Autumn enters Yunshan, and everything is chic. All kinds of scenery are picturesque. Feng Dan leaves the edge of Yun Lan, and the yellow flowers are under the rocks.
I have been happy for a beautiful day, and I am pitiful for a clearer night. A bright moon hangs at the top of the forest. Song Lao often talked with the savage period and got carried away.
Label: writing mountain language on a moonlit night.
The mountain is now in autumn, and the scenery in the mountain is refreshing and beautiful. There are many landscapes, just like a painting. Maple leaves are everywhere, all the way to the edge of the cloud, where the rocks are deep. Countless chrysanthemums are scattered.
The annual Mid-Autumn Festival is celebrated by everyone. When the weather is fine, a bright moon hangs on the treetops. The annual Mid-Autumn Festival is celebrated by everyone. When the weather is fine, a bright moon hangs on the treetops. I often drink and chat with people in Shan Ye in the moonlight.
Notes on Walking in Tasha Autumn and Entering Yunshan (1): Entering Autumn.
(2) "Feng Dan": also known as frost leaves and red leaves.
(3) Ye Wan: It is said that there are many maple leaves there.
(4) "Yun Lan": blue and white clouds.
(5) "Yellow flowers are a thousand points": there are countless chrysanthemums.
(6) "Under the secluded rock": the deep place of the rock.
(7) "Hanging on the treetops": Hanging on the treetops.
(8) "Songlao": It is the wine brewed by Takamatsu.
(9) "constant company": point out the interest and enjoy it.
(10) "Savage": Shan Ye people.
(1 1) "Period": the meaning of dating.
(12) Get carried away: It is a portrayal of the hermit's carefree and informal style.
(13) "* * * Nothing to do: talk about land together.
Appreciation of Treading in Autumn into Yunshan The title of Treading in Sand is taken from Han Yi's Treading in Spring Creek and Sand Grass. Cao Guan's word is "Free Day", and Zhao Changqing's word is "Liu Changchun". Double tone, 58 words. Three rhymes.
The first picture of Zhang Lun's Walking on the Beach is about the mountain scenery in autumn, and the next picture is about the Mid-Autumn Festival. "Autumn enters Yunshan, things are chic, and all kinds of scenery are comparable to pictures." The first sentence uses the word "autumn" to indicate festivals, then uses the word "into" to write the dynamics of Qiu Lai, and then uses the word "mountain" to indicate the place where autumn enters. There is a word "cloud" in front, pointing out that the mountain is high above the clouds. Through these four words, the meaning of this word describing Akiyama is explained. Next, use the second sentence to write about the changes brought about by autumn entering Yunshan. The word "sense of things" refers to the modality of scenery in the mountains. "chic" is a delicate and beautiful appearance. These two words best express the charm of autumn scenery. For example, Du Fu's "Poems of Yuhua Palace": "The sounds are really loud, and the autumn colors are chic." Zhang Lun said that "things are natural and unrestrained", which not only talked about the role of autumn in things, but also talked about the feelings of the scenery. As if everything in the mountains is sentient beings, Qiu Lai looks chic. From the "natural and unrestrained" of "material sense", we can see the poet's natural and unrestrained brushwork and the poet's clear rhyme. I am in the scene, I am in the scene, and the feelings are far-reaching. I try my best to appreciate love. Then the third sentence is followed by a sentence "All kinds of scenery are comparable to pictures". "All kinds of landscapes" are extremely diverse and contain infinite poetry, so they are said to be "comparable to pictures". The word Zhang Lun can be said to be painted into a poem, and there are pictures in the poem. In the mountains, the autumn scenery is absolutely beautiful and there are many things to see. It is necessary to make a choice to write the beauty of autumn mountain with the most typical scenery, so the poet wrote two scenes of Feng Dan and Huanghua with the wonderful pen of flowers.
"Feng Dan has a thousand leaves and blue clouds, and the yellow flowers are under the rocks." These are two beautiful antitheses. The first sentence, "Feng Dan", also known as frost leaves and red leaves. It is called "Feng Dan" because the maple leaves are frosty red and bright as Dan. "Ten thousand leaves" is a great saying that there are many maple leaves. The word "Feng Dan leaves late" sets off the mountains and mountains, dyeing the scenery of Wanshan. "Yun Lan", blue and white clouds. The word "bian" at the end of a sentence is a word that cannot be ignored. The position of Feng Dan and the height of the mountain are both indicated by this word. It shows that the flaming maple leaves are stacked on top of each other, climbing to the top of the mountain and spreading to the side of Yun Lan. It depicts the beautiful scenery of Yun Lan with red leaves, mountains and blue sky, Feng Dan as brocade and mountains as embroidery. Du Mu, a poet in the late Tang Dynasty, wrote a quatrain in "Walking the Mountain": "There are people in Bai Yunsheng, where the stone path is oblique. Stop and sit in the maple forest late, and the frost leaves are red in February. " The last two sentences are also famous, describing the beauty of the frost leaves in the maple forest and the endless fun of enjoying love. Du Mu uses metaphor to write the red color of frost leaves, and Zhang Lun uses Yun Lan to set off the color of Feng Dan. Each has its own merits, but the same result is the same. In order to describe the beauty of red leaves, ancient poets were brilliant and profound. Yang Wanli once wrote a poem called Autumn Mountain. The poem says: "I was dyed in 1959 and was mistaken for iron soap scarlet." Xiaofeng stole wine all night, but she was lonely and drunk. " Xiao Feng's drunken image is very funny because of its romantic style and personification. If we look at Zhang Lun's words, "Yellow Flower", that is, Huang Ju, is called "Yellow Flower" because of its golden color. From a distance, the "thousand spots" are small and numerous, which also shows their wide distribution. "Hidden Rock", a quiet mountain rock. There are rocks and secluded places, indicating lush vegetation, full of green. The word "Xia" points out Jin Ju's position, which is deep in the rock. Countless chrysanthemums, scattered like scattered gold and broken yellow, are embedded in the evergreen bushes, which are particularly bright and eye-catching, depicting the beautiful scenery of rocks and valleys with emerald hair.
