Teaching objectives:
Knowledge objectives:
1. Accurately read the words in the text and understand the meaning of the words.
2 Master rhetorical techniques such as parallelism, metaphor and personification.
3 Master the poems, proverbs and allusions cited in the text, and understand their role in the text.
Ability objectives:
1. Clarify the context of the article and grasp the time and space sequence of the author's writing.
2 Grasp the writing characteristics of this article, which are informative and emotional.
3 Learn the different description methods used by the author according to the characteristics of each scene.
Emotions, attitudes and values ??
Cultivate students’ love for the great rivers and mountains of the motherland and enhance their awareness of protecting the environment.
A brief analysis of teaching key points and difficulties
Key points:
1 Learn the different description methods used by the author according to the characteristics of each scene
2 Grasp the writing characteristics of this article, which are informative and emotional.
Difficulty:
Master the travel writing method that integrates knowledge, talent and emotion into the narrative
Teaching process:
Chapter One lesson
1. Introduction
1. Recite Li Bai's "Early Departure from Baidi City":
Chao Ci Baidi's colorful clouds, thousands of miles away from Jiangling Return the day.
Apes on both sides of the strait can’t stop crying, and the boat has passed the Ten Thousand Mountains. )
2. Question: ① Where is the place where this poem is written?
3. About the author
Liu Dajie, a modern scholar, writer and translator, was born in Yueyang, Hunan from 1904 to 1977. In 1925, he entered the Graduate School of Waseda University, Japan. After returning to China, he successively served as professor of Anhui University, director of the Chinese Department of Sichuan University, dean of the School of Liberal Arts of Jinan University, and editor of Dadong Book Company. After the founding of New China, he served as professor and acting director of the Chinese Department of Fudan University, member of the Standing Committee of the All-China Federation of Literary and Art Circles, and deputy director of the Shanghai Municipal Committee of the Peasants and Workers Democratic Party. His representative work is "History of the Development of Chinese Literature". He is also the author of "On the Thoughts of Wei and Jin Characters", "The Thoughts and Characters of the Dream of Red Mansions", "Introduction to German Literature", etc.
4. Introduction to the Three Gorges
The Three Gorges of the Yangtze River, one of the top ten scenic spots in my country One of the top 40 tourist attractions in China, it is the most majestic canyon in the upper reaches of the Yangtze River, consisting of Xiling Gorge, Wu Gorge and Qutang Gorge. The Three Gorges spans the two provinces of Hubei and Chongqing, starting from Baidi City in Chongqing in the west and ending at Nanjinguan in Yichang in the east. It is 193 kilometers long and is known as a landscape gallery by tourists.
Here there are peaks on both sides of the strait, the harbor is narrow and tortuous, the harbor is dotted with beaches and reefs, and the water is turbulent and rapid. The text "Three Gorges" that we studied in seventh grade was selected from the famous ancient Chinese geography book "Shui Jing Zhu" written by Li Daoyuan of the Northern Wei Dynasty. It is a vivid description of the majestic scenery of the Three Gorges. There is a saying in an ancient poem: Once upon a time, the sea was difficult for water, except for Wushan, it was not cloud. It means: People who have seen the vast ocean will look down upon the water elsewhere. Except for the colorful clouds in Wushan, the clouds elsewhere pale in comparison. This shows how beautiful the cloud scenery of Wushan is. The famous poem "Early Departure from Baidi City" by Li Bai, the great poet of the Tang Dynasty, also brilliantly describes the spectacular scene of a boat traveling thousands of miles across the Three Gorges.
Now the Three Gorges, with the construction of the huge Three Gorges Project, has become a world-renowned tourist hotline. There are many beautiful scenery in the Three Gorges tourist area. In addition to the precipitous natural scenery, the more famous cultural landscapes include Baidi City where Liu Bei Tuogu, Fengdu Ghost Town, Zhongxian Shibaozhai, Yunyang Zhangfei Temple, Gezhouba Dam Project, etc.
2. Read the text aloud
Next, let a classmate read aloud Liu Dajie’s travelogue "Badong Three Gorges". Let us listen together to what Liu Dajie wrote about the Three Gorges. A kind of beautiful scenery, and ask students to think: What kind of impression does the Three Gorges give you?
Students communicate and speak freely.
3. Clarify the ideas of the article
Students discussed and communicated clearly:
1. Analyze the structure of the article based on the text content
The article adopts the first Write in total and then in chronological order.
The first part (natural paragraphs 1 and 2): Always write about the dangers of the Three Gorges.
The second part: (Natural paragraphs 3 to 9) describe the scenery of Xiling Gorge, Wu Gorge and Qutang Gorge respectively.
