Please help me revise some contents of this poem.

Don't give up for yourself.

When your turn is not a habit (when your turn is not addictive)

I just want to.

Keep it for yourself.

When your steps don't stop (when your steps don't stop)

I just want to.

Keep it for yourself.

When your empty eyes don't move (when your eyes don't move)

I just want to.

Keep it for yourself.

Only for late autumn.

Just to get into the blood circulation of the eyes.

Look at this upside-down and hazy little world

one person

Keep it for yourself.

If there is always separation.

(Why not) Those moments (treasures) in your hands.

It looks so warm

I want to meet you with a smile

Don't look back,

Don't look back (back)

But my brow can't help bursting with infinite sadness.

since then/from then on

Don't look back (again)

Don't look back (again)

I just want to.

Keep it for yourself. ...

Teach an axe to teach others for your reference.