The taste of life
The taste of life, if you have the elegance of tea, you can taste all kinds of life.
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His life was full of disasters, and he ran between his home and the altar. Finally, he realized that "death is something that does not need to be rushed for success, and death is inevitable." Then, his heart opened to the sun, the earth and life. Yes, he is Shi Tiesheng, the author of Ditan and me. Although he had to do dialysis twice a day and was very ill, he kept writing during that little time. From his face, I can't see the shadow of illness, but I have tasted the taste of life, that is, bitterness is permeated with sweetness, and these sweetness are given by that strong glass of wine.
From this, I thought of a sentence from Gu Cheng: "The night gave me black eyes, but I used them to find light." The suffering in life makes us imprison ourselves in a dark prison, and the world seems to have only one color-black. In fact, as long as we move the key in our hands, the light will fill the whole room. So, please use our bright eyes to chase the rising sun tomorrow and embrace the hardships and sufferings of life.
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Tagore looked up at the geese flying south and said with emotion, "There are no traces of wings left in the sky, but I have flown." In this world, a person is too small. Although Bill Gates, the richest man in people's hearts, was mentioned again hundreds of years later, it was just a grain in the dust. A mediocre and busy life makes people just feel that life is mediocre. What about mediocrity? Tao Yuanming tasted the indifference of "picking chrysanthemums under the hedge and seeing Nanshan leisurely", Haizi tasted the appropriateness of "facing the sea and blooming in spring" from mediocrity, and Lin Yutang tasted the taste of autumn from mediocrity. A vivid example, how can you say mediocrity?
Please stop your hurried steps and bend down to appreciate the delicate grass on the wall; Please stop your right hand and bend down to smell the fragrant flowers on the roadside; Please stop your fast "running" brain and look up at the romantic sunset ... At this time, you will find that although the taste of life is like a light vegetarian dish, with quiet and serene seasoning, you can taste the most natural taste and understand the various States of life.
Bing Xin once said: "No matter what kind of life, it is all the wealth of life." The taste of life varies from person to person. However, as long as you have the generosity to make tea, that is, life is like a piece of tea brewing slowly, with white mist lingering and sweet taste in bitterness.
1, to the point.
Articles should be written according to the topic, and the topic can also be said to be the soul of the article.
The title of this article is "The Taste of Life", so it is necessary to write some feelings or feelings about life through narration, which is metaphorically called "taste". It needs to be explained through narration: what is the taste of life? To be clear, is it sweet? Is it bitter? Or something else? This must be clear, but many students are not clear. At the end of the article, the article is eloquent, vaguely saying that "the taste of life is like this" and "my life has many flavors". This kind of article is not relevant enough.
From the beginning to the end, some articles did not see the words "the taste of life", but completely wrote other contents, such as "the color of life", "the beauty of family", "the preciousness of love" and so on. Although they also wrote "life", they didn't write a little "taste", which is a digression.
2. Material selection
This article should be based on life, write about events, events we participate in, things we seem to hear, and things we know indirectly. Although he can write, he lacks realism and cannot infect people.
Some students described it, but they mainly wrote about people, paraphrasing the content of "a respected person", which deviated from the key point and could not express the theme well.
Some students have written four or five episodes about events, but there is no connection between them, which seems fragmented and has no clear center.
Choose a good material, write one or two related events, and feel the taste of life from the events. The center is clear and continuous. This composition should be written with one or two flavors, such as bitter, sweet, and from bitter to sweet. It is not appropriate to write anything. In an 800-word article, the theme must be clear and focused. Don't write too complicated. Dig a well to see water. Don't dig too many wells, you can't see the water. I wrote a lot of flavors, but they were all superficial and thankless. For details, please refer to the composition.
3. Purpose
Conception is the theme of the article. The theme should be dug deeper and higher, which will inspire people after reading it. In the articles written by many students, the theme stays in "ups and downs of life", "everything in life has a taste" and "this is my life", but the significance of having such a taste in life is not discussed.
Many students can't speak normally, let alone ask questions.
In fact, sometimes a sentence or two that makes the finishing point can make the article colorful and improve the score of 5 to 6 points. For example, you write "Life has its ups and downs", but you add a few words, "These flavors are all gifts of life, and the ups and downs are valuable, which makes me understand the true meaning of life: only through hard work can we change from bitterness to sweetness and finally taste the sweetness of life."
Some students described "the bitterness in life" in detail, and they can also discuss the topic appropriately, such as adding the following sentence: "The taste of life is very heavy. In today's life, I may taste more bitterness, but there is still hope in life. I believe that my future life will not only have this taste. " The idea immediately rose a lot, which shows the author's persistence in life.
4. Structure
Writing articles should have a sense of structure. To understand what kind of narrative structure is good, we should not let the article be like a loose sand without a good structure.
It will be very vivid to start with a straightforward narrative. You can also discuss it properly, write two or three lines, and don't talk too much.