The third part: (10 natural paragraphs) Write about the mood after walking through the Three Gorges.
2. The author traveled upstream to the Three Gorges from Yichang to Chongqing. Where did he pass along the way?
The boat sails from Yichang
The beginning is Xiling Gorge, which is divided into four sections: Huangmao Gorge, Dengying Gorge, Kongling Gorge, and Micang Gorge. There is fragrance when leaving the gorge. creek.
The boat passed Jigui and Badong and entered Wu Gorge.
After passing Wushan Mountain, you will enter Qutang Gorge.
After passing the Qutang Gorge, you will reach Baidi City, and finally the boat will be anchored on the river bank of Kuifu.
The order of the author's travels (first of all, it is necessary to find out that the author traveled upstream from Yichang to Chongqing to visit the Three Gorges)
Yichang - Xiling Gorge (Huangmao Gorge, Dengying Gorge [with yellow in it] Mausoleum Temple], Mountain Gorge [including Niuganmafei Gorge and Mountain Ridge Beach], Micang Gorge, (Xiangxi) - Zigui, Badong - Wu Gorge - Qutang Gorge (Baidicheng, Mrs. Sun Temple, Eight Formations) - The River Bank of Kuifu
4. Read the text carefully and taste the language
1. Among the Three Gorges, Wu Gorge should be the most attractive to tourists. Listen to the text. Read the recording of paragraphs 7 and 8, find out what is written in these two paragraphs, and see where the beauty of Wu Gorge is reflected.
(These two paragraphs mainly describe the rivers and rivers of Wu Gorge. Mountains and clouds.)
2. Freely read the seventh and eighth paragraphs and find a parallel, personification and metaphor respectively.
① Parallel sentence: The danger of the river lies in its narrowness. , The danger lies in the twists and turns, and the danger lies in the many beaches. This sentence captures the words such as narrow, sharp, twists and turns, and highlights the danger of the river.
② Personification sentence: This peak is very high. , that peak is even higher, there is a row in front, another row behind, and countless rows behind the back, layer by layer, you surround me, I surround you, you bite me, I bite you . This sentence highlights the characteristics of the mountain - high. It uses personification to describe the height of Wuxia Mountain, which makes the mountains come alive.
③Some of Wu's clouds look like cows and horses. Tiger and leopard, all kinds of strange shapes. This sentence vividly describes the fantasy and change of the clouds.
Flying hard, flying hard, it always feels that it is not easy to fly over the high peak.< /p>
Use repeated rhetorical techniques to highlight the height of the mountain by writing from the side that birds cannot fly to the peak.
5. Read the text carefully and work in groups to fill in the following table:
Feelings about the characteristics of the scenery, poems, proverbs and allusions
Generally speaking, the Three Gorges: dangerous, the most dangerous Badong Three Gorges, the Wu Gorge is long, and the ape calls three times and the tears are wet with surprise
Xiling Gorge ：
The Huangmao Gorge is high but not dangerous, and the water is fast but not tense.
The northern mountain of Dengying Gorge is steep and dry and tasteless. The author of Jiang's scenery poem is relaxing and leisurely. The southern mountain is exquisite and beautiful, and the trees are green and lovely. . Mountain Gorge Niuganmafei Gorge: Mountains are cut like swords, Green Beach and Ye Beach are not considered to be extremely scary. Mountain Ridge Beach is the gate of ghosts. Water pours from high places.
The water in Micang Gorge is not as strong as before, and the mountains are more dangerous. Wang Zhaojun Huanzhuang (allusion)
The mountains and valleys go to Jingmen, and Mingfei Shangyou Village grows up
Wu Gorge: Water Danger , the mountains are wonderful, the clouds are strange and interesting
Qutang Gorge: the mountain is slightly low and flat, the water is still dangerous, Liu Huangshu Tuogu is desolate
Baidi City, Mrs. Sun Temple;
Pine trees, eight formations, bells
After walking through the Three Gorges: the mountains are flatter and wider, the river is much wider and the water is much flatter. Relaxed
6. Summary
The Three Gorges is a scenic spot in my country. The magical and magnificent natural scenery and its cultural landscape fascinate us. I hope that students will have the opportunity to experience the magic of the Three Gorges in person. scenery.
7. Homework
1. Word accumulation, explanation and sentence making
2. After-class exercises 4
Second lesson
1. Review
Students collected relevant information and exchanged it in groups, and elected representatives to come to the stage to talk about the imagined Three Gorges scene after the dam was completed
2. Analyze the quotations The role of poems, proverbs and allusions
1. The folk proverb Badong Three Gorges Wu Gorge is long, and the apes cry three times and shed tears on their clothes
It exaggerates the sinister and desolate atmosphere in the Three Gorges area and provides a The entire text sets the tone.
