Xiamen College Entrance Examination essay winner Xing Yajie appreciates Zhuangzi's indifference
Xing Yajie, whose name has the word "elegant" in it, wrote a very "elegant" high-level essay with full marks in the college entrance examination examination room In terms of composition, she is the only one from Xiamen who has "surfaced" so far and has received a perfect score in the college entrance examination. Teacher Luo from Shuangshi Middle School, who called the reporter to tell the reporter the good news, said, "It was one of the full-score essays that was published in the Commercial Daily immediately, and the title was "Yifao Tobacco Ren Jiangping"." (For details, see this newspaper's June issue. Reported on Page A8 on the 20th)
It is said that after the school Chinese teacher called her and asked about the topic of her essay, the 18-year-old double ten girl was not too surprised when the teacher told her that it was a perfect score.
Appreciate the "mineral water"-like indifference and freedom of Zhuangzi
Xing Yajie said in an interview with reporters yesterday that when she came across this essay topic, she was even a little confused. She spent 10 She spent several minutes thinking about the topic. Later, among the three options of "juice, coffee and mineral water", she chose "plain" to get to the point. She immediately connected the mineral water with her favorite Zhuangzi, "I like Zhuangzi." That kind of indifferent, free and easy attitude towards life." After leaving the examination room, I was still a little scared - would I go off topic?
The title of this full-score essay comes from a sentence in Su Shi's poem "Ding Fengbo", "One life behind the curtain of mist and rain", which refers to the detachment of facing the ups and downs of life with indifference and not fearing the ups and downs. feelings. When drafting the title of the essay, Xing Yajie made changes based on the context described.
The reason why she wrote about Zhuangzi, Xing Yajie said, is because she likes Zhuangzi who is difficult to "get close to" in the eyes of many peers, especially works such as "Xiaoyaoyou".
Double Ten Chinese teacher Yang Jisheng commented that the entire article is very fresh in terms of writing style and language, and the use of language is very flexible. The materials used are not mechanically copied and piled up, but are familiar materials. Through your own understanding, you can naturally integrate the ideas into your own and make them your own; in addition, integrating things from Chinese classical culture into your works is full of cultural flavor, so it is easier to "jump" out of many compositions.
Composition experience: Usually focus on "accumulation of materials"
Xing Yajie also has a very "elegant" interest and started learning calligraphy in the fourth grade of primary school. A Chinese teacher who is familiar with Xing Yajie said that her grades have always been very good. Among the more than 300 liberal arts students in the school, her grades have always been within the top 7.
When asked how to learn Chinese, Xing Yajie always emphasized "accumulation". She said that first of all, she is interested and usually reads more "Everyone" articles, which is very helpful to improve her literary skills; in addition, she usually reads newspapers, digests, etc. to understand current affairs; as for practicing writing, "I want to Just write whatever you want to write," Xing Yajie said. She has loved writing essays since she was a child, and her essays were often used as models by teachers.
Xing Yajie usually loves to read prose, and she loves to read "literary texts." , she will think about it after reading the book. She also has a good habit of making her own "material accumulation" book since the second year of high school. Once she has a good story, good words, etc., she will accumulate it and use it later to make it her own. .