The appearance in the season is like the opening and falling of lotus flowers.
If the east wind does not come, catkins will not fly in March.
Your heart is like a lonely town, and the streets are like bluestones.
Without a sound, the spring curtain in March can't be lifted.
Your heart is a small closed window.
My dada horseshoe is a beautiful mistake.
I am not a returnee, I am a passer-by. ...
Appreciation of Poetry: Appreciation of Errors and Mistakes
Zheng Chouyu's poem Error is light and clear, and it is still a masterpiece. If Zheng Chouyu's works can arouse people's deepest feelings, it is nothing more than beauty and affection, then the poem Wrong is one of the best, which has established the poet's position and influence in Taiwan's poetry circles. When I first read this poem, the first thing I felt was its China. This is an absolute China poem, a poem belonging to China people, which tells an eternal and beautiful story of China. Therefore, although the shell of this poem flaunts the modernism of western learning spreading to the east, there is no doubt that it conveys a deeper traditional consciousness of China.
The poem Mistakes can be said to inherit the tradition of China's ancient palace grievances and in my heart forever's poems. In the poem, the hero "I" rode to the south of the Yangtze River, leaving a woman to live alone in an empty boudoir, waiting for her lover "I" to return day and night. However, the spoony affection of the woman has brought a long and boring wait. Therefore, her heart is "like an isolated city", and there is no "east wind" to deliver news for her, and there is no "catkin" flying all over the sky in spring; Therefore, her heart is a "small window", always paying attention to the "sound" on Qingshi Road, and you can see the colorful spring scenery outside the window without even lifting the curtains. In Liu Yuxi's "Ci of Spring", "Zhu Lou's new makeup should go down, and the first hospital in spring is deeply locked" seems to have the same effect as the above grievances, subtle and far-reaching. Finally, I came back. Dada's hoof looks beautiful to her, because the lover who looked forward to it day and night came back, but in a blink of an eye, this infinite joy turned into infinite disappointment. Because "I" was just passing by, not "going home". This "beautiful mistake" played a trick on her, as if heaven had played a trick on her. Perhaps, some people will understand the "I" in the poem as the sorrow of the prodigal son's homelessness, and this understanding is not unreasonable. In that turbulent era, the mentality of people in Taiwan Province Province was wandering, waiting to have a place one day. They are just a passer-by on the island of Taiwan Province Province, thinking that one day they can return to their hometown to reunite with their relatives. However, due to political reasons, their wishes could not be realized, resulting in a sense of loss and melancholy. However, if we try to compare Zheng Chouyu's other poems with errors, it is not difficult to find strong circumstantial evidence. For example, in Zheng Chouyu's Little Three, lines such as "I think loneliness and waiting are good for women" and "Because I am not the kind of person who often goes home" all show the theme that women stay in the boudoir and wait for the protagonist to return. In another poem, The Slave Outside the Window, "I am the God of the South, with my bare arms wrapped in a gauze-like night. Therefore, the star hanging on my wrist is my female slave ",which also tells the sad mood of women waiting for men to return in the long and lonely years." "
Mistake has nine lines and 94 words. The whole article is not long, but its artistic skills are not only praised, but also recited orally. Structurally, it implies two clues: vertical and horizontal. The obvious vertical line is from large view to small view, with distinct layers. The first two sentences are set in the vast south of the Yangtze River, then the camera moves to the small town, then to the streets, curtains and window leaves, and finally falls on the horseshoe, breaking the silence ahead.
This kind of writing is quite similar to the spatial treatment of the big scene of "There are no birds in the hundreds of mountains" in Liu Zongyuan's Jiang Xue to the small scene of a fisherman fishing for the river alone, which pushes poetry to * * *. Judging from the horizontal line, the first two sentences should be the end. It is precisely because "I" walked from Jiangnan to that woman's place and didn't go in. The woman's expectation of "face like lotus" became disheartened. The last two sentences should have been "I'm not a passer-by, just a passer-by", so "my horseshoe is a beautiful mistake". Here the poet used a small inversion sentence. This arrangement has created an uneven level of structure, which is more poetic and shines brightly in disharmony.
