300 words are adapted from the ancient poems of Niu Lang Xing.

1. Who can rewrite it into modern Chinese according to The Distant Altair? About 300 words, the cowherd is far away, and Vega is bright.

Weaver raised her soft white hands and weaved back and forth. She couldn't knit all day and cried like rain.

Tianhe is shallow, how far apart? They can't talk to each other across a clear and shallow river. Comments on Petunia and Weaver Girl's Names.

Altair, or "Hegu II", is located in the east of the Milky Way. Vega, also known as "Tiansun", is located in the west of the Milky Way, opposite the morning glory.

In China, the folk stories of Petunia Guantian and Weaver Girl originated very early. Xiaoya Dadong wrote a poem about Penny and the Weaver Girl, but it only wrote two stars.

"Spring and Autumn Yuanmingbao" and "Huainan Zizhen" began to say that the weaver girl is a goddess. In Cao Pi's Ge Yanxing, Cao Zhi's Luo Shen Fu and Jiu Yong, Petunia and Zhinv became husband and wife.

Cao Zhi's "Nine Odes" said: "The cow is the husband and the weaver girl is the woman. Next to the river drums everywhere, the star of Penny the Weaver will appear for a while on July 7.

"This is the clearest record at that time. This poem "Far Morning Altar" in Nineteen Ancient Poems describes the separation of the morning glory and the weaver girl. Its era was in the late Eastern Han Dynasty, slightly earlier than that of Cao Pi and Cao Zhi.

Comparing this poem with the works of Cao Shi brothers, we can see that the story of Petunia and Weaver Girl was finalized from the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty to the Wei Dynasty. This poem is about a couple holding a cow and a weaver girl in the sky, but the viewpoint is on the ground. Is to observe the parting pain of the couple with the eyes of a bystander.

Exchange two sentences from two places, saying that "Jumping" stands for cow and "Jiao Jiao" stands for Weaver Girl. Titiao and Jiao Jiao have different views on each other, so we can't be persistent.

Morning glory is not bright, Weaver Girl is not far away. They are all so far away and so bright. However, it is easy to think of a wanderer far away from home with a petunia belonging to a distant relative, and it is also easy to think of the beauty of a woman with a weaver girl belonging to a distant relative.

In this case, it seems that they can no longer be interchanged. If it is intertextual, its interest will be reduced by half if it is replaced by "Jiao Jiao Altair, a distant river girl".

The subtlety of poetic language can be seen here. The purpose of calling the Weaver Girl "Hehan Girl" is to make up three syllables, and at the same time avoid using "Weaver Girl" in three words.

The former sentence uses "Altair" and the latter sentence uses "Vega", which is neither rhyming nor monotonous. River Girl is much more vivid.

"Hehan woman" refers to a woman on the edge of the Milky Way, who is more likely to be associated with a real woman, ignoring that she is a star. I don't know if the author took such pains when writing poems. Anyway, different writing methods have different artistic effects.

In a word, the arrangement of the ten words "Altair, Jiao Jiao Hehan Girl" can be said to be the most ingenious arrangement and the most muddy effect. The following four sentences are devoted to the Weaver Girl, saying that although she knits sweaters all day, she can't knit a horse because her heart is full of sadness.

"Fine jade hand" means fine jade hand. In order to compete with the next sentence "Zhazha plays on the loom", the sentence structure has been changed. The word "Zhuo" refers to painting and painting, which is close to reaching out.

"Zhazha" is the sound of the loom. Raft is the shuttle on the loom.

The poet used the word "get" here. "The Book of Songs Xiaoya Four Dry": "To be a woman, carry a tile (spinning? )。

"The word means to play and play. Although the weaver girl stretched out her plain hand, she was not interested in knitting. She just fondled the loom and burst into tears.

