Su linxue
I'm afraid this phoenix tree will never live again!
When people walk under the bare buttonwood, they always say so regretfully.
The place where this phoenix tree was born is really strange. The house we lived in was originally divided into two rooms for two families. This phoenix tree just grows in the middle of the house, impartial, and can be said to be the boundary card of the two families.
Although there is only one stone step in front of the house, there are two roads from the front to the outside of the garden-one for each family, and the phoenix tree was born in the middle of the two roads. The shade of trees covered the pastures of the two families. It rains at night, and the rain that falls on the plane leaves is also shared by the two families.
It's a pity that there are too many ants in the garden, and the branches of the phoenix tree are eroded by ants and gradually lose their fruit. One night after a thunderstorm, its upper part was split, leaving only a tree more than 20 feet high, standing there as slender as sapphire.
Spring has come, and there are many green leaves on the tree, which are attached to the end of the tree and look like a palm tree.
Who says this phoenix tree will never live again? Now it has new leaves and even new skills, and will soon be able to restore its former beauty.
A gust of wind passed, and Ye Er was cut down again. When I picked it up, the snowman had bitten off two-thirds of it-it was the ants who bit it off again. Oh, shit!
But the brave phoenix tree didn't stop it from surviving.
The ants are coming again, and the wind is rising again. Ye Er, which has grown as big as the palm of your hand, has drifted away again, but it is still sprouting new leaves and has been busy for a whole spring and summer.
Qiu Lai, old cypress trees and oranges are still lush, but other trees are gaunt. Close to the ancient old elm tree, protecting its green leaves, just like the old people want to save the furniture they have worked hard for half their lives, but how can the west wind not be like a loser and ripple in their ears every day? Now its leaves are almost gone, and the lush green leaves in the garden have also decreased, but the blue sky has also increased. Li Xue, who climbed the dried elm tree, was also very happy. There is no shelter on it. He can drink wind and frost. His face is as red as a maple leaf. He is so confident. No matter how old and broken that elm tree is, he groans on his head.
Dali chrysanthemums stagger and struggle to bloom in the weeds. Petunia's vines have withered for a long time, but they still bloom, only more beautiful and pitiful than before, when it was small and full of lavender and bright red flowers in the cold dew. There used to be fields where musk flowers and impatiens were planted, and sometimes a few residual flowers could be seen. In the autumn wind, the jade butterfly flies around and stops on the flowers from time to time. It is sad and freezing for a long time. It is willing to freeze in the cold flowers!
At this time, another plane tree in the garden has flown to most of it. The bare buttonwood naturally has nothing but a slender and graceful branch, standing in the bleak sunset.
This phoenix tree. Afraid that I can't live anymore!
If people walk under the bare buttonwood, they say so regretfully.
However, I know that next spring will come.
Will there be ants and breezes next spring?
However, I know that a tung tree has fallen into the soil.
"Wutong" is an excerpt from Su's prose collection "Blue Sky", which is a lyrical prose.
This article describes a dying bare buttonwood tree. Even after being struck by the wind and eaten by ants, there are still many green leaves on the tree when spring comes, but this new life is attacked by the wind and hurt by ants. However, the brave phoenix tree did not lose its ambition to survive. It is still sprouting and spitting new leaves, and it has been busy for a whole spring and summer. The author endowed the Chinese parasol tree with tenacious will and strong vitality, which fully demonstrated the author's love for life.
In writing, this article has the following characteristics:
First, express your ambition with something. Since ancient times, many literati have pinned their feelings on the phoenix tree, which has always been a symbol of desolation and sadness. For example, Wang Changling's Poem of Long Letters in Autumn says, "The phoenix tree in Jinjing is yellow and the autumn leaves are yellow, and the bead curtain does not roll frost at night. The smoked jade pillow has no color, and you can listen to the Nangong for a long time. " It is about a girl who is deprived of youth, freedom and happiness. In a desolate and lonely palace, she lay alone, listening to the palace leak. The first sentence of the poem begins with a phoenix tree with yellow leaves by the well, which sets off a bleak and cold atmosphere. Another example is Zhou Zizhi's "Partridge Sky" in Song Dynasty: "A little residual red will be exhausted, and the autumn wind will cool the screen. It rained on the leaves of the plane for three nights, and the leaves were leaving. " It depicts a lonely, lonely and melancholy hero image. However, the author Su did the opposite, endowing the phoenix tree with tenacious will and strong vitality, and revealing that life is not always smooth. In the face of difficulties and setbacks, we should have firm faith and tenacious perseverance!
Second, if we want to promote it, we must first suppress it. At the beginning, the author tries his best to describe the withered state and harsh environment of Indus. "I'm afraid this phoenix tree will never live again." "The branches of the buttonwood tree were eroded by ants and gradually weakened." "After a night of thunderstorm, its upper part was split, leaving only a tree more than twenty feet high." In this state, the phoenix tree actually reveals a lot of green leaves, highlighting the theme of the work.
Third, the side foil. In order to express the theme more deeply and widely, and leave a broader imagination space for readers, the author not only praised the phoenix tree positively, but also set off its tenacious vitality from the side. "Old cypress orange is still green" and "close to the ancient elm to protect its green leaves", but in the end, I couldn't help moaning in the west wind, which was in sharp contrast with the optimistic and strong phoenix tree and once again praised its tenacity.
Fourth, use analogy. Dali chrysanthemum struggling in weeds, morning glory withered by vines, and even peach and impatiens stubbornly live in cold and cool dew, blooming fertility. When the author praises them, he is actually praising the phoenix tree, which makes its tenacious vitality universal.
Fifth, echo from beginning to end. In this paper, the change of bare phoenix tree in different seasons is used as a clue to organize the materials, which echoes before and after. At the beginning, I wrote in the plaintive voice of passers-by, "I'm afraid this phoenix tree will never live again!" " At the end, I wrote people's regret, "This phoenix tree may never live again", responding to the beginning. But the author didn't stop there. The phrase "I know a tung tree has fallen in the soil" has brought people new hope. Even if this phoenix tree dies, its seeds will continue to live!