2. Appreciation of the essay "Spring" and reading answers:
Please use one or two words to summarize the characteristics of spring flowers and spring rains in the text. (2 points)
Spring flowers: spring rain:
9. What mood does the author express when "expectation, expectation" is used together? ( 1)
10. Experience the expressive effect of words. (4 points)
How about replacing the word "drill" in "Hidden Grass" with the word "long"? Why?
2 "Peach trees, apricot trees and pear trees, you won't let me, I won't let you, they are all full of flowers." What is the expression effect of "catching up with children" in Chinese?
1 1. When the author writes about the spring breeze, what kind of feelings does he write through? Please analyze the first sentence in detail (3 points)
12. Bai Juyi's Spring Tour in Qiantang is also a poem praising spring. Please use 60 words to describe "how many early warblers compete for warm trees, and whose new swallow pecks at spring mud". (4 points)
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8. Flowers are bright, light, slender and moist.
9. Expressed the author's longing for spring.
10.① Not good. Because the word "drill" describes the squeezing force of spring grass breaking through the ground, it highlights the power and tenacious vitality of grass germination. The word "long" can only express the general growth state, and there is no expression effect of the word "drill".
(2) Using personification rhetoric, it vividly shows the situation that all kinds of flowers are competing to bloom.
1 1. Written by human touch, taste and hearing. The first sentence compares the spring breeze to the mother's hand, cleverly writing the warm and gentle characteristics of the spring breeze.
12. Vivid language image and accurate expression can be scored.
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3. Appreciation of the article "Spring", about 200 words. When we go deep into the artistic realm of "spring", we will be intoxicated by the beautiful spring scenery, infected by overflowing poetry and inspired by abundant vitality.
Spring will emerge a beautiful picture full of poetry and painting in our hearts. The scenery depicted in Spring is full of vigor and breath of life.
"When I look at things, everything is my color." When people look at foreign things, emotions will be projected into them, making them look human. Mr Zhu Guangqian, an aesthete, called this phenomenon "the humanization of the universe". He said: "the phenomenon of empathy can be called' humanization of the universe', because with empathy, only physical things can have human feelings, while inanimate things can have life."
You see, in Mr. Zhu Ziqing's pen, in spring, "everything seems to have just woken up", and the sun's face is red; "Wild flowers are everywhere: miscellaneous, named and unnamed, scattered in the grass, like eyes, like stars, still blinking"; Spring breeze "touches you like a mother's hand"; "Birds nest in flowers and leaves. They are very happy. Call friends to show off her crisp voice and sing a melody that blends with the light wind and flowing water. " The author feels the scenery of spring with his heart, pours his feelings into it, and makes the scenery vivid and vivid through artistic techniques such as metaphor and personification. Mr. Zhu Ziqing once said: "Realism is equivalent to the theory of" vivid "or" vivid ",not only that, but also that."
It can be said that Mr. Zhu Ziqing's prose has reached such an artistic realm. "Spring" is exquisitely described and full of emotion.
Looking forward to spring is the beginning of the article. The author wrote: "Looking forward to, looking forward to, the east wind is coming, and the pace of spring is coming soon."
Putting the two "expectations" together shows how eager we are to look forward to the arrival of spring. The east wind is coming, reporting the news of spring. Listen, the pace of spring is near.
In just a dozen words, the author's serious and joyful mood is fully expressed. The author carefully observed the mountains, water and sun in early spring.
"The mountains are moist", which means that the snow is melting, the spring is bright, and the tender grass is green, which is particularly refreshing and moist. The blush of the sun personifies the sun, which not only shows the warmth of spring, but also captures the characteristics of spring and shows the inner charm of spring.
To write about the mountains, water and sun in early spring is to start from a big point and outline a general outline for the following detailed description. In the following, the author describes the scene of spring from the aspects of spring grass, spring flowers, spring breeze, spring rain and people in spring.
The grass crept out of the soil, tender and green ... the wind was quiet and the grass was soft. How vividly the word "drill" is used; How do "tender, green" and "soft grass" write the characteristics of early spring grass succinctly and richly.
Flowers are more beautiful in spring. How enthusiastic the flowers are: "Peach trees, apricot trees and pear trees are full of flowers to chase, and you won't let me or I won't let you"; How beautiful the color of the flowers is: "red as fire, pink as chardonnay, white as snow"; How pleasant the taste of that flower is: "There is sweetness in the flower; When I closed my eyes, the tree seemed to be covered with peaches, Xinger and pears.
