But for various reasons, such as insufficient paper, or the ink has bottomed out, or there is not enough time, so write as briefly as possible.
However, because of brevity, there was a vacancy, but it was unexpectedly found that this vacancy caused people's reverie and * * *, so people began to try to write this short thing on purpose.
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Of course, I guessed it all.
Then I saw the background of the development of poetry-although this is all my guess. . Awkward. But looking back at your poems is still enlightening.
So what did your poem give me? Very short, very good. You have taken the first step in the development of poetry.
There are inner reverie, there are also, very good, there are some vacancies that everyone can fill.
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But sometimes it's better to have a feature in poetry. I think your poems are full of energy, natural and novel. In fact, if you read them carefully, you will feel good if you understand them.
But I turned around and asked why I didn't understand the meaning the first time. At first glance, I thought it was another rubbish poem.
In fact, I think your poetry is rational enough (this rationality is also rational in sensibility, and its essence is sensibility), that is to say, the feeling of your poetry is biased towards the feeling of literature and slightly lacks the original tension. If the original tension in the situation goes up, at the same time, the connotation of your poem is enough. Then, very good.
For example, in the last paragraph, if you can add a sunset, or the beginning when the sun begins to set after noon, it may make your poem easier to understand-a complete and mature taste of returning to nature from confusion.
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In fact, sometimes poems, such as yours, are warm, and I don't think it is necessary to be so concise from beginning to end. Sometimes, in poetry, in order to be more specific and clear, individual positions will be compromised, but in fact, they have a relaxing effect. Don't always be nervous.