In the sense of The Book of Songs Dadong, "nothing can be done all day": Weaver Girl, seven times a day. Even if the weaver girl is busy, she can't knit a stripe well. "

The last four sentences are the poet's lament: "He Han is pure and shallow, how much is the difference?" "There is more water, and the pulse is speechless." The milky way between Petunia and Weaver Girl is clear and shallow, and Petunia and Weaver Girl are not far apart. Although only separated by water, they can't talk to each other.

"Yingying" may be interpreted as describing the shallowness of water, which may not be accurate. "Yingying" does not describe water, and the word "pulse" in the next sentence describes the weaver girl.

Notes of six ministers in Selected Works: "Yingying is beautiful." This is accurate.

Many people think that "Yingying" must describe water before "Yishui". But the original intention of surplus is overflow. If we describe water, we should also describe its fullness, not its shallowness.

Yingying is interpreted as shallow because of the influence of "the river is clear and shallow" above, not Yingying's original intention. "Yingying" appeared in Selected Works. In addition to this poem, there is also "Yingying is a girl upstairs with eyes as bright as a window".

See also nineteen ancient poems. Shan Li's note: "Guangya said,' If you win, endure.

Surplus and victory are the same, and the old saying goes. "This is to describe the beauty of women's manners, so the notes of ENT are extended to" Li Duan ".

Another example is "On Mulberry" written by Han Yuefu: "Ying Ying gave cloth and Ran Ran gave Zhong Chao." It also describes people's behavior.

Because the Weaver Girl is called Hehan Girl, the beauty of her appearance is also reflected among Hehan people, which means "overflowing water". "Pulse", Shan Li's note: "Er Ya" says, "Pulse, look at each other.

Guo Pu said,' The pulse condition is that we look at each other. "No word for pulse" means that although Hehan is shallow, Weaver Girl and Penny can only look at each other with the pulse and don't talk.

There are ten sentences in this poem, six of which are reduplicated, namely "Tiao", "Jiao Jiao", "Xian Xian", "Ying Ying" and "buy buy". These overlapping words make this poem concise, beautiful and interesting.

Especially in the last two sentences, if a sad image of * * * appears on paper, it is a rare meaningful and muddy sentence.

For the first time in my life, I really realized the significance of my parents to our lives. They brought us into this world and gave us selfless love and care.

We had nothing, but they gave us everything without asking for anything in return. Although their company is ordinary, it is something we can never lose, just like the hardest bone in our body. Without their strong support, we will become weak.

It's the first time I'm so timid in the face of life. If I lose my mother, I don't know if I have enough courage to spend the rest of my life. The next day, I took a road I had never taken before, ran from school for three hours and asked for three hours, and finally found the hospital.

Who said that? Because I know where I am going and what I am going to do, I am not afraid of anything. I met my father. His sparse hair turned gray, and he aged ten years overnight.

"Your mother has just finished surgery and will be able to go in and see her soon." Dad's voice is a little hoarse, which shows how tired and scared he was last night.

My mother is still here, and my heart has finally stabilized a little. During the waiting, my aunt who accompanied the hospital told me secretly.

3. Rewrite a composition according to the 200-word essay Altair.

A 200-word essay adapted from Altair

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"All the way Altair, JiaoJiaoHe han female. Skillful hands, make a loom. All day, tears poured down. The river is clear and shallow, with many differences. Ying Ying is easy to water, and his pulse is silent. "

Morning glory and Weaver Girl meet so far away and so bright. Weaver stretched out her white hand and fiddled with the loom. Listening to Zaza's voice, I feel lonely. I've been thinking about Cowherd. I spent the whole day not knitting cloth and cried like rain. Petunia and Weaver Girl are not far apart, but separated by a clear and shallow galaxy. Their hearts are so close, but how far apart? Just across a clear Tianhe, I can only look at each other, but I can't say the pain in my heart ... My silent eyes are moist.

Please ask Cowherd Star to rewrite the 400-word essay. Altair and Weaver Girl are the names of two stars.