Hundreds of bees are buzzing under the flowers, and butterflies of different sizes are flying around. "There are wild flowers", scattered in the grass, like eyes, like stars, still flashing. "
"The shadow of the ancient wood is short, and the stick helps me cross the bridge east. The clothes are wet with apricot flowers and rain, and the face is not cold. "
When spring shines on the earth, the willows spit out new green, and the breeze gently blows on people's faces, which is warm and soft, making people feel no chill. The author describes the spring breeze with "blowing the face without cold breeze", and then captures a vivid and intimate metaphor "touching you like a mother's hand" to describe the charm of the spring breeze.
Then, the author wrote the taste of spring breeze with extremely delicate brushstrokes: "The wind brings some newly turned earthy smell, mixed with the smell of grass, and the fragrance of various flowers, all brewing in the slightly moist air." Finally, write down the music of the spring breeze-the dancing songs of birds and the piccolo of a shepherd boy riding on the back of a cow.
"The scenery that is difficult to write is like now", and the author wrote the spring breeze that is difficult to write through with vivid pen and ink. When the author was writing about the spring rain, he first wrote about the characteristics of the spring rain: "Like ox hair, like a needle, like a filament, it is densely woven diagonally, and there is a thin layer of smoke on the roof."
Then write the scenery in the rain, and paint a quiet and beautiful picture of ink and spring rain. Spring is like this. What are people like in spring? Spring has come, "every family in the city and countryside, old and young, has come out one by one."
Relax your muscles, cheer up and do your duty. People who have been dormant for a winter have ushered in the joy of warm weather.
People are full of hope because "a year's plan lies in spring", and they have just started, so they have plenty of time and hope. At the end of spring, the author always uses three metaphors to describe spring.
Spring is new, and it has strong vitality: "Spring is like a newborn doll, new from head to toe, and it is growing." Spring is beautiful and lively: "Spring is like a little girl, dressed beautifully, laughing and walking."
Spring is strong: "Spring is like a strong young man with iron arms and legs, leading us forward." From the newborn doll to the little girl and then to the youth, the order described in this paper is also intriguing, and different scenes at different times are written.
The structure of Spring is rigorous and exquisite. The author always writes spring first, then describes it in detail in several aspects, and finally writes it in order to wrap up the full text and make the finishing point. The article begins with "the footsteps are near" and ends with "leading us forward", beginning with personification and ending with personification. Its conceptual layout and rhetorical embellishment are quite ingenious.
As for the fresh, simple and meaningful language of Beauty and Elegance, people can feel the feeling of "extremely positive and mellow taste".
4. Zhu Ziqing's appreciation of Spring is no less than 15 sentences, almost 1. Birds nest in flowers and leaves. They are very happy. Calling friends to show off their crisp voice and singing euphemistic songs are in harmony with the light wind and flowing water.
Using anthropomorphic rhetoric, the birds are endowed with human action modality with words such as "happiness", "showing off" and "singing", and the birds' crisp, euphemistic and sweet calls are vividly written, and the birds' joy in welcoming spring is written, expressing the author's love for birds and spring. Looking forward to, looking forward to, the east wind is coming, and the pace of spring is approaching.
The use of repeated rhetorical devices to connect two "hopes" highlights the author's eagerness and joy in looking forward to the arrival of spring. At the same time, using anthropomorphic rhetoric, spring is endowed with human action through "footsteps", which vividly writes the scene of spring coming and expresses the author's eagerness and joy for spring.
Spring is like a doll that just landed. It's new from head to toe and still growing. Spring is like a little girl, dressed up and walking with a smile.
Spring is like a strong young man with iron arms and legs, leading us forward. Grasping the characteristics of spring, the author depicts the image of spring with fiery emotions and gorgeous colors through distinct and vivid descriptions, praising the creativity and infinite hope of spring, and conveying the author's inner exuberance, praise for spring and love for life.
The wind brought the smell of new ploughing, mixed with the smell of grass, and the fragrance of various flowers, all brewing in the slightly humid air. Birds nest in flowers and leaves. They are very happy. Calling friends proudly showed off his crisp voice and sang melodious songs, which set each other off in harmony with the light wind and flowing water.
The piccolo of the shepherd boy on the cow's back is also played loudly all day at this time. Here, the author writes nature vividly, fully and thoroughly, and poetically.
In this poetic spring scene, the author unloaded all the ideological and emotional burdens and plunged into this spring world, just like a child into his mother's arms. Every family, old and young, came out one by one in the city and the countryside.
