1, excerpt from the original text:
Girl! There are gentle brown eyes, and the shadow is hidden in the pupil, just like a gloomy coffin in the night sky. Your curls compete with the sunshine to form a golden braid, like a spring water meeting many streams. At the turn of childhood and adulthood, your feet stand helplessly at the intersection of streams and rivers. You stare with timid eyes: looking at the running stream and the vast river!
Appreciate:
At the beginning, the poet painted a portrait of a girl. He didn't praise her beauty in vain. These three poems describe the girl's eyes, hair and feet respectively. Standing at the intersection of streams and rivers with "gentle brown eyes" and "golden braids" highlights the graceful and lovely appearance of the girl.
2. Excerpts from the original text:
My beloved girl, may God give you happiness forever. If there is anything else I can pray for you, I will not hesitate. What can I say except that no one loves you more than me? This really makes me sad. Many people blame me and say that I'm going to sing to that poor girl now.
Appreciate:
The whole poem is divided into five sections, each with six sentences. Neat form and clear language complement each other. The whole poem is done in one go, and the strong feelings and bright views are expressed without doubt. Different from the tone of the girl's self-report in Under the Bodhi Tree, this poem adopts a male perspective and confides directly to the beloved girl.
3. Excerpts from the original text:
The playful ponytail, delicate face, shallow smile and faint fragrance are the girls upstairs. Passed by me, like pure cloves, printed in my mind! I can't forget it at first sight, but I can't see crazy thoughts, wonderful fantasies and lonely wanderings, just because of the girl upstairs.
Appreciate:
By describing the girl upstairs, the author expressed his praise and love for the girl.