The red army is not afraid of the expedition, and Qianshan is just idle. Wuling makes waves, and Wumeng takes mud pills. Jinsha River is warm in the clouds and cliffs, and Dadu Bridge is cold with the cross rail. I am glad to see that Minshan Mountain is covered with snow and stretches for miles. Our soldiers crossed it and showed a bright smile.
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Long March: The Central Red Army departed from Jiangxi and Fujian in October 1934 10, and arrived in northern Shaanxi in October 1935/KLOC-0, with a journey of more than 25,000 miles.
Wuling: Dayuling, Qitianling, Dupangling, Zhumengling, Yuechengling or Nanling, spanning Jiangxi, Hunan and Guangdong.
Winding: its tortuous way.
Wumeng: A mountain range on the south bank of Jinsha River between Yunnan and Guizhou.
Walking on the Mud Pill: Kuaitong Zhuan in Hanshu, walking in Osakanoe, rolling down the Mud Pill from the slope, describes the rapid beating.
Iron cable: Luding Bridge on the Dadu River is a bridge composed of thirteen iron cables.
Minshan: At the junction of Sichuan and Gansu, it is about four kilometers above sea level. 1In September, 935, the Red Army's Long March passed here.
Appreciating the Long March is an unprecedented great feat in human history. The Seven Laws and the Long March is an immortal masterpiece in the history of poetry creation.
56 words, full of difficulties and dangers on the Long March, full of China's lofty aspirations. It is a magnificent epic of China's revolution and a bright pearl in China's poetry treasure house. This is a milestone in the history of revolution and poetry.
"The Red Army is not afraid of the expedition, and Wanshui Qian Shan is only idle." The first couplet comes straight to the point, praising the revolutionary spirit of the Red Army, which is not afraid of difficulties, brave and tenacious. This is the central idea of the whole article and the artistic tone of the whole poem. It is the beginning of the whole poem spirit and the end of the whole poem artistic conception. The word "not afraid" is the poetic eye of the whole poem, and "just waiting for leisure" strengthens and reiterates "not afraid"; Difficulty in Expedition covers this extraordinary historical process, while Wan Shui Qian Shan outlines the internal and external meaning of "difficulty". This couplet is like a falling stone, rolling down, affecting the whole article and hanging over the whole poem. "Waiting for Leisure" is as easy as lifting weights, showing the commander-in-chief style of the poet who regards gold as a ladder and deals with the enemies of society. "Only" emphasizes a firm tone and a strong sense of color. It highlights and emphasizes the revolutionary spirit of the Red Army's contempt for difficulties, and shows the iron army style that the Red Army is leisurely, comfortable and invincible in the sword. Couplets are the general leader of the whole poem, and the following triplets are closely related to the first couplet.
The whole poem begins with the first couplet, develops two ideas and constructs two time and space. One is the objective reality: "Expedition is difficult" and "Qianshan" is full of dangers; One is subjective psychology: "not afraid" and "just idle". This constitutes a strong contrast, casting a vast physical space and magnificent psychological space, laying a bold and broad tone for the whole poem.
The four sentences "Zhuanlian" and "Jinglian" describe the Red Army's victory over difficulties from two aspects: mountain and water, which are inherited from the above "Qianshan" and "Wanshui". According to the route of the Red Army's Long March, the poet selected four typical place names, all of which are famous natural disasters, and highly summarized the "Qian Shan Wanshui" in the Red Army's Long March. There are many place names in the poem, most of which are used to indicate the marching route. For example, "The Battle of Qingpingle and Gui Jiang", "Red Flag Leaps over Tingjiang and Longyan to Shanghang" and "Butterfly Loves Flowers". From Tingzhou to Changsha "and" Millions of workers and peasants Qi Xin swept away Jiangxi and attacked Hunan and Hubei "and so on. These are true records of the military activities of the Red Army of Workers and Peasants. Therefore, we can see how * * poetry is closely linked with the China Revolution. Compared with other poems, the practice of entering poems with place names is more concentrated in this paper and shows a greater spatial distance. What is particularly unusual is that the four words listed above should emphasize that the Red Army is moving very fast and unstoppable, and the Red Army has a strong sense of movement in the picture; In this poem, the poet focuses on the central idea that "the Red Army is not afraid of difficulties in its expedition" and emphasizes the Red Army's contempt for difficulties, which is the presentation of the inner world of the Red Army commanders and soldiers. Therefore, the description of the Red Army is hidden, and the merits of the Red Army are compared with mountains and rivers. The verbs "Teng" and "Zou" make the mountains turn from static, which is an explicit expression of the spirit of the Red Army. Generally speaking, it is difficult to put land names into poetry, and too many place names are easy to fail. However, * * was successfully used, not only because he has the poetry that overcomes everything in his works, but also because he has the poetry that is majestic in his heart, which also reflects * *' s ability to temper the language and characters of the motherland.