Write one or two things in the middle, an 800-word article, and it is not advisable to write too many events. Some students write "sweet", "sour", "bitter" and "spicy" in it, and writing four things is bound to force evenly. Every part is superficial and not profound, and the article appears scattered and thankless. This "bittersweet" four-part structure should be taken as a warning.
If you write something, describe it carefully and write some waves. For example, a classmate wrote about the sweetness of life, and it is rare for a family to get together and go to the train station to watch the train. This activity is quite good. However, writing the plan first, then the road, then seeing the train, and then writing it back is very monotonous. Why not insert a memory of the road? Since the theme is the sweetness of family, we can write a story of "Once upon a time, families were very busy and seldom got together, alienated from each other and lost their families". In this way, the theme will be more profound and the event will be vivid.
If you write two things, two years should be related. For example, if you both write about learning events, you can write from "bitterness" to "sweetness", which reflects the logical relationship before and after, and can improve the idea of the article: only by experiencing the bitterness of life can you taste the sweetness of life. If you write about the sweetness of family, you can also write two things, from "the loss and bitterness of family" to "the return of family", reflecting the sweetness of life. There is a logical connection between events, and the center is often clear and concentrated.
There should be a few discussions between these two events as a transition. There is no transition, it seems abrupt. In the context of transition, it plays a great role. Two or three sentences should be enough for discussion. Don't make a long speech.
The ending. Put the question at the end. If you ask a question at the beginning or in the middle, you can be a little more subtle at the end. But most students are unable to write a subtle ending, so it is better to order a title. Summarize the smell you feel in your life, and point out the enlightenment this smell gives people and what kind of influence it has on your future life. The discussion at the end should not be too long, just three or four sentences. Too long is redundant.
In addition, flashback and interpolation can also be used for writing. But the structure must be complete.
5. Language
Language is very important, and language is the first element of an article. Language shows literary talent. Some students have a good choice of materials, but the language is not good, and there are many sick sentences, which are not coherent before and after, which affects the main answer. Recommended, praised and trampled by the questioner. What is your evaluation of this answer? Put away comments//high quality or satisfaction or special types or recommended answers dottimewindow.iperformance & window.iperformance.mark ('c _ best',+newdate); Lawyer recommendation service: If your problem has not been solved, please describe your problem in detail and seek free professional advice through Baidu Law Professional Edition. For other similar questions, please write a composition of more than 600 words on the topic of "the taste of life", and the style is not limited to 602011-except poetry. 920 1 1-02-05 composition: please write a narrative of not less than 500 words on the topic of "the taste of seventh grade" The composition of1362018-02-19 is worth tasting. Semi-propositional composition, junior high school composition, more than 600 words. Be sure to write the original composition "Strong Taste of the Year" on 7 120 1 16. Choose an opinion of no less than 600 words. Please write an article on the topic of "the true meaning of life". No less than 600 words. 1420 17-03-26 Write a composition (no less than 680 words) on the topic of "the taste of ()". 32014-10-01Please write an essay on the topic "The more unforgettable". Requirements: 1. Style is not limited, not less than 600 words. 2. There must be no such problems as real name and school 3? & gt recommended for you: F.context('cmsRight', [{'URL':'/d01373f082025aaf511aa256e9edab64034f1a07? x-BCE-process = image % 2f resize % 2Cm _ lfit % 2Cw _ 450% 2Ch _ 600% 2c limit _ 1% 2f quality % 2Cq _ 85% 2f format % 2Cf _ auto '，' contractId':'A24KA00562 '，}，{ ' URL ':/s？ word = % E6 % AC % A7 % E6 % B4 % B2 % E6 % 9D % AF & sa = searchpromo _ ozb _ zhidao _ tuijian '，' src ':'/3 BF 33 a 87 e 950352 AAF 5 df 4954 143 fbf2b 2 1 18 b6b？ x-BCE-process = image % 2f resize % 2Cm _ lfit % 2Cw _ 450% 2Ch _ 600% 2c limit _ 1% 2f quality % 2Cq _ 85% 2f format % 2Cf _ auto '，' contractId ':' '，}])； Why is the cost of cancer treatment getting higher and higher? The price of electric cars has dropped many times. Is the quality guaranteed? What impact will the "network toilet" have? Is Huaqiang North's second-hand mobile phone reliable? I recommend f.context ('recbrand', [{"img": "\/86D6277F9E2F07083523F69DFB 24B 899A901F20d? x-BCE-process = image % 2f resize % 2Cm _ lfit % 2Cw _ 450% 2Ch _ 600% 2c limit _ 1% 2f quality % 2Cq _ 85% 2f format % 2Cf _ auto "，" url":"/hm.js？ 6859 ce 5a af 00 FB 00387 e 6434 E4 FCC 925 "； var s = document . getelementsbytagname(" script ")[0]； s.parentNode.insertBefore(hm，s)； })(); window . TT = 17 19558506；