2. In modern and contemporary poetry, the writing techniques of repeating chapters and sentences in works are in content and theme: deepening artistic conception, rendering atmosphere, strengthening feelings and highlighting themes.
In the expressive force of poetry, it enhances the sense of rhythm and music of poetry, forms a kind of recurring beauty, and gives people a euphemistic and lasting charm.
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Experience the artistic expression and rhythm characteristics of Fu Bixing in The Book of Songs, in which the method of chapter by chapter is used:
Jia Jian
Jiān jiā is ash, and the Millennium is frost. The so-called Iraqis are on the water side.
As a result, the road is blocked and long. Swim back from it, in the middle of the water
It's been a long time, and it hasn't changed for thousands of years. The so-called Iraqis are in the water (meí).
Go back and follow, the road is blocked (jι). Swim from it and swim in the water (chí).
Jia Cai, peace and prosperity have not passed. The so-called Iraqis are in the water.
Tracing back from it, the road is blocked and right; From its upstream, swim in the water (zhǐ).
For example, this modern poem uses the technique of repeating chapters and sentences:
look into the future
Standing on the shore of this piece of literature
Conceive the direction of my pen and ink
I can't see the light I want.
It may be beyond the mountain.
Looking back, the years have changed.
It's dark and windy on this shore, and the sun sets on the other shore.
Standing in this backcountry
Looking for the hotel my heart yearns for.
I can't find the room I want.
Maybe its tourists are full.
Turn around and see the road is far away.
Private houses in front of and behind the desert
Standing in this dream corridor
Look at the hardships that my life will go through.
I can't see the hope I want.
Maybe it's always unpredictable
Looking back, life is half gone.
That side dissipates, and this side is spacious.
Comments on the upper and lower paragraphs repeatedly sing an emotion with the same structural form. Although the images written are different, they are written in the same structural form, which makes people feel musical and the emotions expressed by the author more attractive.
Write a 300-word composition on the topic of time. Time changed me.
People often say that time can dilute everything. I think time can change everything, can't it? With the passage of time, forest apes became human beings; As time went on, the hut became a mansion; Over time, the carriage became a car; As time goes by. .
However, time has changed me. Time flies, the sun and the moon fly like a shuttle. In a blink of an eye, I have bid farewell to my childhood. What has changed is that I have more responsibilities, more pressure and more complicated thoughts. I used to be carefree, but now I am always worried about my academic performance; Once innocent, but now I want to know what puppy love is; I used to be relaxed and free, but now I always care about housework at home; I used to skip around, but now I always miss my mother and say I want to be a lady. .
It is often said that time waits for no one. Indeed, when I look back, my childhood will always be a memory. These memories are displayed in my mind like movies. It feels like it happened yesterday, but it will never be today.
Time changed me. Although we lost a lot, we also gained a lot. Be sensible for a long time, know the purpose of reading, learn the truth of being a man (character, cultivation), and understand the world. It is better to cherish the present than to lament the past. Now, I have a vast youth stage for me to play, and I want to show my grace.
Time is changing, and I am changing, which only means that I will change to a bigger stage and show myself more perfectly. Don't be depressed. I believe that people are changing with time, just give yourself a smile at the corner. Then, I can climb to a higher stage. .
Time has changed me, and the ancients also said: people will change and the moon will be round. I haven't seen you for three days. This is all the result of the passage of time. I think this is also a natural law. I am willing to accept the challenge of time and let time continue to cast my beautiful life!
Time changed me.
When I was a child, I often clamored for my father to hug me. I like the feeling of staying on his broad back, which often makes my father gasp, and I dance proudly on his back.
When I was a child, I often went to my uncle's house to spoil. At this time, my uncle always sticks his long, pointed beard on my face, which makes me itch and laugh. At this time, he will immediately throw me into the air and catch me immediately.
When I was a child, I often played hide-and-seek with my classmates, lost my handkerchief and danced with laughter. ...
Childhood memories are so beautiful, so unforgettable and so pure.
Now, I always like to sit on the green lawn of school with a thick book. I often indulge in the wonderful plot and wonderful language in the book ... and forget to come back.
Now, I always like to walk alone in the fields with fresh air after rain, thinking about life while walking, but everything is still so vague and looming.
Now, I always like to stand alone on the balcony, looking at the free clouds and the eagle flying freely in the air that day, longing for my free and wonderful life.
