1. How to focus on poetry criticism writing? (Story type, viewpoint type, prose type)
2. How to ask good big questions?
3. How to bring thoughts into chanting?
4. Isn't it a little early for fourth-grade children to criticize poetry?
Teacher Shuai: My opinion on poetry criticism. Poetry criticism in the lunar calendar is often sensitive essay writing.
Teacher Chun Yan commented: The goal of the course "Moon Sky" is to open the senses, open the hearts of children and make their hearts sensitive, not to improve their writing level. Therefore, even writing is free writing, and the reason for opening Magnolia at the moment is that there will be a meeting. Children can feel what Magnolia is like through this poem, and they can observe and compare it in life. As far as this poem is concerned, how did the author write it? Some poems have spirit, others don't. Because there are few poems about Magnolia, I chose this one. Children can learn this poem and use the techniques used by the author to write other poems. For example, how do I feel when I see flowers? Poetry criticism is not purely expository, and the views expressed are children's own feelings. Therefore, don't be too entangled in style when guiding writing. You can ask children to write in comparison, horizontal comparison or vertical comparison.
Wang Xuexiao comments: In this class, the romantic and accurate comprehensive process is very clear. The best part is romance. Don't worry too much about the exact part. Ask big questions. Because every poem will focus on a focus for the author, what we want is how to take the children to experience it. As far as this lesson is concerned, the exact part of the question is inaccurate. For example, the first sentence asks: What aspects did Magnolia write? Where can I see that there will be a color conflict here. Red? White, white and red, you can discuss it and ask the children where they saw it. In fact, there are not only colors here, but also the feelings of the author. The second sentence is also, what is written in Magnolia? Color, luster, this is different from the color. Let students feel different. This luster is alive and radiates from the inside out. After three or four sentences, ask: What did the author write? Just thinking during the day and dreaming at night, because the flowers he saw during the day left a deep impression on him. So, I dreamed at night, which is also a writing technique. It is far-fetched to connect Mulan with Mulan. If you have to contact, you can find the relationship between flowers and people's quality. That is to say, the quality of flowers is related to the quality of people. Magnolia bloomed in early spring, and Mulan joined the army instead of her father, all of which were related to bravery. The comprehensive part can be compared with the winter jasmine. Which one do you like? These are all symbolic messages of spring. Magnolia is not as good as Spring Festival. You can also say whether you like it or not from the external shape. Magnolia is more beautiful than Yingchun. The younger you are, the more romantic you are, and the older you get, the more you think about it, but ask the right questions, otherwise it will be invalid thinking. It is too difficult for the teacher to instill.
The goal under the lunar calendar sky: basic goal: qualified and clear structure. Can recite, children should be able to write. Don't limit yourself too much when writing. Don't over-classify articles. In the eyes of children, texts have no categories. His article expresses feelings (low level) and ideas (high level) in words. Let children express their unique feelings and opinions. Descriptive, story-telling, sensitive and romantic writing are all good. Just keep writing with your children, not to mention what you want to express today. If you continue to be romantic with your children, then your children will be more sensitive. If you take your child to think and think, then he will tend to think. Write a comment: It is also good for children to see where it is. What is good? What's the matter? What's not good? Children's development is guided by comments, which are typical articles, pointing out the direction of writing, without criticism or praise. This is a high standard requirement.
(I didn't hear the previous words because of network reasons) Take children into poetry, because behind poetry are great poets, and every great poet has a great soul. And every great soul is the result of the infiltration of its own national culture and Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism. Entering the poet's soul, we enter our traditional culture. This continues the cultural blood of this nation. This is the biggest inspiration to me.