Altair, or Hegu II, lies in the east of the Milky Way. Vega, also known as Tiansun, is located in the west of the Milky Way, opposite the morning glory.

In China, the folk stories of Petunia Guantian and Weaver Girl originated very early. Xiaoya Dadong wrote a poem about Penny and the Weaver Girl, but it only wrote two stars.

"Spring and Autumn Yuanmingbao" and "Huainan Zizhen" began to say that the weaver girl is a goddess. In Cao Pi's Ge Yanxing, Cao Zhi's Luo Shen Fu and Jiu Yong, Petunia and Zhinv became husband and wife.

Cao Zhi's "Nine Songs" said: Petunia is the husband and Weaver is the woman. Next to the river drums everywhere, the star of Penny the Weaver will appear for a while on July 7.

This is the clearest record at that time. This poem "Far Morning Altar" in Nineteen Ancient Poems describes the separation of the morning glory and the weaver girl. Its era was in the late Eastern Han Dynasty, slightly earlier than that of Cao Pi and Cao Zhi.

Comparing this poem with the works of Cao Shi brothers, we can see that the story of Petunia and Weaver Girl was finalized from the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty to the Wei Dynasty. This poem is about a couple holding a cow and a weaver girl in the sky, but the point of view is on the ground, which is to observe the parting pain of their husband and wife with the eyes of a third party.

Switch between the two places and put pen to paper, saying that the cow is far away and the weaver girl is bright. Titiao and Jiao Jiao have different views on each other, so we can't be persistent.

Morning glory is not bright, Weaver Girl is not far away. They are all so far away and so bright. However, it is easy to think of a wanderer far away from home with a petunia belonging to a distant relative, and it is also easy to think of the beauty of a woman with a weaver girl belonging to a distant relative.

In this case, it seems that they can no longer be interchanged. If it is intertextuality, the interest will be reduced by half if it is replaced by a beautiful morning glory and a distant river girl.

The subtlety of poetic language can be seen here. The purpose of calling Weaver Girl Hehan Girl is to make up three syllables and avoid using Weaver Girl in three words.

The former sentence always uses Altair, and the latter sentence refers to Vega, which is neither rhyming nor monotonous. Hehan women are more energetic.

Hehan woman means a woman on the edge of the galaxy, which is more easily associated with a real woman, but ignores that she is a star. I don't know if the author took such pains when writing poems. Anyway, different writing methods have different artistic effects.

In a word, the arrangement of the ten words "Altair" and "Han woman of Jiao Jiao River" can be said to be the most ingenious arrangement and the most muddy effect. The following four sentences are devoted to the Weaver Girl, saying that although she knits sweaters all day, she can't knit a horse because her heart is full of sadness.

Delicate hands means delicate hands. In order to compete with the next sentence, the structure of the sentence has been changed. Those pull, draw, draw, close to reaching out.

Zaza is the sound of a loom. Rafts are shuttles on looms.

The poet used a word here. The Book of Songs, Xiaoya's Four Cadres: A girl is born, and a tile (spinning) is carried.

This word means to play, to play. Although the weaver girl stretched out her plain hand, she was not interested in knitting. She just fondled the loom and burst into tears.

All day long, there is not a chapter in the Book of Songs Dadong: Weaver Girl, seven times a day. Even if the weaver girl is busy, she can't knit a stripe well. "

The last four sentences are the poet's lament: What's the difference between He Han's simplicity and simplicity? Between water and water, there are no words. The milky way between Petunia and Weaver Girl is clear and shallow, and Petunia and Weaver Girl are not far apart. Although only separated by water, they can't talk to each other.

Yingying may be interpreted as describing the shallowness of water, which may be inaccurate. Yingying doesn't describe water, but both the word and the pulse of the next sentence describe the weaver girl.

Notes of Six Ministers in Selected Works: Yingying is beautiful. This is accurate.

