How did I write?

Poetry should pay attention to the beauty of language, rhythm and painting, giving people a sense of beauty. The landlord's words can only be used as scripts, not as poems. The picture feels messy, there is no obvious rhythm (although the rhyme is irregular), and the poem is very reluctant.

Poetry is subtle, ethereal and meaningful. Although the words are incoherent, but the feelings are endless, there is a sense of emptiness, which seems to have a long lasting appeal and a lingering sound, which makes people feel like listening to nature. The landlord's works are unobstructed and memorable.

Although the landlord's poems can't see all the elements of poetry, they do have basic writing skills. If you persevere, there will be considerable works in the future. Keep trying!