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How is this poem written? Mistake-Zheng Chouyu, I walked across the south of the Yangtze River, waiting for the lotus to appear in the season. The east wind is coming, and the catkins are not flying in March. Your heart is a small lonely city, just like the bluestone street at night is silent, and the spring curtain in March does not reveal your heart. It was a beautiful mistake to hold my horseshoe tightly. I am not a returnee, but a passer-by ...
Mistakes in Zheng Chouyu's writing; Appreciation of this poem; I have traveled all over Jiangnan.
The appearance in the season is like the opening and falling of lotus flowers.
If the east wind does not come, catkins will not fly in March.
Your heart is like a little lonely city.
Like a bluestone street facing the night.
Without a sound, the spring curtain in March can't be lifted.
Your heart is a small closed window.
My dada horseshoe is a beautiful mistake.
I am not a returnee, I am a passer-by. ...
Written in 1954
Appreciate:
Zheng Chouyu's poem "Mistakes" can be said to be the most popular modern poem in recent fifty years, and he is willing to read it. Many classical images are accurately used in the poem to express the thoughts and feelings of women and prodigal children. This paper will analyze "mistakes" from the perspective of composition. This paper starts with understanding the background of Zheng Chouyu's creation of this poem, sorts out the materials and events selected by the author, and then analyzes its structure, so as to have a further understanding of the style and theme of this poem.
Yu Guangzhong, a poet, called Zheng Chouyu a prodigal son. And Mistake is also one of the representative works of the author with the most prodigal consciousness. Although it describes the old theme of "in my heart forever" in China's classical poems, the author is original, describing the expectation and loneliness of "in my heart forever" from the perspective of a prodigal son, and on the other hand showing considerate care. Many words in classical poetry, such as Jiangnan, Lotus, Dongfeng, Catkin, Spring Curtain, Dusk, Horseshoe and other images, are used in poetry, which skillfully integrates classical and modern.
Among the classical poems, Nineteen Ancient Poems has the deepest influence on Zheng Chouyu. He thinks that the impermanence of life in poetry is actually the greatest vagrancy. The poems of He Qifang and Fei Ming (Feng Wenbing) also have a certain influence on Zheng Chouyu in symbolism and language style. Therefore, Zheng Chouyu's early poems are graceful and touching, inheriting the sense of rhyme and rhyme of traditional poems, and integrating classical images into modern situations, often with some sadness of parting. The works of this period include The Slave in Sleep, The Slave in the Cloak, The Slave Outside the Window, Long song, Poems of Zheng Chouyu, Poems of Zheng Chouyu, etc.
Writers often produce works because of some life experiences. Someone once asked Zheng Chouyu if this poem was the poet's experience. The poet replied:
This poem is similar to some traditional poems in content. It can be seen that the content of the poem has not changed since ancient times, but the expression is different. In terms of language, it has broken through the restrictions of Chinese dialects. When we recite this poem in Cantonese, it certainly tastes different from Mandarin, but it has a sense of beauty. Why did you write this poem? Some people think that this is some kind of experience of the poet's wandering life, which is also correct. This is not a matter of recording a time, but sorting out the fragments of life experiences and finally writing these works. I said that I have been to many places to avoid the enemy, and I have seen many different scenes, such as waiting women. My mother is a good example. At that time, my father was fighting at the front, and she and I lived alone, which became the most fundamental factor of this poem.
Therefore, when appreciating Error, it is more important to understand the relationship between its theme and content structure.
(a) The purpose of this article is placed at the end of this article:
The theme of the article appears at the end of the article, which can not only take the full text in one stroke, but also deepen the theme and achieve the finishing touch. This work reveals the theme "error" in the title of the poem, and leads to the clue in the preface of the poem that "the season looks like a lotus". At the end of the poem, I pointed out that "my horseshoe is a beautiful mistake" and expressed the enlightenment of unusual harmony with the method of "contrast". It can be seen that this poem has always been based on the theme of "error", and so is the ideological context.
