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After many vicissitudes, the old painter was forced to live in an old house that had been put on hold for many years. The house doesn't even have windows, so it feels oppressive when you enter. The old painter took out a piece of white drawing paper and pasted it on the wall. Then he drew a window on it, which looked like a real window. He suddenly felt that the sunshine and air outside the house poured into the hut like running water.
What do you think after reading the above materials? Please write a composition of no less than 600 words on the topic of "Draw a window for yourself", describe your experience, express your views and express your feelings. Self-defined style (except poetry and drama). No names related to your personal information should appear in the text.
Exhibition of outstanding works
Draw a window for yourself (1)
Draw a window for yourself, let yourself see the brilliance of human nature, touch the beating heart strings and feel the care of love.
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I am a student in Wenchuan, and I love painting. In the past, ruthless natural disasters destroyed this rich land. I have been under the teaching building for nearly 72 hours after the earthquake. By this time, I'm already hungry. Just as I was about to give up, my hand touched the brush next to me. Suddenly, I was full of energy and began to paint in this narrow and dark space. "It's too dark, draw a window!" I think.
I drew a window in the northeast corner, huh? What are so many people doing? Just about to take a closer look, a line of striking Chinese characters caught people's eyes, "unite as one, earthquake relief!" " It turns out that all provinces and cities are donating money and materials to help us tide over the difficulties! I bit my lip. "With so many good people helping us, I must not give up!" I thought.
I drew another window in the southwest, which said, "If one side is in trouble, support from all sides!" It turned out that compatriots from Hong Kong, Macao and Taiwan sent us relief food, disinfection equipment and advanced detectors. "So many caring people care about us, I can't give up!" I gritted my teeth and thought.
Picking up the brush, I drew a window directly below. Where is this? I am surprised by this strange country, strangers, strange faces and strange things. "Wei Wenchuan, come on! China, come on! " Oh! It turns out that people all over the world are shouting at us. Come on, hold on! You see, there is an endless stream of fund-raisers with white skin, yellow skin and black skin. I really felt their enthusiasm and love. "There are so many people who care about us. Hold on! " I said to myself, "Never give up!"
This narrow space is bright enough, and I'm going to draw another window directly above it. "Is there anyone down there?"
A series of anxious and kind phone calls flashed through my mind. I shouted excitedly, "I'm still here, thank you for coming to save me!" " "
When I woke up, I was already in a bright ward. The window was bright, but it was not as warm as the window I drew. In times of crisis, drawing a window for yourself will make your life bright.
I also want to draw a window for myself!
Full score reason:
The article is novel and unique in conception, imagining the specific scene of Wenchuan earthquake, skillfully using "northeast corner", "southwest direction" and "directly below" to refer to domestic and foreign aid to Wenchuan, and then pointing out the main idea: love makes people see hope and tide over difficulties together; Love makes people strong. Draw a window and let yourself see hope.
The content is unconventional and innovative, praising the beauty of human nature and the power of love through a window. The language is concise, meaningful and infectious, which makes people sing after reading it.
Draw a window for yourself (2)
It seems particularly cold in the autumn evening. I am walking alone on my way to school. A gust of autumn wind came, yellow leaves floated with the wind, and my thoughts flew with it.
In the afternoon, the teacher announced the results of the English Olympic Games, saying that my grades were too low to enter the semi-finals. It was a bolt from the blue. What are we doing? I lost the election! My parents' expectant eyes suddenly appeared in my mind. Teacher's words of trust, classmate's surprised face, poor home … I shook my head, didn't want to think about it any more, and ran home.
After returning home, my father is cooking and my mother is washing clothes. Against the background of cooking smoke, I feel that the room is particularly dark, the taste of rice is particularly pungent, and the roar of the washing machine is also disturbing. After dinner, I told my parents about my failure in the Olympic Games. Seeing their disappointed faces, I couldn't help it any longer. I cried. When my mother saw me crying, she was distressed and angry and said, "What problem can you solve by crying? What matters now is what you will do next and what attitude you will take to face your future life. " I stayed. ...
Another evening, the ancient sunset reflected the sky feebly. I didn't want to go home, so I went to the small garden, closed my eyes and fell asleep unconsciously. ...