"Wuling makes waves, and Wumeng takes mud pills." There is a couplet about mountains, and it is also about the Red Army's conquest of mountains. Wuling and Wumeng are objective beings, but when they enter the poet's field of vision, they become aesthetic objects. So it is no longer a simple mountain, but an emotional object. The words "winding" and "majestic" mean that the mountains are high and continuous, and they are the mountains in the hearts of the Red Army and poets. The maximum and minimum are exactly the poet's perception of mountains. The emphasis here is small, not big. The larger the scale, the more difficult it is for the Red Army to March. The more so, the less afraid of the Red Army. Emphasizing smallness also highlights the Red Army's contempt for difficulties. Through the opposition between the two groups, the poet fully demonstrated the indomitable heroism of the Red Army. Technically, this is exaggeration and contrast. It is very clever to describe the mountains as bright lines and the Red Army as dark lines, combining movement and static, combining light and shade, and making each other interesting.
"Jinsha water beats the clouds and cliffs, and Dadu Bridge is cold." There is a couplet about water and the Red Army's conquest of water. The Red Army's forcible crossing of Jinsha River and Dadu River is of great significance in the history of the Long March. The Jinsha River is wide and swift, and Chiang Kai-shek dreamed of using this natural danger to panic in the Sichuan-Yunnan-Guizhou border region of the Red Army. 1935 In May, the Red Army skillfully crossed the Jinsha River. If crossing the Jinsha River skillfully is the cleverest and most successful battle of the Red Army in strategy and tactics, then crossing the Dadu River forcefully is the bravest and most tenacious battle of the Red Army. Dadu River is as dangerous as Jinsha River, and the enemy is heavily guarded. The cunning enemy also tore down the boards of the Luding Bridge on the river, leaving only thirteen iron cables. However, the heroic Red Army braved the enemy's bullets and broke through the Dadu River, crushing Chiang Kai-shek's plot to make the Red Army a second Shi Dakai. Therefore, the battle written in these two sentences has typical significance. The two sentences "Wuling" and "Wumeng" directly show the heroism of the Red Army through their subjective feelings, and these two sentences record stories through writing landscapes and show the heroic deeds of the Red Army through records.
The antonyms of "warm" and "cold" in the cervical couplet are two emotional acupoints carefully designed by the poet. The word "warm" is warm and joyful, showing the joy of overcoming difficulties; The word "cold" is cold and harsh, conveying the aftertaste after a narrow escape. Two adjectives are the great change of spirit and the fission of feelings. They are full of endless meanings, showing endless interest beyond them, swaying and undulating, and Zhang Chi has a feeling.
The Football Association "prefers the snow all over the mountains, and the three armed forces will make a full face." This is a response to the first couplet. Saying "not afraid" at the beginning and "happier" at the end strengthened the theme and sublimated the theme of the poem. "More happiness" is inherited from the above, and it is also the emotional restraint above. It is naturally gratifying that the Red Army broke through the enemy's encirclement by crossing Wuling Mountain, Wumeng Mountain, Jinsha River and grabbing Dadu. Now, the Red Army has crossed Minshan and entered northern Shaanxi. It is not far away to win the victory of the conference, and the purpose of strategic shift has basically been realized. Compared with the previous joy, nature is a worry. Writing "All smiles" is about the laughter of the three armies, and it is the laughter of the upcoming final victory, which further highlights the optimism of the whole poem.
2. Qingping Music Club
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1summer of 934
The east wants to know,
Good morning, Mo Daojun.
Walking through the green hills, people are not old,
The scenery here is very unique.
