This is a propositional composition for materials. Pay attention to the following points when writing:
First, thoroughly understand the connotation of the four poems. Poems like "Sweet potato is bitter" are not difficult literally, and the hint that "... shows that in real life, sweetness and bitterness, good and bad, and benefits and harm mostly coexist" has been explained ("greedy people steal their own things" means that people who are greedy for benefits will hurt themselves, which also belongs to "both benefits and harm coexist").
Second, choose a sentence that you have the deepest experience, the richest accumulated materials and the most conducive to showing your personality as a topic, and conceive it in writing.
Thirdly, if you don't use the original poem as a topic, or follow the old habit of writing a topic composition, it is obviously against the requirements of composition, and there is no doubt that the topic is "ups and downs", "ups and downs", "good and bad" and "both advantages and disadvantages". If gild the lily, adding other words after the prescribed topic, such as "you have me, I have you" and "the true slander of bitter gourd", is also unsatisfactory.
Fourth, you can draw up a subtitle to reveal the object or theme of the article. For example, Sweet Potato Bitterness-Bitterness and Sweetness of Life, Sweet Potato Bitterness-You Can Help Me, The Greedy Man is also a Thief-Pipa Girl Tells Stories. You can also draw up related inscriptions under the title. For example, "there is a knife next to Li-disaster, blessing; Happiness lies in misfortune. " "Beautiful dates have thorns-sharp thorns and fragrant flowers are the capital of roses beyond flowers."
Pilot example: (score: 40+20=60)
Thorns were born on a beautiful date.
"I fell among thorns and was bleeding." This is Shelley's sad whisper.
The more you eat, the more you swallow Wu. This is Gou Jian's brave words.
"The sunshine is always after the storm." This is the happy smiling face of women volleyball girls.
There are too many pains and joys in life, and sorrow and hate are intertwined into a magnificent picture of life. Beautiful dates and thorns depend on each other, sweet or not, and thorns don't sting, just depending on how you look at them. Some people say:
"Attitude is everything."
The wise man came out of the thorns, wiped the wound and then introspected. The genius of a wise man is that he is good at liberation. In the face of pain and failure, they can quickly pack their bags and get on the road quickly. Frustration has become a lesson, a road sign and a protective wall, reducing the probability of falling into the bushes next time. Edison searched for filament, Madame Curie refined radium, and Galileo experimented again and again. Which one has not experienced hardships and which one has not paid hardships? Even if failure turns into a downpour, it cannot extinguish the flame of wisdom. Did you get a look at him? This flame is burning, full of vitality, and the red sky is burning with faith.
Sad people cover their bodies with thorns and let their blood flow and sink. They are ashamed to face the wound, unable to repair it, and then lose hope. Their souls have fallen asleep, and the beacon of life has lost its brilliance. Melancholy, resentment, and the helplessness of "calling every day is ineffective" are tightly wrapped around them. In fact, they can completely break through the encirclement, because butterflies will become withered pupae if they don't break their cocoons. But they chose not to open their hearts bravely, but to moan over and over again, groaning in powerlessness and depression. This groan finally became the death knell of life. They came to heaven and cried to God about their misfortune and sorrow. But God just waved and said, "I gave you an olive branch and you threw it away."
Brave people see the blue sky outside the thorns. He stood up and opened up a new road. "The best way to forget the pain is to start fighting again." Gou Jian did this, so he achieved a prominent hegemony; Sima Qian did this, so historians had masterpieces handed down from generation to generation; Cao Xueqin did this, so he made a dream of red mansions. Brave and invincible, they are all spiritual giants, with thousands of boulders on their shoulders and countless scars on their hearts. They all stood so bravely and showed us unyielding souls.
Thorns have thorns, but they can bear beautiful dates. The road of life is hard, but it can reach the end of happiness.
Pain and happiness are inseparable.
Our belief is the sun ahead.
Comments:
The article is bold and innovative at the beginning, with examples of famous sayings, which breaks the platitudes and unobstructed "straight to the point" at the beginning. In the use of language and materials, language is poetic, prosaic and meaningful. The material is rich, but the selected material is not novel. What is unusual is the way materials are expressed, such as "Edison searched for filament, Madame Curie refined radium, and Galileo experimented again and again." Which one has not experienced hardships and which one has not paid hardships? Even if failure turns into a downpour, it cannot extinguish the flame of wisdom. Did you get a look at him? This flame is so burning, vigorous, red through the sky, burning faith ","Gou Jian did this, so he achieved a prominent hegemony; Sima Qian did this, so historians had masterpieces handed down from generation to generation; Cao Xueqin did this, so he had the sigh of a dream of red mansions. " Interpret old materials in poetic language. Structurally, the article has no obvious pattern traces, but the hierarchical paragraphs are still very clear. At the end of the article, the emotion is expressed in personalized language, which is incisive and concise. The ending paragraph is like a poetic proverb.
Policy explanation:
Excellent college entrance examination students should break through mediocrity and write their own personality. The so-called mediocrity mainly has the following manifestations: ideological, red tape, empty talk, political preaching, conclusion slogan; Words are thousands of sounds, and monuments are pale; Content, or lack of a typical material, or pile up material, or choose a low-level example, blindly spinning in the small things of life, narrow device; Structurally, over-patterning, or "stereotyped writing"-argumentative argument (positive and negative argument), or plane thinking, the content of the article is only developed on a "plane" and there is no trace of gradual thinking. The article is thin and disgusting.
So, how to write personality? First of all, we should boldly innovate, break the inherent pattern, publicize our personality and express our true self. Expose the real spiritual world, express your feelings in personalized language, taste life, and refrain from empty talk and big talk.
Secondly, the materials should be typical, one for ten. The abundance of materials does not mean the accumulation of materials. Try to reveal the cause of things, explore the development trend and results of things, so as to eradicate the problem of "plane" thinking. At the same time, we should pay attention to society, pay attention to reform, feel the breath of the times and grasp the pulse of the times; Understand major political, economic and military events at home and abroad, and understand the latest achievements of scientific and technological development; Explore the hot spots and focuses in society and life-inject liveliness into composition and bid farewell to obsolescence. You also need rich reading and accumulation, and be familiar with, understand and use famous books.