Relax, be full of energy and do your own thing. "A year's plan lies in spring" has just begun, and there is plenty of time and hope.
Slipping into the plain realistic situation, it suddenly pushed into the bright and cheerful artistic conception created by the first half of the work, and the whole artistic conception was connected again. The "newness", "beauty" and "vigor" of spring injected into Zhu Ziqing's whole body and mind, and Zhu Ziqing also melted into the whole spring and persisted under the guidance of spring.
Zhu Ziqing was given a "new life".
5. Appreciation of Zhu Ziqing's "Spring" sentence Spring is a poetic prose.
In the style of poetry, it depicts the unique scenery of spring in southern China: green grass, flowers and trees competing for beauty, warm spring breeze, continuous drizzle, showing birth and vitality; People in spring are also energetic, hard-working and full of hope. "Spring" is a beautiful picture of spring, and "Spring" is an ode to youth.
The beginning of the work reads: "Looking forward to it, looking forward to it, the east wind is coming, and the footsteps of spring are approaching." The overlapping of the word "expectation" strengthens people's expectation for spring.
"The footsteps of spring are near", which is the embodiment of spring. It seems that spring is striding towards us. Look: "Everything looks like I just woke up, and I opened my eyes with joy."
The mountains are moist, the water is long, and the sun is blushing. "The author first gave a general description of the scenery in spring, and described a picture of the revival of everything in Spring Back to the Earth.
Then, the author introduced five close-ups, describing the moving scene of spring in detail. The first close-up is spring grass: "The grass slipped out of the soil, tender and green."
The author not only wrote the tender green and softness of spring grass, but also photographed its allure to people: people "sit and lie down, roll twice, kick a few balls, run a few laps, and hide and seek a few laps" on the grass. The green here is no longer a simple natural scenery, but a close companion of people's lives-the scenery has become a sentimental thing.
The second close-up is the glory of flowers and trees: "Peach trees, apricot trees and pear trees are all in bloom, so you won't let me or I won't let you." Red is like fire, pink is like chardonnay and white is like snow. "
Not only the flowers of fruit trees compete with each other, but also wild flowers are everywhere. Flowers also attract countless bees to buzz and butterflies to dance with their unique colors and smells.
These descriptions vividly show the atmosphere of spring. The author is not satisfied with the reproduction of natural colors, but also writes on the wings of imagination: the flowers of fruit trees "have a sweet taste. When you close your eyes, the trees seem to be covered with peaches, Xinger and pears."
Imagination not only broadens the horizon of description, but also renders the loveliness of spring flowers from the perspective of the future. The third feature is the spring breeze.
Compared with flowers in spring, spring breeze is not easy to describe. Zhu Ziqing's description of the spring breeze mainly captures two points, one is the softness of the spring breeze, and the other is its function of transmitting sound and sending flavor.
Firstly, the author describes the warmth and softness of the spring breeze with the poem "Blowing the Face and Chilling the Willow Wind" written by monk Zhinan in the Southern Song Dynasty. He was afraid that readers would not understand it easily, so he immediately came up with a copy that everyone could understand: "Touch you like a mother's hand." The wind brought the smell of new ploughing, mixed with the smell of grass, and the fragrance of various flowers, all brewing in the slightly humid air.
The author writes about the spring breeze from the perspective of flavor transmission, which not only strengthens the breath of spring, but also naturally links this paragraph with the description of flowers and plants in the first two paragraphs. Spring breeze also sends the songs of spring birds and the flute of the shepherd boy into people's eardrums, "in harmony with the breeze and running water"
The author describes the spring breeze in many ways, which makes this unspeakable thing vivid. The fourth close-up is spring rain.
Zhu Ziqing wrote about the spring rain in the south: "You see, it is like cow hair, like a needle, like a filament, woven densely. There is a thin layer of smoke on the roof. " This kind of rain makes the leaves "bright green and the grass green to stare".
Rainy night, a little yellow light, "set off a quiet and peaceful night." During the day, "farmers working in the fields wear hemp fiber and hats"-this is like a picture of spring rain farming.
The fifth feature is people's activities in spring. The first four are dominated by natural scenery, and this one highlights people's actions: "Every household in urban and rural areas, old and young, is also busy."
They all came out one by one. Relax, be full of energy and do your own thing. "
In spring, bloom is in a hurry; In order to welcome the Spring Festival, people left their homes in a hurry. In spring, a hundred flowers compete for each other, to outdo each other; People's "one year's plan lies in spring" is also devoted to their work in the spirit of seizing every minute.