For more than ten years, in a blink of an eye, I have changed from an innocent and lively girl to a quiet, mature and graceful girl.
When I was a child, now! Naive me, mature me; I love crying, I am strong; I'm not sensible, I'm thinking about life. Oh, I see, it's all time that has changed me, and time has made me.
Time still flows like a river, and I, in this hurried time, slowly grow and mature.
Thank you for your precious time!
4. Three-fold parallel composition (150 words) gives you some information! The present situation of college entrance examination writing is strange: three parallel sentences in a row from the beginning.
There is such a short comment: "parallelism has momentum." However, isn't it fashionable to start like this? How about some more axes? Is parallelism the only rhetorical device? ..... I have no problem with parallelism, and I have no deep hatred, but now I feel sick at the sight of parallelism. ..... This generation has really suffered from parallelism, and I feel sad for parallelism. "
In order to ensure their high scores, some candidates summed up the "three-ratio method" of college entrance examination composition. The so-called "three-contrast method" is to put three parallel sentences at the beginning or end of the article so as to "shock the marking teacher with literary talent". For example, when it comes to "ideal", three parallel sentences are impressively placed at the beginning or end of the article:
Ideal is a sail and ideal is an oar, which helps you sail to the other side of happiness.
Ideal is brick, ideal is tile, which helps you build a dream building.
Ideal is a rope, ideal is a rope to help you climb the mountain of hope.
If the topic is "honesty", you can naturally paint a tiger like a cat and eat it alive. Even the so-called "perfect composition series of college entrance examination" regards this technique as the way to win, and many teachers provide such "wonderful paragraphs" for students to read and recite, so as to construct them on the spot. It is no wonder that some reviewers have such a reminder: "In the process of marking papers, group leaders of all sizes have repeatedly told reviewers not to be deceived by articles with beautiful words, piled up and gaudy, many of which are framed and actually irrelevant to the topic." (Quoted from Notes of 2007 Chinese College Entrance Examination Commentators)
However, "parallelism" has become a kind of deception, and the crime of "framing" is not parallelism itself.
The rhetorical device of "parallelism" once made people fondle it because of its momentum, rhythm and beauty of arrangement. We are more than that! The repeated chapters and sentences in Three Hundred Poems are one after another, conveying different emotions and charm in a harmonious rhythm; The parallelism in Mencius is hierarchical, such as the waves of the Yangtze River rushing down, aggressive and unimpeded; The parallelism in Han Yu's handed down articles is quick, sharp, full of emotion and heartbreaking ... There are too many beautiful scenery along the long river of culture with the majestic posture of parallelism. Paibi was once the favorite of many people.
Because it is "innocent", the name "Peppy" should be corrected!
In fact, "Paibi" is not guilty, and the crime lies with the people who use it. "Peppy" has become a dazzling oil painting in some people's works, but behind the "oil painting" are bleeding lips. The imposing manner rendered by affectation can only be an armchair strategist, which can scare people for a while, but it can't stand the needle pointing at the wheat. The parallelism used because of the need of reasoning level leads to one's own point of view in the interlocking and layer-by-layer peeling of onions, which can naturally convince people by reasoning; The parallelism used for emotional needs is natural, and it can naturally touch the softest corner of the reader's heart out of true feelings. ...
After all, it is still a "true" word! Truth is "parallel" beauty, and truth is "parallel" truth. After all, "parallelism" is just a form. If there is too much content in this "meaningful form", then "parallelism" will be unbearable. Parallelism, metaphor, exaggeration and other rhetoric are all the same.
Everything comes from nature, which is good. As Su Shi said in Wen Shuo, "My prose is like a flood of flowers, which come out at sixes and sevens. ..... often do what you do, and often stop at what you can't do ... "The article written in this way gives people a real and natural feeling. How can this style of writing reach the level that can only be achieved by adding gold to the article with vulgar parallelism? From this point of view, parallelism, "use" or "no use" is not a problem!
5. Write a 300-word story composition with the poem "Guan Guan, Guan Guan".
The familiar sound of waterfowl rings in my ears again. The rippling lake is more charming under the wind.
Just like her.
Beautiful face, graceful figure, smooth water and delicate hands in the evening. She is the beauty I am looking for in my sleep, and it is breathtaking.
Ironically, the first time I tried to get close to her, I was politely refused. I was so confident that I suddenly lost my way, lost and confused, dissolved in wine and burned in my heart. For several nights, I couldn't sleep, thinking only of her. But for the next few days, I didn't say a word to her.