(2) There are implied meanings in the article:
Chen Shiren Ceng Ming Yun:
When dealing with the theme of a poem, the author sometimes hides the surface part in a deeper layer or a real part, although it is clearly expressed. If we want to master this obvious and hidden theme, we must make some efforts to judge it.
At first glance, the poem "mistake" is ostensibly about a beautiful mistake made by a woman because of disappointed expectations. But if we carefully explore the whole poem, we will observe the mood changes of Sifu (you) from the perspective of a passerby (me). The reason why thinking about women's mood will change greatly and cause beautiful mistakes is mainly because women are eager to return to the depth of others. It can also be said that women's expectation for the return of their lover is unwavering, which has caused great loneliness and loss. The so-called "the greater the hope, the deeper the disappointment". So, on the surface, the author writes about the beautiful mistakes made by women when they find their expectations failed, but in fact, the deep theme is to express women's incomparable loyalty and endless loneliness. This coincides with the theme of traditional in my heart forever's poems.
Materials:
1. The prodigal son returns-the cross
The prodigal consciousness has always been the theme of Zheng Chouyu's works. For example, his poems "The Wild Goose Flying Alone is a Meteor of Love", "The Visitor at Dusk" and "The Day of Parting" ... >; & gt
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Begging for Zheng Yuxi's poem "Mistake" is Zheng Chouyu's, isn't it? I walked across the south of the Yangtze River, and my face waiting in the season was like a lotus flower? Follow-up: Anthracene, the whole poem answers: I walked across the south of the Yangtze River and looked like a lotus in the season. The catkins in March don't fly, and your heart is like a small lonely city. Qingshi street is silent at night, and the curtain in March is not revealing. It was a beautiful mistake to cover my horseshoe. I'm not a returnee, just a passer-by ... I pasted it. This poem is beautiful.
What does Zheng Chouyu's poem Error mean? This poem was originally a vernacular poem, but it is good to savor the obscure poems.
Regarding the wrong ancient poems, people are not sages, and there are mistakes.
After that, it will be changed!
Change it if you have it, and encourage it if you don't!
Fallacy became the reason for finding the result, while loopholes were untraceable.
Experience should be summed up, and excuses should not win gold-(Tethysan)
Rewrite the poem "Mistake" into a composition and face the mistake directly.
"The biggest failure is unconscious failure." This is a sentence that Carlisle said, which inspired me a lot.
I remember it was a morning in the third grade, and it was our turn to be on duty. I want to steal some laziness, and I'm a little late. I walked slowly all the way. It was already 7: 55 when I came to school, and the students were already sitting in the class to make preparations before class. I'm coming to class, and it will start soon. After the teacher came, our team leader immediately told the teacher that I didn't come to sweep the floor today. The teacher asked me not to sweep the floor all day tomorrow morning, and I casually agreed.
The next morning, I finished my step, and it spread to the teacher like wings. The teacher called me into the office and talked for a long time. First of all, I was still standing in the office when suddenly she said, "Why don't you always sweep the floor?" I held my head high without saying a word. "I hope you can correct your mistakes, be a good boy in the teacher's heart and try to be a brand-new yourself." Finally, I was moved by the teacher's poetic language. For the next few days, I went to school on time every day. In order to make up for my previous mistakes, I was responsible for sweeping the floor and taking out the garbage alone. At this moment, the teacher came. When he saw me working so hard, the teacher smiled. He said, "mistakes are inevitable, but don't repeat them." I nodded in agreement.
I looked at the teacher's smile and felt sweeter than eating honey. I was so happy that I secretly made up my mind to get rid of my laziness and set a good example for the students.
We should be brave enough to face our mistakes; Mistakes are a compulsory course in life, and only when you understand them can you mature. I hope everyone can face and overcome mistakes like me and be a good boy who dares to face mistakes.
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