A 600-word composition describing a scene

1. Write a composition describing the scene, about 600 words

The sea

The sea is majestic, with waves hitting the beach and making a roar The sound of waves; the sea is spectacular, stretching as far as the eye can see from far to near; the sea is rich, it contains rich minerals; the sea is selfless, it dedicates its children to mankind. Everything about the sea is so beautiful. Anyone who sees it is intoxicated by it. However, after I saw the sea, I was deeply intoxicated...

I remember I was 7 years old That year, I finally arrived in Sanya, Hainan. Early in the morning, I got up early. Walking on the beach, you look up and see the faint dawn, dotted with dots of red, small footprints behind you, and the sea water flowing slowly. After a while, the sun, like a delicate girl, shyly hid here and there, accidentally avoiding the gauze-like clouds. In an instant, its light illuminated the entire earth. I finally saw its true face. In the sky, the clouds and mist surrounding the sun gradually changed from white to red, which further highlighted the shyness of the sun. The clouds and mist gradually flowed and disappeared into the sky, and the sunlight had no obstruction and emitted its strongest light. The whole sea suddenly became full of vitality. Seagulls flew across the sky in groups. The sea water beat the dry rocks from time to time. The waves connected with the waves, forming a huge splash. The tides ebb and flow, and shells were exposed one by one on the seashore. The shells sparkle in the sunlight and are extremely dazzling. Golden waves rise and fall one after another, making a sound of "wow-wow-".

Before long, the sea was crowded with people. Everyone was enjoying the coolness that the sea brought to them. I walked on the edge of the sea, and small footprints appeared on the shore one by one. The sea water in the distance, under the sunlight, looked like naughty children running towards the shore. Come. The sea water was surging for a while, calm for a while, rough for a while, sparkling for a while. Everyone stopped playing and stopped to watch this indescribable beauty. I was deeply intoxicated by it and had to sigh: the sea How beautiful! Its attraction has attracted me to it, and I am intoxicated...

The sea, everything about you is so beautiful. You are like a mother, giving people warmth. Wherever you are, joy is everywhere. .

2. A 600-word composition describing a scene in chronological order

It is another Monday morning, and the weekly flag-raising ceremony is about to begin. After the morning reading get out of class, the students lined up neatly to the playground with excitement, waiting for the solemn flag-raising ceremony.

The playground was solemn and silent. We seemed to be able to hear our own heartbeats. The teachers and classmates were all staring at the five-star red flag that was about to rise on the flag stand. Suddenly a serious and solemn voice came from the radio: "Everyone stands at attention, raises the national flag, sings the national anthem, and salutes!" The students stood up straight with a "swish" sound, raised the five fingers of their right hands together above their heads, and saluted the national flag! After a while, the exciting melody of "March of the Volunteers" came from the radio. The flag guard flicked the national flag in his hand, and the bright five-star red flag rose slowly amid the national anthem. Looking at the bright five-star red flag, I seem to see the great spirit of the five brave men of Langya Mountain who would rather jump off the cliff than surrender to the enemy... This five-star red flag is dyed with the blood of countless soldiers. If there is no Their sacrifices would not lead to the beautiful life we ??have now.

"We are united as one, braving the enemy's artillery fire, moving forward! Forward! Forward, forward!" In the loud singing, the five-star red flag was raised to the top of the flagpole and fluttering in the wind, like a wave in the blue sky and white clouds. The group is a flame, which makes the campus red.

After the flag-raising ceremony, the singing that resounded throughout the campus lingered in our ears for a long time, and the five-star red flag fluttering in the wind was deeply engraved in our hearts.

