Lin's poem Deep Laughter

Lin, formerly known as Minhou, Fujian, is an architect, writer and crescent poet. The following is my collection of Lin's poem "Deep Laughter", I hope it will help you!

Lin's poem Deep Laughter

She smiled so sweetly and deeply,

Is it round like that? a string of pearls

Shiny, bursting childlike innocence!

The bottom of the clear spring floats and flows to the water surface.

Brilliant,

Spread out!

Who laughs well and flowers bloom?

So light, don't wake up.

Xiaoxiang inadvertently went with the wind,

On the low wall, the setting sun shines in front.

death by hanging

homesickness

He laughed so high that this 100-story building,

Let unknown birds hover? who is it?

Laughing in the rotation of thousands of wind chimes,

From the eaves of each layer of glass

shake up

Tian Yun?

Lin Shi's Deep Laughter (English Version)

radiant smile

Whose smile is this? Too sweet, too profound.

And so round! Pearl string, small,

The big ones are all shining with innocence!

Since spring, it has surfaced.

Brightly

Spread out everywhere!

Whose smile is this? Like a flower in full bloom,

Elegant, don't disturb a soul!

Unconscious, subtle fragrance wafts in the wind,

Blow over the low wall, linger

be unresolved/unsettled

Around the sun.

Whose smile is this? It built this 100-storey building

There are unknown birds flying around? Whose smile?

Is it? It makes thousands of wind chimes ring.

From the eaves of colored glaze layers

Uphill All the Way

Into the sky?

works appreciation

Jin Ganbo/Beautiful and ethereal, infinite moment.

Like a clear spring, like a faint lotus flower, it is filled with a childlike smile in the ethereal nature and the purity and brilliance of the beauty of life; The artistic conception of poetry, people, love, life ... laughs infinitely in an instant. Lin wrote the poem "Deep Laughter" with women's unique tenderness, unique perspective and delicate mind, which showed the infinite charm of modern poetry.

Exquisite structure

Deep Laughter is a six-line poem. The whole poem takes the question "Who is it" as the introduction, which is simple and easy to understand, repeated singing, and full of the beauty of circulation. The four questions only form three parts, and the order has changed. There are six lines in each section, and the first four sentences are long sentences, with the number of words ranging from 8 words to 1 1, and the uniformity is slightly uneven; The last two sentences are short sentences, both of which are short and capable. Each verse is from long to short, forming an inverted pyramid shape, which is exquisite and delicate, and complements the soft content. Flat and harmonious, beautiful timbre, scattered rhyme, rhyme with heaven, light and smart, full of musical melody.

Naive image

The imagery in poetry is pure and elegant. The "clear spring" in the first section gushed out of the water, shining like a string of pearls, brilliant and scattered; The second section "flower", light and fragrant, blows with the wind, emitting the light of life; At the end, the "100-story towering ancient pagoda" and "thousand-turn wind chimes" spread to infinite space. These images are classic images in China's classical poems, which are fresh and lively, and Gu Zhuo's vivid voice makes the poems full of classical connotations.

Pure artistic conception

Laughter is the most beautiful symbol of human beings, and deep laughter highly shows the pure beauty of this human nature. The first layer, the smile is sweet, deep, round and naive; On the second floor, the smile is faint and unintentional; On the third floor, the smile is crisp and sweet, reaching the sky. Poets sing softly, turning intangible into tangible, turning abstract into concrete, and letting laughter spread all over the world. This is a kind of tenderness, a subtle feeling that can touch people's hearts. Pure smile, pure artistic conception, step by step, embodies the harmony of life.