"Daddy's Snoring" uses metaphorical rhetoric.
Ontology: snoring
Metaphor: little train (sound)
Dad’s snoring (modern poetry)
Like The little train on the mountain
It reminds me of
the beautiful forest
Dad’s snoring
always intermittent
Making me worried that the train will derail
Hey
Dad’s snoring stopped
Is the train arriving at the station
Appreciation:
"Daddy's Snoring" is a tender children's poem. The little poet keenly captured "Dad's snoring" as a subject of writing, because she found her father's snoring very interesting. The little poet used vivid metaphors. She felt that her father's snoring was "like a little train on the mountain." When her father's snoring stopped, she felt that the train had arrived at the station. The whole poem is full of childishness and full of affection between father and son.