Gently/I'm leaving,
When I/gently come;
I gently/waved,
Farewell to the western world/cloud.
Riverside/golden willow
Be a bride in the sunset
In the wave/erotic shadow,
In my mind/rippling.
On the soft mud/green grass,
Oily/swaying underwater;
In Joubo, He Kang,
I would like to be an aquatic plant.
A pool in the shade of a tree,
Not a clear spring, but a rainbow in the sky.
Between broken/floating algae,
A dream of precipitation/rainbow.
Looking for dreams? Hold/support a long pole,
Go to greener grass/stroll back,
A ship full of stars,
In the light of the stars/singing.
However, I can't play this song.
Quiet/a farewell flute;
Summer worm/also silent for me,
Silence/It's tonight/Cambridge!
Quietly/I left,
When I/quietly come;
I waved my sleeve,
Don't take away/a piece/a cloud.
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Appreciate:
The whole poem takes the emotional ups and downs when leaving Cambridge as a clue, expressing the poet's deep affection for Cambridge's departure. Starting with tenderness, walking, arrival, waving and parting clouds, the poet paints a flowing picture with the alternate method of reality and reality, which constitutes a wonderful artistic conception everywhere, and shows in detail the poet's love for Cambridge, longing for his past life and helpless sadness at present.
The poet avoided the farewell object "person" in the general farewell poems, but bid farewell to "western clouds", and the farewell object moved from the world to the sky, jumping out of the stereotype of "holding hands and staring with tears", giving people a fresh and elegant feeling.
The poet created a special atmosphere for parting. Only paint and paint the scenery without imitating the sound, and create a silent environment with "lightness", "quietness" and "silence", which not only avoids the heavy feeling caused by "injury" when leaving, but also adds elegant elements.
This poem is like Chopin's serenade. There are four lines and one section, each section is patchwork, and each sentence is basically six or seven words, which is neat in uneven changes; Each verse rhymes, changing rhymes one by one, and pursuing syllable fluctuation and melody sense. In addition, the repeated use of reduplicated words such as "light" and "quiet" enhances the light rhythm of poetry. The end of the poem is similar to the first sentence, echoing from afar, giving people a fantastic feeling.
Seven sections, almost every section contains a picture. Poets use colorful words to bring people the enjoyment of visual beauty, such as the clouds waving goodbye gently in the western sky, the reflection of golden willows on the banks of Hekang River, the swaying aquatic plants at the bottom of He Kang River, and the green pool covered with floating algae under elms.
Moreover, every picture is transformed into a dynamic picture through words with strong actions such as "waving", "rippling", "swaying", "rolling", "wandering back" and "waving", which gives people a three-dimensional sense.