Excerpt+comment (each article is not less than 30 words) 6 sentences, American style.

In the wind of the Tang dynasty, how many childe's white clothes fluttered; How many women's black temples were wet by rain in the Song Dynasty? That's Zhang Jiuling's "bright moon, which is now full of the sea, and the horizon is * * * at this time", Su Dongpo's "I wish people a long time, and all the miles are beautiful", or Li Qingzhao's "looking for it and being left out in the cold". What they are obsessed with is the vicissitudes of life, the face that looks forward to blessing, and the face that longs for it.

This article is cleverly conceived. At the beginning, three ancient poems are quoted, describing the vicissitudes of the poet, his yearning for life and the essence of the national culture represented by the poet's face. The author skillfully combined the poems of the three people into his own language, which added philosophical meaning, and at the same time skillfully led to the following and pointed out the theme.

Even if the secular wall blocks your lofty sentiments, it can't stop your sonorous pace. Loyalty to oneself is the soul of Tao Qian's five poems; Even if the heavy night blocks your starry sky, it can't stop the lamp in your heart. Be true to yourself, that's Wen Tianxiang's farewell song; Even if Fan Fan's years stop your strong body, you can't stop your loyal faith. Being true to yourself is Li Sao in Qu Yuan's water.

Opening with a beautiful sentence group composed of arrangement or antithesis has the advantages of rigorous wording, smooth tone, forceful reading, great momentum and enhanced appeal.

Yes, "in life, everyone's position may be different, but each has its own value." I quite agree with the proponent. Generally speaking, there may be a certain relationship between position and value, but it is only possible, and this relationship cannot determine value. Because value doesn't absolutely depend on position, and position can't affect the embodiment of value.

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The viewpoint of this paper comes from Hint, but it is different. The author deliberately avoids positioning different commodities, and chooses "value has nothing to do with positioning" to write, with novel and concise explanations to make his point more clear.

Lao Zhang has done well in recent years. No, I just got promoted to section chief a few days ago, which made him very happy. All day long, he was a smiling face, and those small eyes became a "landscape" embedded in that big face when they smiled.

In the vast sea of people, the author chose the image of "Lao Zhang", a common smiling face in life, to describe it, which made the opening of the article vivid, and the image of Lao Zhang coming out of the closet was deeply imprinted in the reader's mind. Enhance reading interest.

After we went out, my mother was alone in the empty room. I didn't know what to do, so I got a basin of water to wash my feet. But it was not until my father sent me back a few hours later that she looked at the window and put her feet on the edge of the basin without water.

Mom's empty eyes made everyone feel sad. Sitting alone for several hours, my feet resting on the edge of the washbasin without touching a drop of water, all of which reflected my mother's empty mood. The son is the flesh and blood in the mother's heart. The son is gone, and all the performances of the mother reflect the mother's feelings of loss, sadness and missing.

Purity is a kind of innocence, rejecting the secular. Its language comes from internal drive. It is light, not water, but always goes with the flow; It is like a cloud. Wind, rain and lightning come from nature. It's like a song, with melodies of various emotional forms. It is happy, because it is really gratifying; It's angry because it really should be. Joy should be covered with sadness, and the horror of talent is terrible; It's time to be angry and smile to please, and describe it as pathetic. If ignorance of love and hate is called human cultivation, then this kind of human sentiment is only awe-inspiring; If the distinction between right and wrong is called knowing the world, life will be safe and happy. Two contacts with sophisticated people will leave a scarred soul.

This passage is written around "purity is a kind of innocence, refusing accidents", and also uses parallelism and metaphor. Compare purity to light to show its completeness; Compare purity to a cloud to show its nature; Compare purity to a song to show its diversity. After washing and practicing, the words are catchy and charming. At the same time, on the contrary, accidental injury to the soul reflects the pleasure brought by purity.