If I were a snowflake,
Handsome in midair,
I have to know my direction clearly-
Fly, fly, fly-
This land has my direction.
Don't go to that cold valley,
Don't go to the desolate foothills,
Don't be disappointed in the deserted streets-
Fly, fly, fly-
Look, I have my direction!
Flying in the air,
Identify quiet homes,
Waiting for her to visit in the garden—
Fly, fly, fly-
Ah, she smells like cinnabar plum!
I was naked at that time,
Ying Ying touched her skirt,
Close to her tender heart-
Ablation, ablation, ablation-
Into her gentle heart!
Appreciate:
In the poem, the poet compares himself to a snowflake flying towards love and ideal, with cheerful and bright colors, sincere and delicate feelings, and full of positive feelings for individual liberation.
The whole poem has four sections. The first and second sections vividly depict Snowflake's persistent pursuit and yearning for love and ideals. The poet assumes that he is a snowflake and expresses his feelings with the help of the artistic image of snowflake. Although snowflakes are elegant and chic, they are not erratic. It will never go to cold valleys and lonely foothills, but find its own direction, optimistic, confident, dedicated and determined.
The third and fourth sections describe the cheerful mood of snowflake after it reaches the ideal situation. In that quiet garden, snowflakes come to wait for the object, and she exudes the elegant fragrance of cinnabar plum. Snowflakes bravely flew to her, stuck tightly to her skirt and melted in her mind.
Abandon all the noise in the world, forget all the troubles in the world, and embrace love or ideals tightly until they are integrated. What a charming realm!
The artistic characteristics of poetry are: appropriate metaphor, beautiful melody, exquisite structure, neat sentences, rich musical beauty and architectural beauty; The language is fresh and implicit, the feelings are delicate and rich, and the style is soft and clear. The whole poem gives people a quiet, elegant and pure beauty, which makes people feel elegant, healthy and positive.
Extended data:
This poem was written in 1 924,65438+February, and published in the first volume of Modern Review, No.6 1925,1. At that time, Xu Zhimo was an idealist and an optimist with simple beliefs. He pursued love, freedom and beauty enthusiastically.
The vigorous spirit of the times during the May 4th Movement was in harmony with the poet's lively, natural and unrestrained personality and unrestrained talent, which formed Xu Zhimo's unique artistic style, which is obvious in this poem.
This poem has been included in college Chinese textbooks of many schools.
Fang Ming, president of the Quyuan Society of China and professor of beijing language and culture university, used China's famous modern literature to evaluate modern poetry: "This poem can best reflect Xu Zhimo's chic, elegant and free-and-easy personality and style."
Modern poet Zhu Xiang's College Chinese: "This poem is the most perfect poem in Zhimo."
Dong Xiaoyu, Dean and Professor of School of Journalism and Communication, Southwest University, Appreciation of Famous Chinese and Foreign Poems: "When you walk into Xu Zhimo and The Happiness of Snowflakes with serenity and spirituality in the evening when no one is there, you will appreciate the unique persistence and beauty in elegant and dancing words."
Baidu Encyclopedia-The Happiness of Snowflakes