Composition title: Invisible
Keywords: 250 words for the third grade of primary school
Word count: 250 words composition
This article is suitable for: The third grade of primary school
Source of the composition:
This composition is a 250-word composition about the third grade of primary school. The title is: "Invisible". Everyone is welcome to contribute. Out of sight/Finally/The petite and exquisite body/Where it comes from and where it returns/Out of sight/Finally/The faint gloomy and shallow smile/Invisible/Finally/The care you forgot to take away/Take me Tied to a person's dock/swaying in the wind/like/a yellow ribbon left by a girl/Famous teacher's comment: The poem contains a sad mood and accurately expresses the inner loss. The first stanza of the poem reproduces a scene of parting, the second stanza is the memory of the departed person, and the third stanza is about writing about one's inner feelings. "Tie me to a person's dock" and "Like/a yellow ribbon left by a girl" vividly express my sad mood, especially the appropriate use of metaphors, which makes the poem more charming. It should be pointed out that the poems are relatively short and the intention of the writing is difficult to understand. It might be easier to understand if the story is told in full.
(Xuele China Distinguished Teacher: Teacher Wang Yunlian) 2009-5-27 17:41:00