I entered a dream and came to Edison's laboratory. He is looking for a suitable filament material. He tried one thing after another, but his face was not tired at all. He always focused on experiments and never gave up ... Finally, he found it. Hazy, I came to Zu Chongzhi's side again. He is calculating pi. Although it was troublesome, he never gave up. He repeatedly calculated and finally calculated to the seventh place after the decimal point.
Suddenly, I was awakened by a bird cry. I saw the golden chrysanthemums blooming tenaciously in the cold wind. Although the wind always makes it waver, it never gives in ... yeah, didn't it just fail the exam? How can there be ever-victorious generals in the world? In the face of failure, many people have closed the window in their hearts, thinking that they have no face to face the world. At the same time, they kept the sun out and stayed in a dark corner, and they stagnated from then on. And those who are successful are often those who dare to face the reality, open their hearts and persist in living with a positive attitude. Therefore, I also want to open the window in my heart, draw a beautiful scenery for myself and face the future life positively.
So, I happily carried my schoolbag and went home.
Full score reason:
The highlight of this paper is that the author is good at integrating environmental description into his own articles and revealing the inner activities of characters. At the beginning, I wrote that walking alone in the autumn wind, seeing yellow leaves, my thoughts danced with it, naturally introducing topics; Next, I wrote the old sunset, which is the expression of the author's mood at that time. I woke up with a birdsong. The author saw Jin Juhua blooming in the cold wind, "never give in". As a result, the author's heart window finally opened, and a mental journey of transformation appeared in front of the readers.
Draw a window for yourself (3)
As if I could hear my heartbeat, I composed a tune for this silence. My world is only myself, that loneliness and loneliness, no one tells. I tried to smile at myself, and suddenly, the sun covered my world. I saw the sunshine pouring down from the window I painted; I see the world is full of sunshine.
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On that summer afternoon, you fell from the sky like a butterfly. You are so small, hiding in the firewood, I think you look like a strange little monster, ugly. And I, from then on, became a child with a younger brother. At that moment, I hated seeing you. What reason do I have to love you for a child who wants to snatch love from me?
As time goes by, I still don't like you, but I have seen your growth in my eyes. I watch you grow up day by day, watch you walk crooked, watch you call mom sweetly, and watch you walk through the traces of life. I seem to see that you are depriving my parents of their love for me.
I have come all the way from a lonely world, and my world is only myself. And when you shouted "Sister" and asked me to hug you, I seemed to see that I was not alone.
I walked in your growth, and the cycle of the four seasons witnessed the blooming and falling of flowers. I watched you walk through a series of footprints in your life. You are still wittily shouting "Sister" and asking me to hug you with open arms. At this time, I have learned to respond to your affection with a smile.
Perhaps, everything that belongs to me has not left. ...
You will still smile sweetly, and you will still call "Sister" wittily. Like all boys, you are going your own way, but you have left me that heavy and touching affection.
Time is still passing in the jump of the white pony. I silently accepted the feelings you gave me. I tried to open a window for you in my own world, and let your affection light up my world like sunshine.
You, the person who I thought fought for love with, appeared in my life so clearly, but you changed my world, made me no longer lonely, and made me find my world full of sunshine forever. That window lit up my world and my future. ...
Full score reason:
The little author is ingenious and skillfully designed an "inscription" to cause the following. At first, I expressed my fear that my brother would take away my love, so I hated the new members of this family. Over time, my brother will not only be called "mother", but also "sister", and he will hold "I" with open arms. My brother's growth taught me to smile and accept my brother's affection. I drew a window for myself, and the sunshine of family lit up the whole world of "me".
This paper adopts the writing method of promoting first and then restraining, and explains the affection between brothers and sisters from a unique perspective, which brings unusual feelings to readers.
Draw a window for yourself (4)
When life builds a dark, damp and depressing barrier, pick up a persistent pen with tenacious hands and draw a window for yourself with happy pigments.
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girl
I don't like to talk, and I don't like to associate with my classmates, because my mother told me that I have a disease, that is, I can't play with others, I can't be nervous and I can't be excited.
When I was very young, I realized that I was a person who was not cared for by fate.
My parents love me very much. Seeing that I'm depressed all day, they signed me up for a community pairing activity.
That day, my partner was an old man in a wheelchair. He looks very old, but his old face seems to have indomitable stubbornness. There are a pair of eyes full of wisdom in the vicissitudes of life.