Many people think that Yingying must describe water when she puts it in front of water. But the original intention of surplus is overflow. If we describe water, we should also describe its fullness, not its shallowness.

Yingying is interpreted as shallow because of the influence of the clear and shallow river above, not Yingying's original intention. In the anthology, in addition to this poem, Yingying's upstairs daughter appeared, who served as a window.

See also nineteen ancient poems. Shan Li's Note: Guangya said: Victory, forbearance.

Surplus and victory are the same, and the old saying goes. This is to describe the beauty of women's manners, so the five ministers' notes are extended to Li Duan.

In addition, Han Yuefu's On Mulberry: "Ying Ying is in the hotel, and Ran Ran is in the hotel. It also describes people's behavior.

Since the Weaver Girl is called the Hehan Girl, the beauty of her appearance is reflected between Hehan, which means "Ying Ying is a river". Pulse condition, Shan Li's note: Er Ya says pulse condition depends on the other person.

Guo Pu said: The pulse condition is to look at each other. Nothing means that although Hehan is shallow, Weaver Girl and Petunia can only look at each other in silence.

There are sixteen sentences in this poem, six of which use overlapping words, namely, Tiaotiao, Jiao Jiao, Xianxian, English-English and Pulse. These overlapping words make this poem concise, beautiful and interesting.

Especially in the last two sentences, if a sad image of * * * appears on paper, it is a rare meaningful and muddy sentence. Another article: Cowherd! I miss you so much. How are you and your son? "Vega stood in front of Vega's house and looked at it. Unfortunately, no one.

Back in the house, looking at the loom, the weaver girl cried. "Why are you a fairy? Not so good! You can be with the cowherd ... "I finally eased my mood and felt cold. At first glance, my skirt is wet.

The weaver girl sobbed and trembled, stretched out her white and slender jade hand and put it on the loom. Weaver girl cried again, because she hasn't finished knitting clothes for Cowherd! But the Weaver Girl is still working, and her hands are constantly moving. Unfortunately, there is not even a piece of cloth with a simple pattern, only a piece of rotten cloth soaked by the tears of Weaver Girl. Suddenly, the queen mother came.

When she saw the cloth woven by the weaver girl, her delicate face turned red with anger. She grabbed the cloth and a flash of lightning split it into pieces.

"What are you crying about? A fairy can never be with a mortal! Let you meet once a year is good! Stop crying! Look at this cloth. How to wear it? How to hang in the sky? You make the earth rain every day. It's all your fault! Weave well! " The Queen Mother threw a rag at the Weaver Girl, waved her good clothes and went back to the Heavenly Palace. Weaver sobbed the cleaned rags, put on the clothes stolen by Cowherd, and went out to the edge of the Milky Way: the Milky Way is shallow, and I saw fish swimming in the river.

As soon as the Weaver Girl walked out, she heard the voice of the Queen Mother: "If you want to go there, I will kill the Cowherd!" " Hearing this, the Weaver Girl got a fright, immediately shrank her feet and began to cry again. Suddenly, she seemed to remember something.

5. Rewrite Altair into a narrative all the way. Mountain is all the way, mountain is all the way. You're leading a cow and I'm herding sheep together to see the stars herding sheep. All the way to the Altair, the Korean girl by the river.

Skillful hands, make a loom. There is no chapter all day, and tears are pouring down.

What's the difference between a clear river and a shallow one? Between water and water, there are no words. Altair, so far apart, the white weaver girl on the other side of the galaxy is looking forward to you.

She waved her slender soft hands, and Sol Zaza kept passing through the loom. She can't knit a piece of cloth all day long, and tears of lovesickness fall like rain.

The milky way's flowing water is clear and bright. At first glance, the Weaver Cowherd is separated by this little distance. But it is that clear water that separates us, and we can't be together without talking.