3. Composition about the scene (urgently needed~) Choose the scene that impressed you the most, in chronological order

Xin Zhixue "Look, it's snowing!" I was attracted by the sound to the corridor and went outside. At first glance, it looked really good. Very small snowflakes were falling slowly. I couldn't help but feel a little joyful in my heart, hoping that it would bring us a real heavy snow. Soon after, the city was gently covered by these soft snowflakes. Covered with a layer of snow. Each snowflake circled and fell gently, becoming a small part of the layer of snow on the earth. Each snowflake merged into the beautiful scenery of the earth covered with snow. Facing the snow, I thought I recited a few poems I had learned, but I couldn't remember them. It seems that what nature has given us cannot be expressed in words. Although I can't speak, I can listen to the sound of snow. The heavy snow is falling. , that piece of snowflake dances in various postures in the air, or flies, or hovers, or falls straight and fast, spreading to the ground. At this moment, everything is beautiful, everything is silent, standing in front of the window , the laughter and laughter of the snowflakes rang in my ears. I could hear their joy. Before the snow stopped, the children couldn't help but come out to play, having snowball fights and rolling snowballs. Although the snowflakes were still falling, they Regardless of the objections of his parents, he had a great time playing, full of childhood joy. Xue let us crush them into fluffy snowballs, and then smashed them around each other. Although his body was smashed to pieces, his body was everywhere. Splashing, but they never complain, giving us happiness is its happiness. It gives us the warmth of the soul with its unique language. I can hear this sound. Auspicious snow heralds a good year, and snow on the eighth day of the Lunar New Year should be a blessing. A good sign for the new year. The snowflakes are falling slowly, and together with the sound of firecrackers, it brings joy to people. I like to watch the snow quietly, watch the snow fall quietly, and listen to the faint sound of the snow, and I will feel peaceful and happy in my heart. I I also saw a group of children having a snowball fight, dodging left and right on the road. I saw a layer of snow covering the young leaves on the lawn, protecting them. I could hear their proud voices for taking on this important task. The ground was pure. The snow bathes in the sunshine and enjoys the last moment of joy. Are they crying for the life that is about to end? No, they are laughing and proud. They have completed their tasks and spread joy to the world. They have dedicated their lives and used their talents. They are great. I can hear the joy in their lives. When it snows again , let us stand in front of the window and listen carefully to a life legend. 4. A scene composition

Under a picture of a huge dinosaur, there is this sentence: "There are many giant beasts that cannot adapt to changes that have disappeared from the earth."

What about that person? What is a human being? Is it a giant compared to ants, or is it a tiny ant under the feet of dinosaurs? Are they what we call advanced animals, or are they just a bunch of idiots who actually know nothing? Are we the owners of our lovely earth on the household register, or are we a group of pitiful slaves of nature? Ouch, what on earth is a human being? Ever since humans appeared on the earth, they have been a nondescript thing. It is said to be a monkey, but it cannot jump between branches. It is said to be an ape. Its arms are a bit short, and it does not like to make graceful movements of beating its chest.

This thing is inherently destructive. It creates fire that can destroy everything with ulterior motives, just as it creates atomic bombs today. It tries every means to attack other innocent animals and leisurely shuttles through various nutritional chains of the food chain - eating anything as long as it is edible.

And this ability is getting better and better from generation to generation. Nowadays, except for rats, all the animals in the world are becoming rare animals. They still protect them all day long, so why not just stop! It’s shameless to say that people’s animals cannot adapt to “changes”. It is asking endlessly from nature, asking her lush green to turn into black charcoal for cooking delicious food, asking her beautiful rivers to turn into carriers of sewage, and asking her blue sky to turn into rags full of holes. , turning her originally moist and flat ground into a trap-like funnel.

Even they were digging into the hard earth day by day, trying to extract every element from her body - as long as they lived comfortably. As long as they live comfortably, people like this are willing to do anything. They use the tools invented by their ancestors to shave off pieces of the earth's head. In some places, pus is leaking and black smoke is emitting! The earth is screaming and screaming. Will the next giant disappearing be the earth itself? Because she can't adapt to crazy humans! It is said that people don't care about this - they still want to live on Mars, the sun, etc.! It seems that humans will not stop until they turn the universe into powder! What is a human being? I still don't understand.