In ancient times, I wrote poems about Feng Dan and Huanghua, and there were countless cars. But there are many people who speak and few people who write at the same time. Even if you write at the same time, it is difficult to find a wonderful sentence comparable to this. Zhu Qingyu's "Watching Tao" wrote that "high-rise buildings are endless, and yellow flowers surround the county", which can be described as beautiful and interesting, but it is slightly inferior after all. In Zhang Lun's two sentences, as far as the picture is concerned, the prominent main scenes are Feng Dan and Huanghua, which are set off by blue clouds and secluded rocks respectively. Distant heights, under the background of light ink, with strong colors; In deep places, bright colors are pointed out on the substrate dyed with a heavy pen. Seeing is thicker than light, seeing is thicker than light, light and shade change, and the contrast is strong, which constitutes a colorful and far-reaching autumn mountain picture, which fully shows the poet's artistic talent in describing scenery. The ancients said, "Jiangshan writes poems in a clear way." It is this lovely natural scenery that inspired the poet to write these two beautiful words. On the other hand, good poetry is obtained through long-term creative practice. In this respect, ancient poets felt deeply and had rich experience. Du Xunhe believes that writing poetry must be persistent and never stop. The so-called "life should not stop, death should not sing." At the age of 84, Lu You continued to work hard, saying that "there is no worry about poetry for three days" and became the most prolific poet, leaving tens of thousands of poems in his life. In order to consider a poem or a word, poets often put all their energy into the accumulation of poems and immediately set up special tips. Every time they get something, they need to write a book with Jia Dao in the bag as the word "push" and "knock". They were so fascinated that they even rode into Han Yu's honor guard without knowing it. He wrote bitterly, even to the point of "two sentences in three years, one tear and two streams". There are sweet and bitter, and it's a long story. Meng Jiao, another bitter poet, kept burning incense and reading day and night in order to write better, saying, "Studying at night laments ghosts and gods." There is also a Lu Yanrang, who is even more adventurous and arrogant. He has tried his best to "sing a song" and even "break a few stems", saying that "don't bother looking for danger, and the sea will dry up." Wait, the list goes on. We don't advocate making sentences behind closed doors, making them out of nothing and carving them blindly. But carefully choosing words, assiduously honing and writing with a serious attitude are the primary conditions for writing good poems and words. Wang Anshi's Spring Breeze and Green Jiang Nanan is a well-known sentence, in which the word "green" is vividly written, which can be used as the sound of a stone thrown on the ground, but it was obtained after more than a dozen revisions. Du Fu, a great realistic poet, has the best talent theory. However, he is always meticulous in his creation, and often "changes new poems and plays and sings". Moreover, the older his poems are, the more rigorous they become. He said, "The later he comes, the better his poems are", and "the words are not amazing and endless". Throughout the ages, countless examples have proved an eternal law, that is, writers not only need talent, but more importantly, they must have a serious creative attitude in order to cast good poems and write good works. From this point of view, Zhang Lun's two words, although only fourteen words, are hard-won and painstaking.
The next movie changed the first three sentences and wrote about the beauty of jathyapple in the Mid-Autumn Festival. "I am already happy for a beautiful day and more sympathetic to a sunny night. A bright moon hangs in the forest. " Mid-Autumn Festival is an annual festival, which is celebrated by everyone, so it is called "Happy". When the sky is clear, the night sky is as clear as washing, so I am particularly happy, so I say "what a pity". Here we turn from freehand brushwork to landscape painting and point out "a bright moon". The full moon is like a wheel, hanging high at the top of the forest. Yin Hui sprinkles lights and candles, which is a good time to enjoy the moon. So there are two clouds at the end of the sentence: "Song Lao often talks with savages and gets carried away." "Song Lao", the wine brewed with Gao Song, Li Shangyin said in "Back to Peiming House": "Taking Song Lao on credit is a dispute with wine." "Savage", a Shan Ye man. "Period" means dating. Get carried away, from Zhuangzi Jean Wang: "Those who cultivate their aspirations get carried away, and those who cultivate their physique forget their benefits." Du Fu's "Drunk Songs" says: "Get carried away, drink like a true teacher." Poets in Zhang Lun often meet and drink with people in Shan Ye, and they hit it off with each other. They talked casually in the moonlight, and their indifferent mood was integrated with the quiet moonlight, showing a relaxed and pleasant life in the mountains.
To sum up, we can see that this word is very distinctive in language. Harmony in sound and rhyme, beauty in speech and meaning, beauty in beauty, kindness and nature. The poet really achieved perfection in language art.
Zhang Lunsheng, the author of Autumn in Yunshan, was born around 1 162. He was born in Kaifeng (now Henan). The average year of residence, birth and death are unknown. He lived in Shaoxing, Song Gaozong around the end of the year. Good lyrics, every word must be done, and the palace will pay for it.
Zhang Lun's other works ○ Complaining about love ○ Playing the lyre in his spare time.
Time flies when you are drunk.
○ Frosty days, small corners, small winds and curtains.
○ Chao Zhongcuo snuff picks and stops at night.
○ More works by Zhang Lun