do you mean? "I looked at Dad with wide eyes. Dad said strangely: "That's right.
You have to read more books. The more you read, the more you will understand. "Then, my father told me how to read and assigned reading tasks.
My father went to the city library specially, got me a library card, and borrowed children's books with pinyin Show me the book. I am often moved by the stories of the characters in the book, and I cry quietly in my room.
Sometimes the stories in the book are very funny, and I often laugh. He smiled and said to me: “Crazy! ” Now, I like to read extracurricular books the most.
Sometimes, I read during recess. Sometimes at night, I don’t want to sleep, so I hide in the bathroom and sit on the toilet to read.
Dad often said: "It's so late, go to bed early. Don't spoil your eyes. "
My mother said heartbrokenly: "My eyes are already nearsighted and I haven't paid attention yet.
ah! " After reading too many books, I finally understood what "three feet of ice does not grow in a day" means: knowledge is accumulated slowly.
I now have a good habit of reading books. I I have read a lot of books and learned a lot of truths.
Extracurricular books are my best friends. 7. Five ways of anaphora in writing. 1. Beginning and ending. Echo. The beginning and end of the article echo each other. For example, the beginning of the article explains the background, describes the scenery, expresses the emotion, explains the truth, etc., and emphasizes it again at the end of the article to make the article coherent.
2. Round and anaphoric. That is, the first and last content are rounded into two. For example, "I am this kind of person":
Beginning: My personality is not as gentle as that of ordinary girls, and I have thick eyebrows. Big eyes, loud voice, always rough-handed in doing things, a bit like Zhang Fei, so I got the nickname "Zhang Fei"
Ending: Okay, my self-introduction is over. Yes. Let me declare: Now my classmates no longer call me "Zhang Fei", but call me "Little Athlete". I am already a well-trained and veritable top athlete.
3. Repeat the beginning. For example, "I Love the Scenery of My Hometown":
Beginning: My hometown is a small mountain village in Miyun, northeast of Beijing. The scenery is charming!
Ending: I love the charming scenery of my hometown. 4. Cause and effect. That is, explaining the cause or result of things at the beginning, and pointing out the results or causes of things at the end. . For example, "Hometown Has Changed":
Beginning: In the past, my hometown was a famous poor mountain village within a few dozen miles.
Ending: Thank you ***, it is the party’s policy of enriching the people that has changed my hometown.
5. Questions and answers. That is, ask a question at the beginning and give a brief and summarized answer at the end. "Introduce Me":
Beginning: I am a girl who is in sixth grade this year and is about to graduate from elementary school. Do you want to get to know me? Do you want to know some of my "secrets"? >
Ending: This is me, a little girl who loves beauty and loves to throw away the "golden beans" when encountering problems. 8. Composition using the writing technique of describing scenes
Writing technique refers to the use of works in writing. Better artistic expression techniques include expressions, rhetorical techniques, expression techniques, etc.
Expression refers to the way you use to reflect social life, express thoughts and feelings, and introduce things when writing articles. Methods. There are five commonly used expression methods, namely: narrative (narration), discussion, lyricism, description and explanation.
Writing method, also called expression technique, refers to the shaping of image and reflection in literary creation. Various specific methods and techniques used in life, including: contrast, symbolism, supporting objects to express aspirations (supporting objects to metaphor people), expressing desires before suppressing them, setting off (contrast), exaggeration and irony, expressing emotions through scenes, and echoing before and after, etc. For example, the article "Praise to the Poplar" praises the farmers in the north by praising the tall and upward and indomitable spirit of the poplar tree, using a symbolic writing method.
Rhetorical techniques, also called rhetorical methods, refer to methods of modifying, processing, and polishing the language used in the writing process to improve the effect of language expression. Including: metaphor, parallelism, personification, contrast, exaggeration, metonymy, rhetorical question, hypothetical question, duality, repetition, etc.
Writing techniques are divided according to titles:
First-person narrative method
Since the content of the article is conveyed to the reader through "I", it means that what is written in the article Everything is what the narrator has seen and heard with his own eyes and ears, or is the narrator's own personal experience, which gives readers a cordial and real feeling. Using the first person, since the narrator is the person involved, the people and things narrated can only be those within the scope of "my" activities. People and things outside the scope of activities cannot be written in, and must be analyzed in detail.
Third-person narrative method
Using the third-person narrative method, the narrator is not limited by space or time, nor by physical or psychological constraints. He can directly describe the content in the article. People and things are displayed in front of readers, reflecting social life freely and flexibly. But third-person narratives are often not as intimate and natural as first-person narratives.
According to the narrative method:
Sequential narration
Sequential narration is to narrate things in chronological order, which is consistent with the actual occurrence and development of things. , so it is easy to write the article clearly and clearly. When using narration, pay attention to proper tailoring and focused emphasis. Otherwise, it is easy to list and make a straightforward statement, like a running account, which makes reading boring.