The mountain peaks outside Huichang,
Directly connected to the east.
The soldier pointed to Nanyue,
More lush.
This word was first published in Poetry Magazine in 1957 1 month.
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Huichang County is located in the southeast of Jiangxi Province, bordering Fujian Province in the east and Guangdong Province in the south via Xunwu County. As early as 1929, * * led the Red Army to Huichang in order to open up the Gannan base area, and then often passed by and lived here. This word was written by the author 1934 in Huichang, where the Guangdong-Jiangxi Provincial Party Committee is located.
[Mo Daojun leaves early] As the old saying goes, "Mo Daojun leaves early, and there are many early pedestrians."
The author wrote: "1934, the situation was critical, and I was depressed when preparing for the Long March. This song "Qing Ping Le", like the previous one "Bodhisattva Man", shows the same state of mind. " "Man" in this sentence and "Jun" in the previous sentence refer to the author himself.
[here] refers to the southern line of the central revolutionary base area.
Huichang Waifeng refers to Huichang Mountain in the northwest of Huichang City, also known as Lanshan Mountain. In the 1960s, the author recalled: Huichang has a high mountain, and I will climb it before dawn.
Ups and downs.
Míng Ming refers to the East China Sea.
[Nanyue] The ancient place name, also called Nanyue, is in the area of Guangdong and Guangxi today. This refers to Guangdong.
Background introduction of Qingpingchang
I will be in Huichang and Huichang Mountain.
Huichang County is located in the southeast of Jiangxi Province, in the east of Ganzhou City, Jiangxi Province, bordering Fujian in the east and Guangdong in the south. Located at the junction of Jiangxi, Fujian and Guangdong provinces, it has been known as the thoroughfare of the three provinces since ancient times. Most of this county is mountainous and hilly. Huichang County is surrounded by water on three sides, and Mianshui River passes around the city.
1February, 929, * * and others led gongsijun into Huichang. 1April, 930, * * led the Red Army to enter Huichang again, and soon entered Huichang County. Since then, Huichang County has become a part of the central base area. With the continuous victory of the Red Army, Huichang's red base area is also expanding day by day, and finally it is spread all over the county, making Huichang the "all-red county" of the central base area. In the future, * * often passes by and lives in Huichang.
Not far from Huichang, it is the south gate of Yunmenling, a base area in central Guangdong. In order to better expand the base area to the southwest, fight on the southern route, develop tungsten mines and develop import and export trade,1In August, 933, the central base area decided to establish Guangdong-Jiangxi Province in the border area between Jiangxi (referred to as "Jiangxi") and Guangdong (referred to as "Guangdong") in the south of the base area, with the provincial location in Huichang.
The people of Huichang County made great contributions and sacrifices to the red base areas in the Second Revolutionary Civil War, and most young people in the county joined the Red Army.
Huichang Mountain, also known as Lanshanling, is located in the northwest of Huichang City and is a part of Wuyi Mountain. Standing on it, overlooking the past, the mountain peaks rise and fall to the southeast. Although Huichang Mountain is only more than 400 meters above sea level, Huichang City seems to snuggle under Huichang Mountain because it is only separated from Huichang County by water. In contrast, Huichang Mountain looks tall and straight.
Second, the writing background
1933 10, Chiang Kai-shek personally commanded about/kloc-0,000,000 troops to start the fifth "encirclement and suppression". At that time, the ultra-left line controlled the leadership of the central government. They took "keeping the enemy out of the country" as their purpose and denied the "guerrilla warfare" and "mobile warfare" used in previous counter-campaigns against "encirclement and suppression". Let tens of thousands of poorly equipped Red Army engage in regular and positional warfare with superior enemy, and fight against the enemy. As a result, the number of the Red Army decreased sharply and the base area was shrinking. At this point, * * has been removed from the leadership position of the Red Army and excluded from the decision-making power within the party.
When the north gate of the central base area-Guangchang and the south gate-Yunmenling were successively lost, * * rushed to Huichang from Ruijin to mobilize the masses and inspire the troops. With the support of the local people, * * commanded the local Red Army to win several battles as the chairman of the Chinese Soviet Union, and finally reversed the passive situation of the southern line. In the future, only the southern line of the central base area is relatively stable, and the other three sides are falling one after another, damaging the people's land.
