1. The poem you wrote is basically pretty good, and you have some skills... 2. The last word "Thunder" in the third sentence is in flat tone (must use oblique tone in this position), so I changed it to : The sound of firecrackers and spring thunder 3. The fourth sentence is all flat-tone characters (the ancient rhyme of Chinese characters is oblique tones), so I changed it to: bursts of joyful songs praising the country's prestige 4. It is best not to emphasize words in seven-character quatrains. In your poem There are dragons, thunder, and sounds appearing repeatedly, which is not good. I hope you will pay more attention to it in the future. Based on your experience, boldly try to modify it as follows: During the Spring Festival Gala, golden phoenixes are heard flying, and delicate dragons emerge, and the sea water boils. Firecrackers and spring thunder rang, and bursts of joyful songs praised the country's majesty.