6. Develop the poem Cowherd Star into a story. It is said that a long time ago, there was a clever and honest young man in Niujiazhuang, west of Nanyang. His parents died early, so he had to live with his brother and sister-in-law. His sister-in-law, Ma Shi, is very vicious and often abuses him and forces him to do a lot of work in a day. The weaver girl in the sky plays games with fairies and takes a bath in the river. With the help of the old cow, the cowherd got to know the Weaver Girl, and they hit it off. Later, the cowherd met.

After the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl got married, the family lived a happy life. However, the good times did not last long. The Queen Mother forcibly brought the Weaver Girl back to heaven, and the loving couple separated.

Cowherd and his children are walking together in the clouds to catch up with Weaver Girl. When they see it, they will catch up. With a wave of her hand, the Queen Mother pulled out the golden hairpin on her head, and a Tianhe appeared, with the Cowherd and the Weaver Maid separated on both sides, and she could only cry. Their loyal love touched the magpies, and thousands of magpies flew to build a magpie bridge, where the cowherd and the weaver girl met. The Queen Mother has no choice but to allow them to meet on July 7th every year.

7. Rewrite All the Altair into a fairy tale article, All the Altair, a China girl by the Jiao Jiao River. Skillful hands, make a loom. There is no chapter all day, and tears are pouring down. What's the difference between a clear river and a shallow one? Between water and water, there are no words.

Comment and analysis

Morning glory and Weaver Girl are the names of two stars. Altair, or Hegu II, lies in the east of the Milky Way. Vega, also known as Tiansun, is located in the west of the Milky Way, opposite the morning glory. In China, the folk stories of Petunia Guantian and Weaver Girl originated very early. Xiaoya Dadong wrote a poem about Penny and the Weaver Girl, but it only wrote two stars. "Spring and Autumn Yuanmingbao" and "Huainan Zizhen" began to say that the weaver girl is a goddess. In Cao Pi's Ge Yanxing, Cao Zhi's Luo Shen Fu and Jiu Yong, Petunia and Zhinv became husband and wife. Cao Zhi's "Nine Odes" said: Petunia is the husband and Weaver is the woman. Next to the river drums everywhere, the star of Penny the Weaver will appear for a while on July 7. This is the clearest record at that time. This poem "Far Morning Altar" in Nineteen Ancient Poems describes the separation of the morning glory and the weaver girl. Its era was in the late Eastern Han Dynasty, slightly earlier than that of Cao Pi and Cao Zhi. Comparing this poem with the works of Cao Shi brothers, we can see that the story of Petunia and Weaver Girl was finalized from the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty to the Wei Dynasty.

This poem is about a couple holding a cow and a weaver girl in the sky, but the point of view is on the ground, which is to observe the parting pain of their husband and wife with the eyes of a third party. Switch between the two places and put pen to paper, saying that the cow is far away and the weaver girl is bright. Titiao and Jiao Jiao have different views on each other, so we can't be persistent. Morning glory is not bright, Weaver Girl is not far away. They are all so far away and so bright. However, it is easy to think of a wanderer far away from home with a petunia belonging to a distant relative, and it is also easy to think of the beauty of a woman with a weaver girl belonging to a distant relative. In this case, it seems that they can no longer be interchanged. If it is intertextuality, the interest will be reduced by half if it is replaced by a beautiful morning glory and a distant river girl. The subtlety of poetic language can be seen here. The purpose of calling Weaver Girl Hehan Girl is to make up three syllables and avoid using Weaver Girl in three words. The former sentence always uses Altair, and the latter sentence refers to Vega, which is neither rhyming nor monotonous. Hehan women are more energetic. Hehan woman means a woman on the edge of the galaxy, which is more easily associated with a real woman, but ignores that she is a star. I don't know if the author took such pains when writing poems. Anyway, different writing methods have different artistic effects. In a word, the arrangement of the ten words "Altair" and "Han woman of Jiao Jiao River" can be said to be the most ingenious arrangement and the most muddy effect.

