Close? Keys? Words: 450 words in the fifth grade of Beautiful Park Primary School
Words: 450 words composition
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This composition is about 450 words in the fifth grade of primary school. The title is "Beautiful Elephant Lake Park". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. Speaking of Hu Xiang Park in Nanchang, you must be familiar with it. This is a beautiful place. When you enter the gate of Hu Xiang Park, you will see a wide and smooth lake. Once in a while, you will skate a few boats. Suddenly, water splashed everywhere. After passing by, the lake looks like a flat mirror. The sun shines on the lake, tiny waves beat against the shore, and willow trees are reflected on the lake, just like a girl sitting on the shore, combing her beautiful long hair. After walking for more than ten meters, there is an ancient stone arch bridge on the lake, like a long bow. Some exquisite totems are carved on the pillars of the handrails on both sides of the bridge, and two majestic little lions are carved on both ends of the bridge!
Walking through the stone arch bridge, I came to the majestic Wanshou Palace. The indoor smoke is filled with magic, which makes people feel like they are in a beautiful fairyland. The quiet longevity palace adds a sense of mystery to Hu Xiang's office!
I like the beautiful elephant lake park. Teacher's comment: In this essay, the author introduced the "Beautiful Elephant Lake Park" to readers by changing the scenery: as soon as I entered the gate of Elephant Lake Park, I saw a wide lake; After walking for more than ten meters, there is an ancient stone arch bridge on the lake. Walk through the stone arch bridge and come to the majestic Wanshou Palace. The cohesion between paragraphs in the composition is very natural and the organization of the composition is very clear. "Willow reflected on the lake, like a girl sitting on the shore, combing her beautiful long hair", "The lake is like a flat mirror" and "like a humpback dragon". The author used figurative rhetoric appropriately to make the content of the composition more vivid. (Xue Le China Special Teacher: Teacher Rodina) 2010-1-13: 31:00.