In the cool breeze,
Dawn is slowly giving birth.
Oh, the birth of light turns out that poetry is so painful.
Look over the hill.
Red blood is seeping through Chu.
Comments: The writing skills are not solid, and the artistic conception is OK.
(2) Thunder
Young smile
Hidden Love
A good jar of wine.
Unfinished ideal
A heart waiting to burn.
Comments: A little philosophical.
(3) Yuan Yuan
On the broken pillar-
Tilting China.
The burning sky
Sunset yang is redder than blood. ...
Comments: concise, vivid and profound.
(D) Sunset Yang Mu
One day passed,
The sunset glow sprinkled on my face. How much did I send to the earth today?
There is a seal received there.
Comments: image.