He touched my head and said, "Hello!" So, I smiled.
the aged
I am very old. I have high blood pressure several times, and my heart is dying. The doctor told me to relax and not get excited. I hear the sand of time slowly flowing down, and I am not willing to sit in a wheelchair all day. I participated in the club pairing activities, where two people who are paired together can read, discuss and encourage each other. It is important that young and old can bring happiness to the little angels.
My partner is a little girl. She is not as happy as her peers. I learned from her parents that she had a congenital heart disease. I touched her head and said, "Hello!" I saw her smile. I know, she is still an angel.
So I told her my story.
girl
He used to be an athlete. More than forty years ago, when his sports career was at its peak, a car accident crippled his legs. He has been depressed and even gave up on himself. At this time, his dying mother told him, "If fate builds a wall around you, you should draw a window for yourself with both hands." So, grandpa returned to the playground in a wheelchair and became a sprint coach.
I was surprised to find that his trouser legs were empty below the knee.
Go to the hospital for a follow-up visit today. The doctor said I might not live to be eighteen. My parents cried, but I didn't. Because my grandfather left me a sentence a few days ago before he died, "Draw a window for yourself!" "
I know the rest of my life will be full of sunshine.
Full score reason:
The structure of this article is novel and unique. First of all, the author begins with a philosophical "inscription" to attract readers' attention at the first time. Secondly, the story is told in the first person from the perspective of the old man and the girl by using the subtitle. Finally, with the girl's narrative as the end, the structure of the article becomes vivid with the transformation of characters.
In addition, the author uses the old man's words "draw a window for yourself" to enlighten people.
Draw a window for yourself (5)
The eagle was injured by huge raindrops and watched the sky reappear in the blue sky, so it continued to fly bravely; The stream was blocked by fallen trees, and I heard the vigorous waves of the sea beating against the stone shore, struggling over the obstacles and continuing to sing cheerful songs. People, when frustrated, draw a window for themselves! Open a window for yourself, feel the glory of the world, ride the wind and waves, and sail far away!
God closed a door for her, but she opened a window herself. Touched and inspired countless people, Helen Keller lost her sight and hearing because of illness at an early age. Before her world was full of sunshine, the door slammed. No one could imagine how to fill her heart with sunshine in complete darkness, but she did it. She opened a window for herself, and her life is still gorgeous, even shining brilliantly. She wrote an angel song with her life. Her window illuminates not only herself, but also countless originally dark worlds in later generations.
As long as there is a window, life will never be dark. When the dull room is full of dust in the afternoon, a ray of light comes in from the window, passes through the dust and enters people's hearts. Suddenly, the flower of the mind bloomed angrily.
Life should be like this: success, such as the bright moon shining a hundred flowers, such as a deep pool, regardless of adversity, regardless of the detachment of success or failure, is a post station to whip and control horses, climb high and look far; Defeated, still dripping water wears away the stone, merging into the sea, breaking through the depression of dust and finding the shining confidence under the white light; Rong, Jiangshan still, charm still exists, just like the sea and mountains, familiar with the years, flashy, arrogant; Bear the burden of humiliation, Han Xin, snow-covered pine, like an ignorant fairy' ups and downs, ups and downs, do not give up eating because of choking. ...
As long as there is sunshine in your heart and your own window, everyone's world is beautiful and full of refreshing fragrance. Even in the noisy market, the beautiful world brought by that window is always quiet, illuminating the road of life for you and shining the whole world!
Full score reason:
This article has beautiful language, flexible sentence patterns and fresh and elegant style. Starting from the phenomena in nature, the author thinks that people should draw a window for themselves when they are frustrated and confused. Take Helen Keller as an example. The language is plain, and there are arguments, lyricism and caring themes in the narrative. In the narration of "success", "failure", "glory" and "humiliation" in life, the necessity of "drawing a window for yourself" is expounded from different angles through the combination of long and short sentences and the interlacing of languages.
Draw yourself a window (6)
A dream of red mansions with a long history. In this dream of red mansions that touched countless young people, how many people drew a window for themselves? Leaving only eternal regrets. what can I do? What a pity!
Lin Daiyu
As the saying goes, "flowers die when they fall." Daiyu's desolation before burying flowers made you cry, leaving only a string of tears and endless regrets. But why don't you draw yourself a window and see the vitality of "wildfire won't completely devour them, they will be tall again in the spring breeze"; Appreciate the early spring scenery of "several early warblers compete for warm trees, whose new swallow pecks at spring mud". Dai-yu, draw yourself a window. Your romantic talents will not make heaven jealous, and you will surely blossom your own cherry blossoms.