2. The author's poem depicts the scenery of Huangling Temple with a Jiangnan flavor, including weeping poplars and flowers.
In the poem, the smell of weeping poplar flowers from the south of the Yangtze River vividly depicts the beauty of the landscape around Huangling Temple. It highlights the beautiful environment of Huangling Temple.
3. As the proverb goes, the green beach and the leaf beach are not considered a beach, but the mountains are the gateway to hell.
It shows the danger and terror of Mountain Ridge Beach. The first sentence uses contrasting techniques to highlight the Mountain Beach, and the second sentence uses the word "Ghost Gate" to describe the Mountain Beach. Its danger is visible and daunting.
4. Poetry: The mountains and valleys go to Jingmen, and there is a village of Mingfei.
Highlight the appreciation for the wonderful use of the word "fu" in the poem, which further expresses the mountains along both sides of the river like a group of galloping horses. The last sentence of the poem also praises Wang Zhaojun, the concubine of the Ming Dynasty.
5. Allusion to Liu Huangshu's entrustment of an orphan
On the one hand, the article writes about the green, exquisite and lovely trees in Baidi City, and on the other hand, it writes about the tragic story of Liu Huangshu's entrustment of an orphan here, highlighting the rich scenery of the Three Gorges The historical and cultural connotations are even more intriguing.
6. Summary
Since ancient times, all the famous mountains and rivers have formed an indissoluble bond with celebrities, poems, proverbs and allusions, showing a relationship with nature. The glory of each other is a strange phenomenon that complements and complements each other.
The Three Gorges of the Yangtze River has been famous for generations and is famous all over the world. On the one hand, it is a natural landscape that is the best in the world because of its majestic, strange, dangerous and beautiful mountains and rivers. On the other hand, it also lies in its numerous cultural landscapes, which benefited from the poets and poets of the past dynasties. Falling in love with the Three Gorges, leaving a series of glorious footprints on the mountains and rivers, writing immortal poems that will be passed down to future generations. In the endless rolling torrent of the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River, there are many eternal songs and eternal good stories flowing! The Three Gorges has provided literary nourishment and creative passion to literati of all ages, and they have repaid the Three Gorges with treasures of literature and celebrity influence.
3. Taste language
Thinking exercise three: students discuss, communicate and summarize.
1. The author summarizes the dangers of the river in very concise language. The four parallels are short and powerful, which makes people feel suffocated when reading. It's narrow, sharp, winding, and has many shoals that make you shudder. The parallel sentence structure is neat and slightly changed, making it harmonious and interesting to read.
2. Seizing the characteristics of many and high peaks, the arrangement of language is like the waves of the sea, with one wave higher than the other, giving people a sense of continuous layers. Using personification techniques, using movement to describe stillness, it very vividly expresses the mood of chasing each other and comparing each other. In addition, it also uses the most realistic techniques: you surround me, I surround you, you bite me, Me biting you gives people a recurring feeling, which is very interesting.
3. Use metaphors like cows, horses, tigers and leopards to vividly describe the ever-changing clouds and mists in Wushan. In addition, the writing technique of contrast is used to highlight that the clouds in Wushan are more interesting than those in Lushan.
4. Summarize the writing characteristics of the article
1. The article narrates and describes the scenery in sequence according to the author’s travels. Well organized. The article starts with an overview, and then goes up the river to describe and describe Xiling Gorge, Wu Gorge, and Qutang Gorge respectively. When describing the longest Xiling Gorge, it is introduced in four paragraphs and is clearly organized.
2. When introducing scenery, be able to grasp the characteristics and give appropriate details.
3. Use a variety of rhetoric and writing techniques to describe the scenery and vivid images. Use personification, metaphor, parallelism and other rhetorical techniques to highlight the characteristics of the scenery, and use writing techniques of foil, contrast and contrast to highlight the dangers of the Three Gorges.
4. The article appropriately quotes ancient poems, proverbs, and my own poems about the scene, which is the finishing touch. The words are concise and concise, exaggerating the atmosphere, and adding charm to the travel note.
5. Homework
After-class exercises 2 and 3.
Attached blackboard design:
1 Badong Three Gorges
Yichang-Xiling Gorge (Huangmao Gorge, Dengying Gorge, Mountain Gorge, Micang Gorge)
--Zigui, Badong--Wu Gorge--Qutang Gorge--River Bank of Kuifu
Teaching Reflection