Comments: Lu Xun said: "Laughing, anger and scolding all become articles." Saying "what is a human being" is almost a curse.

But sometimes, that innocuous criticism is really not as good as a scolding that makes people happy to listen and makes people sober up easily. The author ruthlessly exposed and poignantly ridiculed the bad behavior of human beings who crazily destroy nature and ecology out of selfish instincts.

He refers to nature as "she" and refers to human beings as "it". He repeatedly emphasizes that he does not know what humans are and calls them nondescript. His dissatisfaction and resentment towards human behavior are palpable.

Compared with various related texts of warnings, rules and even prayers, the article shows a fierce and sharp fighting style and a serious and cold personality behind the humor, which leaves a deep impression on people.

Example 2: Narration of the Last Monkey For many centuries, I was just an ordinary animal on the earth, running around all day long - in search of food, and to avoid being hunted by advanced animals. However, now, I have become a key protection target and am being waited on by hundreds of high-level animals.

What a wonderful thing! Advanced animals - animals that call themselves humans, created a large "forest" for me. In the forest, there are "mountains", "waterfalls", "flowers", "birds", and branches full of "fruits".

However, the mountains are not towering, the waterfalls are not spectacular, the flowers are not fragrant, the birds do not sing, not to mention, the fruits cannot be eaten. Despite this, many humans still come to see this fake forest and the real me in the fake forest every day.

It is said that there is no longer even a small piece of real forest on this planet, and I have become the only low-level animal on this planet. Whenever I see the joy of human beings after entering the "forest", I wonder what their expressions would be like if they saw a real big forest.

When I was a child, I lived in a real big forest. There are blue sky, clear water, green grass, red flowers, my close friends and other residents.

In the early morning, the mist in the forest was slowly lifted, and the sunlight shone in through the gaps in the leaves, leaving flashing bright spots on the ground: the deer, with their beautiful antlers, wandered in the green On the grass; the birds opened their throats cheerfully and spit out crisp notes; my friends and I climbed from one tree to another tree... This is how a busy and happy day in the forest began. In the evening, the setting sun gave the forest a strange red dress.

In the forest, the voice of a mother calling her children home echoes everywhere. This is a beautiful and peaceful place.

Only when the tiger appears, it will cause a commotion, but when the tiger is not hungry, it will never easily disturb our lives. However, humans somehow invaded our place, and a catastrophe quietly came.

Humans first captured the tigers, and then hunted the deer in groups and brutally sawed off their beautiful antlers. What scares me the most is the way humans treat my loved ones.

I saw with my own eyes: how they quickly tied the limbs of my relatives to the iron frame, how they calmly cracked open their heads, and how they happily tasted the gray-white brains. Tigers hunt for survival, what do humans do for that? Sometimes, I really want to kill myself to avoid being brutally killed, but I can't.

Before she died, my mother once predicted: "Humanity will prosper through wisdom, and it will also be destroyed by wisdom." I want to see with my own eyes how mankind will come to an end.

When humans tried every means to extend my lifespan, I also actively cooperated with them. Up to now, I can no longer remember how old I am. I know this day is coming.

They cut down forests, mined excessively, and extended their iron claws into the core of the earth. The air was so polluted that there was no way to control it. The earth was heating up. It was hot and dry all year round. Wind and sand rolled in from the sky. Rivers gradually became thinner and cut off. X Although the vaccine for the disease has been successfully developed, a new environmental monster has emerged - disease Y. This disease is spread through the air and will soon sweep the world. Human beings who regard themselves as intelligent may no longer be able to escape this disaster. I want to laugh, imitating the ferocious smile that humans make; I want to cry again, my mother’s prophecy has come true, and I, the last monkey, can also "die".