On the basis of looking forward to and depicting spring, the work finally sings a hymn to spring: spring is like a newborn doll, new from head to toe, and it is growing. Spring is like a little girl, dressed up and walking with a smile.
Spring is like a strong young man with iron arms, waist and feet. He led us forward. Here, the author uses three figurative parallelism sentences to illustrate that spring is fresh, beautiful, cheerful and has strong vitality; Humans should also follow the pace of spring and create a beautiful and happy life.
Spring is an excellent essay describing natural scenery. Compared with previous similar themes, Moonlight on the Lotus Pond and Qinhuai River in the Shadow of Paddle Lights make people feel that it has two outstanding changes: First, its emotional style is different; The second is the change of language style. Reading Moonlight on the Lotus Pond and Qinhuai River in the shadow of the paddle lamp makes people feel the author's faint sadness, while the emotional tone of spring is relaxed and full of vitality.
Why is this happening? I guess there are at least two reasons: first, this article is a middle school Chinese textbook written by Zhu Ziqing. Starting from cultivating young people's enterprising spirit, the author adopted a corresponding positive and optimistic emotional tone. The second is the youthful vitality of the work, which reflects the author's state of mind when writing.
Spring is probably written in the second half of 1932 or at the beginning of 1933. 1932 In August, Zhu Ziqing married Ms. Chen Zhuyin shortly after returning from roaming in Europe, and in September of the same year, he became the head of the literature department in China, Tsinghua University. In April of' 33, I had another baby.
The richness and happiness in Zhu Ziqing's life cannot but have an impact on the lyrical style of Spring. The author's optimistic feelings make the works and scenes integrated, and poetry and painting are combined.
From the language point of view, the language of "Playing with Water Lights, Moonlight on the Lotus Pond, Qinhuai River" is beautiful, but it has traces of carving and is not natural enough. The language in spring is simple, vivid and colloquial.
Such as writing grass, "in the garden, in the field, you see, a large area is full"; Write flowers, "You won't let me, I won't let you, they are all full of flowers to chase." These languages are extracted from life, lively, short and pithy, and expressive.
In order to describe spring better, the author also uses various rhetorical methods such as metaphor and personification to visualize spring.
6. Appreciation of Zhu Ziqing's "Spring" 2 sentences 1 Looking forward to it, looking forward to it, the east wind is coming, and the footsteps of spring are approaching. Appreciation: Looking forward to spring is the beginning of the article. Using the two "expectations" together, we can see how eager we are to look forward to the arrival of spring. The east wind is coming, announcing the news of spring. Listen, the footsteps of spring are approaching. It's short. It vividly shows the author's eager and happy mood. Everything seemed to have just woken up, and his eyes opened with joy. Appreciation: He uses anthropomorphic rhetoric to write that everything is revived, lifelike and full of beauty. The mountains moistened, the water rose and the sun blushed. Appreciation: The author carefully observes the mountains, water and sun in early spring. "The mountain is wet" says that the snow melts and melts. Especially refreshing and moist. The blush of the sun personifies the sun, which not only shows the warmth of spring, but also captures the characteristics of spring and shows the inner charm of spring. Writing about mountains, water and sun in early spring is a general outline and a detailed description of the following. Grass crept out of the soil, tender and green. Garden "tender, green" and "soft grass" simply and richly describe the characteristics of early spring grass. 5 "Blowing noodles without cold willows" is good, touching you is like touching your mother's hand. Appreciation: The author uses "blowing noodles without cold willows" to describe the spring breeze, and then captures a vivid and intimate metaphor "touching you like a mother's hand". I won't let you, all the flowers are in full bloom. Red is like fire, pink is like chardonnay and white is like snow. Appreciation: This passage highlights the "competition" of flowers and paints a prosperous scene of bloom in warm spring. Through personification, parallelism and metaphor, the image is vivid. Rain is the most common, lasting for three or two days at a time. Don't be upset. Look, it looks like cow hair. In your eyes, the grass is green. In the evening, the lights are on, and a little dim light sets off a quiet and peaceful night. In the countryside, on the road and by the stone bridge, there are people walking slowly with umbrellas, farmers working in the fields and wearing hats. Their houses are sparse, enjoying silently in the rain: the author writes spring rain first. There is a thin layer of smoke on the roof of someone else's house. Then, write down the scenery in the rain and paint a quiet and beautiful picture of ink and spring rain. By using rhetorical devices such as parallelism, personification and metaphor, the charm of spring rain is vividly written, and leaves, grass, people and houses are used to set off the beauty and tranquility brought by spring rain.