The campus-themed imitation of Mu Dan's "I See" is as follows:
I see a crystal dewdrop quietly bending the young grass.
I saw them lower their heads again and again, maybe the flowers not far away were spreading.
I watched the birds spread their wings and fly quietly across the sky above the teaching building.
I saw the teaching building standing majestically, and I was instantly impressed by the dissatisfied earth beneath my feet.
Oh, how much joy and sweat it has brought us, how solemn and sacred the teaching building is.
Oh, how many teachers have worked hard for us, and how many parents have protected us.
I looked at the corner of the classroom, where there were test papers we had written.
I see that they are silent again and again, and maybe they will accumulate more and more in the near future.
Come, come, the ocean of knowledge, the rolling paper drifts with your excitement,
Like the fragrance of flowers, the sound of books, and the flight of birds. Oh, let my heartbeat merge with the book,
Let the laughter and sweat drip into the boundless ocean.
Extended information:
Poetry writing skills:
1. Refining of poetry
Poems cannot summarize everything like prose and novels It is clearly explained that it can only find some of the most representative words to convey the meaning.
Therefore, we must strive for a word worth a thousand dollars, win more with less, make people think and get it, and the words are exhaustive but the meaning is endless. Just like we rarely see a poem that can finish all the words and express all the meaning. A good poem is often a rich expression of inner emotions,
2. The emotion of poetry
A good poem is often a rich expression of inner emotions, and a poem is Like the vent of a volcano, it expresses the author's ups and downs of emotions. There are many poets who themselves are a tragic poem. Sima Qian, a writer in the Han Dynasty of my country, once said that "the three hundred poems are mostly the work of sages and sages out of anger." It is difficult to imagine that a person with a heart like stagnant water, A flower full of poetry can bloom in your heart.