As the sun sets, the afterglow of the setting sun spreads all over the earth.
The sun took off its dazzling coat and put on a bright red shawl. It is so soft and beautiful!
The clear river shines like a mirror in the corner light. When the breeze blows, water waves appear on the river, and the reflection of sunlight vibrates, just like a girl dancing in the water.
The weeping willows by the river plunge their long hair into the water, like a beautiful princess, twisting her slender waist and putting green skirts on the shore to contrast with the sunshine in the water. Unfortunately, they didn't name the winner, but reflected the river half red and half green, like a huge palette.
Although the flowers on the riverside are not so graceful, they always exude charming fragrance.
I stood on the rock and looked around. The mountains in the distance were looming in the fog, which was extremely mysterious. The brightly lit snuff village is like a swarm of fireflies, and the hazy fog connects the river, the earth and the sky. Ah! September 3rd, what a beautiful night! Birds are singing in front of the mountain, and the fruit in the field is fragrant; Dewdrops are like crystal pearls; The hidden moon is like a beautiful bow, even the fallen leaves are full of praise, and the wind is singing hymns.
I love you this intoxicating Mujiang!
Teacher: Ancient poems describing scenery should focus on describing scenery and grasp its characteristics. When writing scenery, there should be true feelings between the lines and express true feelings. Emotion and scenery are inseparable, which is an important means to create artistic conception. A good work should avoid the lack of emotion in the scenery, and make it vivid and emotional. Only when the two are integrated can the article be made.
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Teacher: The students of landscape painting and ancient poetry all know its rewriting method, so how should narrative ancient poetry be rewritten? Next, please look at the rewriting of To Wang Lun.
This is a narrative poem praising friendship. It is also a masterpiece in farewell poems. Since ancient times, the atmosphere of parting has been sad, with few laughter and laughter. But the poet adopted a unique way to create a heroic atmosphere and express deep affection and farewell wishes among friends. Please look at the original text and the revised examples.
(The projection shows poems with pictures and an example "A gift for Wang Lun")
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-Rewrite A Gift for Wang Lun.
Li Bai was one of the greatest poets in the Tang Dynasty. His life was bumpy and he experienced the rise and fall of the Tang Dynasty.
Li Taibai is called "Romantic Poet" because he is generous, easy to swim and good at wine. At that time, a man named Wang Lun worshipped Li Bai very much. He asked his son to recite Li Bai's A Word to Meng Haoran from an early age. Knowing that Li Bai had worked hard for state affairs for a long time and wanted to go out to play, he wrote a letter to Li Bai: How is your husband? There are ten miles of peach blossoms here; How about the wine, sir? There is Wanjia Hotel here. Wang Lun
When Li Bai received this letter, he was elated and thought: Playing and drinking are my favorite things. Why not take this opportunity to relax? So he set off the next day. When he arrived at Wang Lun's house, Li Bai couldn't wait to ask, "Brother, where is Shili Peach Blossom?" Wang Lun smiled and pulled Li Bai to see that there was only one peach tree. Wang Lun said, "We only have a peach tree here. Every time it blooms, it smells fragrant, so it is called Shili Peach Blossom.".
Li Bai asked again, "What about the 10,000 hotels? Why don't we go for a few drinks! " But Wang Lun took Li Bailing to a small restaurant called Wanjia Hotel. Li Bai is very confused. Wang Lun told Li Bai that the owner of this hotel was surnamed Wan, so it was called Wanjia Hotel.
Li Bai was not only not angry, but also cheered again and again. Wang Lun was also very happy and invited Li Bai to be a guest at home. The Wangs gave him a warm reception. Li Bai had a long talk with Wang Lun at home and became close friends.
Li Bai lived in Wang Lun's house for half a year, and time flies. On this day, Li Bai said to Wang Lun, "Brother Wang Lun, I have lived in your house for half a year, and I will leave tomorrow to continue my immortal life." "Why? Is it because I don't treat my guests well that you don't want to stay any longer? " Wang Lun asked. Li Bai waved and explained, "No, your family regards me as a relative. How could I not like it? " I just want to travel around the world. "Wang Lun saw that he couldn't beat Li Bai, so he had to promise to let him go.
The next morning, Li Bai came to Taohuatan with endless nostalgia and regret. Li Bai clenched his fist with tears and said, "Brother, your friendship with me will never be forgotten by Li!" Before the words were finished, there was a song accompanied by footsteps on the shore. Li Bai took a look, ah! It was the villagers who saw him off. Li Bai waved to the crowd and said loudly, "Take care, folks. I believe Li will come to see you again! " One of the people in the crowd said, "Great poet, you should also take care of yourself. I wish you a smooth sailing and we will meet again soon. " At this time, a boat has docked on the shore, waiting for the great poet Li Bai to board. Li Bai stepped into the boat and said his last words to Wang Lun with deep affection: "Brother Wang Lun, although the Peach Blossom Pond is deep, it is not as deep as the friendship between you and me. Let's lift the boat of friendship and sail to each other's hearts.