The following four sentences are devoted to the Weaver Girl, saying that although she knits sweaters all day, she can't knit a horse because her heart is full of sadness. Delicate hands means delicate hands. In order to compete with the next sentence, the structure of the sentence has been changed. Those pull, draw, draw, close to reaching out. Zaza is the sound of a loom. Rafts are shuttles on looms. The poet used a word here. The Book of Songs, Xiaoya's Four Cadres: To be a woman, to carry a tile (spinning? )。 This word means to play, to play. Although the weaver girl stretched out her plain hand, she was not interested in knitting. She just fondled the loom and burst into tears. All day long, there is not a chapter in the Book of Songs Dadong: Weaver Girl, seven times a day. Even if the weaver girl is busy, she can't knit a stripe well. "

The last four sentences are the poet's lament: What's the difference between He Han's simplicity and simplicity? Between water and water, there are no words. The milky way between Petunia and Weaver Girl is clear and shallow, and Petunia and Weaver Girl are not far apart. Although only separated by water, they can't talk to each other. Yingying may be interpreted as describing the shallowness of water, which may be inaccurate. Yingying doesn't describe water, but both the word and the pulse of the next sentence describe the weaver girl. Notes of Six Ministers in Selected Works: Yingying is beautiful. This is accurate. Many people think that Yingying must describe water when she puts it in front of water. But the original intention of surplus is overflow. If we describe water, we should also describe its fullness, not its shallowness. Yingying is interpreted as shallow because of the influence of the clear and shallow river above, not Yingying's original intention. In the anthology, in addition to this poem, Yingying's upstairs daughter appeared, who served as a window. See also nineteen ancient poems. Shan Li's Note: Guangya said: Victory, forbearance. Surplus and victory are the same, and the old saying goes. This is to describe the beauty of women's manners, so the five ministers' notes are extended to Li Duan. In addition, Han Yuefu's On Mulberry: "Ying Ying is in the hotel, and Ran Ran is in the hotel. It also describes people's behavior. Since the Weaver Girl is called the Hehan Girl, the beauty of her appearance is reflected between Hehan, which means "Ying Ying is a river". Pulse condition, Shan Li's note: Er Ya says pulse condition depends on the other person. Guo Pu said: The pulse condition is to look at each other. Nothing means that although Hehan is shallow, Weaver Girl and Petunia can only look at each other in silence.

There are sixteen sentences in this poem, six of which use overlapping words, namely, Tiaotiao, Jiao Jiao, Xianxian, English-English and Pulse. These overlapping words make this poem concise, beautiful and interesting. Especially in the last two sentences, if a sad image of * * * appears on paper, it is a rare meaningful and muddy sentence.

8. Ancient poetry appreciation composition "Altair in the Distance" 1200 words. This article uses the story of Cowherd and Weaver Girl to express the sadness of the couple's separation. The first two sentences describe two stars across the river in the sky, which reminds people of the legend of the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl. These four sentences describe the Weaver Girl. The phrase "Zhazha loom" not only shows the weaver girl's skillful knitting skills, but also shows her beautiful and moving face. She used to be a textile expert, but now she "cries all day". This is different from the Book of Songs? The artistic conception of "picking ears, not dumping baskets" is similar, and the protagonist's worries are expressed to the extreme through absentmindedness. This can make the sadness and pain of the characters very specific and profound. These four sentences, "The river is shallow in Han Qing", describe the scene where the Weaver Girl looks at the cowherd on the other side of the river, but it is out of reach. These four sentences imply that the reason of "weeping like rain" seems that we are close at hand, just separated by water, but we can't meet each other, which emphasizes the depth of Weaver Girl's sadness. "Silence in the water", infinite tenderness and sadness are concentrated in a close-up, which is sad and intriguing. Through the description of Vega's image and life scene, this poem turns an ethereal legend into a vivid and touching artistic conception and a heartless binary star in the sky.