Flashback method
Flashback is not a narration of the entire event in reverse, but a method of narrating it in sequence except for moving certain parts forward. There are generally three situations in which flashbacks are used: first, in order to express the central idea of ??the article, the part that best expresses the central idea is brought to the front and highlighted; second, in order to make the structure of the article rich in changes and avoid straightforward narration; third, in order to express the central idea. The need for effect makes the article twists and turns, creating suspense and fascinating. When flashbacks, the starting point should be clearly stated. There must be clear boundaries between flashbacks and forward narrations, as well as necessary text transitions to achieve a natural connection. Be especially careful not to turn it over and over aimlessly, making the article unclear.
Narrative method
Narrative is to express the central need of the article. Sometimes it is to help readers understand the plot of the story; sometimes it is to annotate and explain the plot of the characters. The use of narration must comply with the need to express the central idea, and must not add extraneous details or overwhelm the main idea. When inserting narrative, we should also pay attention to the transition, reference and connection of the article, and there should be no traces of breaks.
Supplementary narration method
Supplementary narration is mainly used to supplement the above narrative. It is usually fragmentary and brief, and does not contain complete events. It can also explain or explain The text is placed in front to trigger the following. The role of supplementary narration generally does not develop plots or events, but only enriches and supplements the original narrative.
Sub-narrative method
The function of sub-narrative is to write the complicated and complex things clearly and orderly. In divided narratives, one thing can be narrated first and then another, or several things can be narrated overlappingly. When using divided narration, the narrative clues should be established based on the content of the article and the need to express the central idea, and the time when each event occurs and develops should be clearly explained.
Detailed narrative method
Detailed narrative is generally used to describe the development and change process of each event in detail. When describing in detail, you should grasp the characteristics of the characters or the details of the events and describe them in detail and detail. When composing, the parts closely related to the central idea should be described in detail. Those that have little to do with the central idea but need to be explained will be passed over in a few strokes. Otherwise, the article will appear uncentered or multi-centered, which will appear cumbersome.
Brief narration
The function of brief narration is to explain the content that is indispensable in the occurrence and development of the event but does not need to be described in detail. It is combined with detailed narration to make the entire narrative both detailed and brief, alternating between sparse and dense, forming the ups and downs of the narrative. Summary is generally used at the beginning and end of the article; the part that is generally related to the central idea; the part that is well-known. 9. From that moment on Composition
From that moment on, I understood the meaning of spring between winter and summer. From that moment on, I realized the importance of failure and success. ——Inscription
When the sky is no longer gloomy, the wind is no longer howling, and the grass quietly pokes its head out to look around, I understand - spring is here.
Walking in the spring garden, everything is so fresh. After being imprisoned in the cold winter for many days, I feel so comfortable at this moment.
Look, the cautious grass sprouted a small head and looked around tentatively: "Is the spring girl coming? Is winter far away?" The gentle wind immediately carried a little warmth and a little sunshine. , the unique breath of spring caressed his head, it was an answer to him! So, the grass was happy, growing section by section like going up stairs, and the sound of their growth could be heard in the whole yard. What I saw in front of me was no longer the white snow and ice before the moon, but dots of fresh green, which soon turned into a thick green velvet blanket.
On the hillside, scattered patches of residual snow are still struggling to support themselves, but the mountain flowers have already shown their long-lost smiles, and the branches have sprouted new buds. The river started to run, and there was a little bit of green dancing to accompany the arrival of spring. Close your eyes, as if you can already smell the scent of peach blossoms and apricot blossoms; as if you can already see the bright sun swimming in the green underworld, but you can't get into the earth despite your efforts.
In the corner of the wall, the figures of hard-working ants can be vaguely seen, busy on the earth, but they do not forget to praise spring. Among the flowers and plants, a few small yellow-black insects are dancing, oh, they are bees! I haven’t seen them for half a year, but they are still so adorable. On the branches, the cicada has been crawling here without knowing it, clearing its throat, always ready to sing a song. Before I knew it, the scene of hundreds of ants scurrying around appeared before my eyes; I could taste the taste of honey in my mouth; and the sound of "cicada" echoed in my ears.
Wandering in the spring garden, my mind suddenly recalled the childlike joy of looking for spring in the cold winter, and the loveliness of dreaming about summer in the continuous spring rain. I seemed to vaguely realize the revelation that Miss Chun brought to us: "In suffering, we have to look for the fire of hope. When the fire of hope is found by you, then can the glorious tomorrow be far away?"
Walking in the spring garden, the suffering of winter has passed, the spring of hope has been found, and the glory of summer is about to come. At this time, my heart felt like still water, because from that moment on, I understood the relationship between winter, spring and summer, the relationship between suffering, hope and glory, and the most important philosophy in life - "In suffering Look for hope, hope contains brilliance."