Xue Baochai
As the saying goes, "Beauty looks pale, jade looks sad without trace", how many people feel sorry for you and are obsessed with you.
Why do you want to marry Baoyu who doesn't love you? Just for the title of grandma Nabao? Baochai, draw yourself a window, look at the bustling outside, and look at the scholar who "sees all the Chang 'an flowers in one day with a horseshoe in the spring breeze". Can you be worse than Baoyu? Baochai, draw yourself a window, and you will definitely open your own begonia.
Qingwen
"It is difficult to get rid of the clouds in a foggy month, and the heart is higher than the sky. How many people sympathize with you? You are just a second-class girl in Justin, without the beauty of prostitutes, the servility of Pinger, and the secrecy and scheming of Yuanyang. If you bow your head in front of Mrs. Wang and draw a window for yourself, how did you die so quickly? Qingwen, draw yourself a window, and you will definitely open your own hibiscus.
A woman, a flower language, sets off her unique beauty. Draw a window for yourself, history will no longer regret, and you will no longer be lonely.
Full score reason:
Taking A Dream of Red Mansions as the writing background, the author lists three representative figures, namely Lin Daiyu, Xue Baochai and Qingwen, with their names as the subtitle, and each person corresponds to a poem, which vividly reproduces the story that happened to them. The sentence reveals the author's helplessness and sadness to them, and gives the author three kinds of flower words: draw a window for yourself, and there will be three flowers in the calendar that will never die.
After all, this is only the author's good wish, and no one can change what has happened. what can I do? "Enough to express the author's voice. However, this article leaves us with profound thoughts: the deceased is like this, and the living can learn from it.
Draw a window for yourself (7)
In the long journey of life, we are always eager for the most successful career, the happiest family and the perfect friendship, but how can life always be as we wish? We will encounter difficulties of one kind or another. When fate puts us in a desperate situation, don't panic, don't be discouraged, light a heart lamp for yourself, draw a window for yourself, and leave a hope for yourself.
In the face of difficulties, as long as you have faith and courage, you can get out of the predicament. And sometimes others can't give you such courage and belief. You can only draw a window for yourself.
Sima Qian was a historian and writer in the Western Han Dynasty. He was sent to prison for offending the dragon. His life can be said to be black, but Sima Qian gave himself a hope and a bright light. He told himself to try to prove himself and get out of the predicament. He devoted himself to writing books, and finally gave birth to Historical Records, which was praised by Mr. Lu Xun as "the masterpiece of historians and the dissolute charm of yuan rhyme", which shocked the world and gained worldwide fame. From this perspective, when we are at a disadvantage, we should draw a window for ourselves.
"No.5. 12 "Wenchuan earthquake shocked the hearts of all people in China, and this sudden catastrophe caused countless people to lose their lives. But there are also many miracles of life: 100 hours, 104 hours, 164 hours ... Even 179 hours, there are still signs of life. When the reporter interviewed the survivor in the179th hour, he told the reporter that he believed that rescuers would definitely find him. It is this belief that accompanied him through the test of 179 hours. In the meantime, if he doesn't give himself a hope, the result will be unimaginable.
Draw yourself a window and you will have hope. If you build a fortress around yourself, who can help you?
Draw a window for yourself and give yourself a hope! Draw a window for yourself and give yourself strength! Draw a window for yourself and give yourself courage!
All thorns will be cut off, all storms will subside and all setbacks will become a thing of the past. We will welcome Sha Ou Ji Xiang, water and sky; We will appreciate the rainbows and mountains after the rain; We will realize a comfortable life and a wonderful life. It's all because of a window you drew for yourself.
Full score reason:
This is a normative argumentative essay. The author puts forward his own point of view at the beginning, and then demonstrates it with facts and reasons. These examples are common and readable. The reasoning is unconventional, the comparison between ancient and modern is convincing, and finally the conclusion is drawn naturally, revealing the main idea profoundly.
Deeply conceived. The article enumerates the examples of Sima Qian and Wenchuan earthquakes, and explains a truth to us: in a desperate situation, there must be hope; Leave yourself a window of hope. What's more, this article emphasizes that only you can save yourself. A brand-new perspective left a deep impression on readers.
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