But those wonderful memories swaying under the shade of green trees will also be wiped out and disappear forever in the vast universe. This makes. 5. A 600-word essay describing the scene

"The Battle between the United States and Iran"

The 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing have begun! I am a special reporter. This is a great honor! I concentrated on recording the wonderful moments...

This is a football match between Iraq and the United States. Everyone knows that there was a war between Iraq and the United States not long ago. Everyone is paying attention to this game.

First, it was Iraq captain Leah who kicked off the game. Leah passed the ball to his "golden partner" Yomaser and rushed into the US team's position. Yomase continued to dribble the ball forward. At this time, American center Acme rushed over and made a tackle. With quick eyes and quick hands, Yomase picked up the ball, jumped up and kicked a long pass. The ball was passed to forward Yasigi who had been waiting in the penalty area for a long time. Yasigi scored a header. Unfortunately, the ball hit the door frame and bounced out. At this time, Leah flew over and sent the ball into the net with a hook. The whole crowd cheered.

At this time, the goalkeeper of the U.S. team sent a ball, and the ball was passed to the U.S. captain Casey Yue. He rushed into the Iraqi team's position with the ball, dashed left and right, passed the Iraqi defender, and reached the penalty area. , face to face with the goalie. This is a one-on-one war, and everyone's hearts can't help but rise. I saw Casey volleying more and more, and the ball flew towards the lower left corner of Ila's goal. Iraq goalkeeper Hackley leapt over, grabbed the ball, and held it firmly in his arms. The audience burst into deafening cheers.

The first half whistle sounded. After the break, the second half began.

This time, the American team captain Casey took the kick and the ball was passed to Acme. Acme was about to rush forward. Unexpectedly, he was intercepted by Yomaser with a tackle. Mather made a long pass and the ball fell at the feet of captain Leah. A long shot from Leah. The ball went in!

At this time, the game was over, the score was 4:3, and the Iraqi team won. The team members hugged each other happily. The cheers from the audience grew louder and louder.

At this moment, Casey, the captain of the American team, walked closer to Leah, the captain of the Iraqi team. The whole place fell into silence.

Casey walked up to Leah, held Leah's hand and said, "Your Iraqi team's skills are so good. It seems that our American team is going to join us." Thunderous cheers rang out in the audience applause.

I quickly raised the camera and took a picture of this beautiful moment... 6. Composition: Choose a scene and describe it (an event) 600 words

Today, the weather is sunny, The sun was shining brightly, and we held a garden tour in the central square of my hometown. After lunch, our family came to the central square happily. We saw that there were a sea of ??people there, it was very lively, and it was already packed. I heard from my father that this garden tour Activity 1*** has four contents: guessing riddles, clipping marbles, blowing up balloons, and making circles. These are all my favorite programs! I broke free from my father's hand and ran towards the dark crowd. "Please line up!" I heard the host shouting at the top of his lungs. I came to the ring area first and stood in a "long queue" Behind the queue. I waited anxiously, hoping it would be my turn soon. One, two, three... finally it was my turn. I picked up the circle, and my heart was pounding: "Hundreds of pairs of eyes Look at me, you must win." Maybe because I was too nervous, I didn't even touch the edge in the first two laps. I adjusted my mentality and told myself not to be discouraged. So I did the third lap It flew out... I saw it bounced on the ground around me, then flew up again, just in time. There was a burst of cheers from the crowd. In the cheers of the people, I easily hit the key shot again. After completing the circle, I finally came to the guessing area. I picked up my toes and stretched my neck to look for word puzzles, because guessing word puzzles is my "speciality". Wow, I saw a crossword puzzle that read: One word has nine horizontal and six vertical characters. I kept guessing and guessing. Someone asked the riddler, and the riddler thought about it for three days. Isn't this the word "crystal"? I quickly tore off the note and took it to redeem the prize. The staff at the prize redemption area confirmed that my judgment was correct. In this way, I participated in several activities. Although I got some small prizes, it left a very strong impression on me. Profound, this garden tour is really interesting. 7. Humbly write a 600-word essay on a scene

Scene 1: I remember when I was in third grade, I wrote an essay titled "One Thing I Want" and handed it to the teacher after I finished it. Correction. The teacher happily said to me: "Your composition is pretty good! You have made progress. Please continue to work hard in the future!" He also pasted the composition I wrote on the wall. The teacher repeatedly told me, "Don't be complacent if you get good grades." , we must retain a humble mentality." However, I don't really understand this sentence.

