An English composition about travel, 1 grade.

I went to Beidaihe with my parents last Sunday. It was a sunny day. It took us about an hour to go there by bus. There were thousands of people when we got there. We walked on the beach for about two hours and picked up many beautiful shells. We also went boating and fishing. We ate delicious seafood at noon. We also took many photos. This is really a beautiful day. We really had a good time.