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I wanted to leave, but I saw her again before I left. I still walked through the leek like a fairy, or I always did it myself. But I'm not qualified to be with her. I just want to leave this heartbreaking place alone. Thinking of this,
In the room, a wave of sadness came to my mind, untied the lyre tied behind me and sang a solo song "Beauty Pity". I want to vent my depression, but I can't restrain my admiration. At the end of the song, I couldn't help sighing. I thought: It's time.
It's gone.
"That song is Beauty Pity?"
I looked up in surprise. It turned out that she didn't know when she had parked the boat beside me. At that time, she didn't know what to say, so surprised that she forgot to answer.
She looked at me with a smile. "Can you play another song, son?"
"Girl, please teach me."
After more than ten days, every day at sunset, I would always sit by the lake and play shepherd's purse across the water for her, and she began to sing along with the melody. Waterbirds croak, water shepherd's purse shakes with the wind, and songs and songs echo on the lake. Suddenly found better and more hopeful than before.
But now, without her, the sunset looks so bleak.
Waterbirds are still flying low, shepherd's purse is still swaying in the wind, and the lyre on my knee has not been played for a long time. I wonder if the melody it plays is still beautiful.
A gust of wind blew, and the old love song sounded again, giving her a blessing to the distant Iraqis.
Jianjia
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In the early morning, crystal dew dotted the white reeds by the river, and a figure was hidden in the darkness. Looking back and smiling, you immediately reminded me of endless homesickness. I only took a scoop of water, but you will give it to me.
Opportunity? Honey, do you remember the first time we met? Although you stand on the other side of the water, it is not difficult to remind me of your infinite reverie. When I turned around, I was surprised that you were different. "I want to compare the West Lake to the West Lake.
Thick makeup is always appropriate ",I think so. But beautiful things are often easily shattered, and suddenly you disappear from my eyes, leaving only your rouge fragrance in the air. I must be in this reed.
Looking for your beautiful image in the bushes, I want to go upstream, but I see the danger and long journey. Downstream, you seem to be in the middle of the water. The reeds are still so lush, and the dew still hasn't gone. It's different.
It was you who stood on the bank of the river and smiled at me shallowly, making me intoxicated. If it is a mistake to miss, I would like to be wrong forever, just because the beauty is like jade.
I was full of thoughts on my way home.
It is you. Your smile is deeply imprinted in my heart. Without you, time is like winter without spring. Without you, my four seasons are only winter. I don't regret it, but I am haggard for Iraq.
I have almost nothing to do in order to miss you. Fall into it when you meet by chance. I am determined to give you a promise: we will be together forever!
By the reed river, you are still fascinated by me.
The reeds flying all over the sky confuse me. Maybe God already knows my mind, and you passed me with a reed. Buddha said: Five hundred times in previous lives, one brush in this life. Since you and I had it in previous lives,
I have missed so many times, how can I give up easily in this life? I ache for love, and I suffer for love. I only care about you, so let reed become a symbol between us. Your token pierces my heart, but it also reveals your loneliness. I
I want to hold you tight and hold you in my arms. I don't want a vigorous loved one. I just want us to care about each other. Do you know that when you shyly handed me the reed,
I'm really surprised. Reed dancing with the wind added to our fun. You ran away in shame. I am moved by your shyness. I know you can't escape, and we don't have to part, because we are holding hands.
Hand, grow old with your son "Happiness has just begun!
It may be necessary to cut some,
6. Labor is the greatest happiness. Three-fold method for writing high school compositions, which is urgently needed: let the composition stand up. In Chinese traditional culture, "San" has both profound connotation and aesthetic purport, so most people like to take "San" as an example.
Laozi's Tao Te Ching contains "Tao gives birth to one, two, three and everything", Elvis Presley contains Golden Rooster, Romance of the Three Kingdoms contains Three Visits to the Cottage, The Journey to the West contains Monkey King Thrice Defeats the Skeleton Demon, Three Sound Banana Fans and Water Margin. There are three kinds of idioms, such as "Uniting the Three Kingdoms", "Three Chapters about the Law", "Refusing Three Shes", "Bian Wei's Three Exquisites", "Trinity", "Three Caves of Coward Rabbit", "Three Provinces for Me" and "Keeping My Mouth as a Bottle".