Comment on Three Motherly Love Articles Written by Stars in Spring Water

Star 120

Mom!

This fragmented article,

Can you have a look?

These words,

Before I go,

Always hidden in your heart.

Comments: The poet believes that the mother is the source of life, and the child is born by the mother and always attached to the mother. Everything about the child belongs to the mother. Therefore, for her, the poems written naturally belong to her mother and are derivatives of her life.

Star 159

Mom!

The wind and rain in the sky are coming,

The bird hides in its nest;

The storm in my heart is coming,

I only hide in your arms.

Comments: Birds return to their nests in the storm, thinking of their mother's warm embrace is a safe haven for children. When the child has unhappiness, sadness and waves in his heart, put it in his mother's arms and everything will calm down. The similarity between "nest" and "bosom" is warmth and security, which the poet grasps to express his infinite love and gratitude to his mother.

1997 spring water

The vast dusk,

Where am I wandering?

Mom!

All I have to do is convert to you,

Outside the heart, lakes and mountains,

Let me abandon it!

Comments: The poet has a persistent love for his mother, and this poem expresses this deep affection. "Lake" or "mountain", no matter how beautiful or important, can't compare with maternal love? This kind of "abandonment" and "ruthlessness" is the most affectionate expression.