Qi Chunxiu, I love you all my life! Ten words for a Tibetan poem?

Pray that the jade rabbit and the moth will grow together,

When I went to Qiu Lai in spring, I felt lonely.

Hideyoshi's face is half hibiscus,

The heart is like water, wrinkled by the wind.

Love turns snow-capped mountains white,

The green hills of agriculture are not old.

Once as cold as winter,

Born without a wife to have fun with?

Day after day,

The whole world is lamenting my infatuation!

Hello, friend. I wonder if this song is satisfactory? If you are not satisfied, please tell me and modify it. ~