In this case, anxious * * repeatedly proposed to the leaders of the ultra-left line to change the style of play, only to be punished by staying in the party for observation. Seeing that the blood of the base areas and countless martyrs he created was getting smaller and smaller, and he was too powerful to obtain, one can imagine his mentality at that time.
1in July, 934, the enemy began to attack the central area of the base area, and the situation was very serious. The fifth defeat against "encirclement and suppression" was thus decided. * * After the founding of People's Republic of China (PRC), I recalled this period: "1934, the situation was critical, and I was depressed when preparing for the Long March." At this time, * * is attending the enlarged meeting of the Guangdong-Jiangxi Provincial Party Committee at Wenwuba outside the east gate of Huichang County.
At dawn one day during the meeting, * * and several cadres of Guangdong and Jiangxi provincial committees set out from Wenwuba, crossed Mianshui and climbed Huichang Mountain.
In summer, Huichang Mountain is full of lush birdcages and full of vitality. Looking from a distance, the magnificent mountains and rivers make people daydream. On the top of the hill outside Huichang, I saw Red Army soldiers guarding the hill. After chatting with the soldiers, I witnessed the morning scenery of the mountains in front of me. Thinking of the current critical situation, I suddenly felt deeply, so I recited the first draft of Qingping Happy Meeting, and went back to Wenwuba's residence to write Qingping Happy Meeting.
Appreciation of qingpingchang
The word "Qing Ping Chang" shows the author's confidence and hope for the future of China's revolution, but it also reveals a kind of melancholy.
Due to the wrong leadership of the ultra-left line, the situation of the fifth counter-campaign against "encirclement and suppression" in the central base area at that time was very grim. But the firm belief and optimistic * * filled the author's heart, so the words were written casually, and the time and space involved seemed to be only the moment of climbing the mountain and the limited scenery in his eyes. However, the author controls the scenery with his heart and writes his mind with the scenery, but he has written a profound and broad connotation in a short sentence.
Shang Kan wrote about the time and feelings of mountaineering.
"Dong wants to know that Mo Daojun went early." Desire plays up the characteristics of dawn-the night is over, and the sky will be bright but not bright. "Jun" here refers to the author, because the Red Army soldiers have long been guarding the mountain. Compared with them, the authors who get up early are not too early.
The phrase "I am not old yet" refers to both the author and the Red Army. It was the author who remembered the countless peaks and difficulties he had gone through in those years when he moved to the north and south. His fighting spirit is still firm and his spirit is still strong. The author believes that with this young heart integrated with the revolutionary cause, victory will come.
On the surface, "the scenery here is unique" is a praise for the beautiful scenery of Huichang Mountain, but in fact it is a praise for the red base area, which is in sharp contrast with the * * area.
Throughout the uptown, the vibrant scenery and people's vitality complement each other, forming a long and energetic artistic conception. Through the dim light, readers seem to see the bright sunrise of generate and the infinite hope of China revolution.
Xia Kun especially described the scenery of Huichang Mountain and his contact with soldiers, expressing the author's firm belief that the revolution will be successful although it is tortuous and difficult.
At the beginning, "the peak outside Huichang City leads straight to the east." It shows that the author's line of sight looks far away from the nearby county, presenting the endless winding peaks and the distant East China Sea beyond his eyes to readers, which makes the picture infinitely expanded. It not only confirms the fair "unique scenery here", but also implies that the China Revolution "has a tortuous road and a bright future".
The Red Army soldiers guarding Huichang Mountain introduced everything here to the author, and took the initiative to show the author "South Guangdong", which showed the red army soldiers' wariness of guarding the red base area, including the author and the Red Army soldiers' deep love for the base area. "Lush" specifically describes the lush trees when looking south at Guangdong. In fact, the author predicts that the future of the revolution is good, which shows the author's optimism.
Although the situation in the base area was critical at that time, the author still recited in Xiatan, which reflected the author's optimism. Here, the dawn landscape on Huichang Mountain transcends time and space, bearing profound historical connotation and great personality charm.
This word is very shallow and deep in language, and its structure is tight but not inspiring. In the same situation, he easily expressed the grand theme with heroism, showing the author's leadership.
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