I told my mother about this, and she praised me and told me, "Be humble, don't be proud." I was so happy that I turned a deaf ear to what my mother just said. So I became proud and thought: There is actually nothing to fear from this "guy" Composition, I can handle it in no time. From then on, my heart was filled with pride, I no longer liked reading books, I no longer listened attentively in class, and I couldn’t write well...

In a composition class, the teacher asked us to write wrote an essay. I thought to myself: "My first essay was so good, what does it matter this time?" So I wrote an essay nonchalantly and handed it in. As a result, I was called to the office by the teacher. The teacher said to me seriously: "Look at the composition you wrote? I can't even understand it. Can you understand the composition you wrote? Tell me." I I lowered my head and looked at the composition I had written. I was dumbfounded and thought to myself: Is this the composition I wrote myself? I didn't expect that even you couldn't understand it... The teacher said again: "This essay of yours is really terrible. The central idea is unclear, there are many typos, and the sentences are not fluent. Hey... You, I praised you, so... You are so proud and complacent. I hope you study hard and improve your writing skills. Now the teacher has a famous saying - 'humility makes people progress, pride makes people fall behind'..." 8. A 600-word essay on scene description

"Bang"! The order sounded. In an instant, the athletes flew out like arrows. I saw them all holding their heads high, frowning, gritting their teeth, and running towards the finish line with flying strides. Slowly, they distanced themselves, but as you chased after me and refused to give in, the competition became more and more tense and fierce, and the enthusiasm of the students was burning like a "fire in winter". Cheers and shouts came and went, one wave after another.

"Dai Boyang, come on! Dai Boyang, you will win..." Dai Boyang, the "Pegasus" of our class, is "fighting the enemy bravely" on the field! You see, he is swinging his arms rapidly, his feet are in the wind, and he is always in the lead.

I thought proudly in my heart: This group of "little rookies" would be in dire straits when they met Dai Boyang. Dai Boyang would definitely kill them and leave no trace of them behind, and they would be completely defeated! The end point is close at hand, 10 meters... 8 meters... 5 meters... 1 meter... At this critical moment, Dai Boyang's face turned red and he tried his best, like a rocket full of energy. , like a flash of lightning in the air, crossing the finish line with a "swish" sound...

"Yeah!" We in the stands high-fived and cheered! 9. An essay describing a scene

A vivid picture of something happening to some characters at a certain time and place. This is a scene. For example, teachers and students celebrate Teacher's Day together, a birthday party, a game, etc. The description of the scene is inseparable from the characters. There cannot be just one character, but the simultaneous activities of many characters constitute the scene.

When writing a good scene, you should pay attention to the following four points:

First, you must clearly explain the background of the scene. Such as the time, place, environment, etc. of the event, so that people know what social or natural environment the scene took place in.

Second, write the specifics on the basis of writing the general. When writing a scene, you should have an overall summary of the scene so that readers can have an understanding of the overall appearance. But the scene should also have key parts. This part should be written in detail and concretely, so as to be a little bit comprehensive.

Third, write the atmosphere. Atmosphere is an emotion or feeling that people see or feel in a certain environment. No matter what the scene is, there will be an atmosphere. For example, the celebration scene has a happy atmosphere; the competition scene has a tense atmosphere; the farewell scene has an inseparable atmosphere, etc.

Fourth, the scenes must be written in order. A scene is a comprehensive picture composed of people, events, scenery, and objects. It is impossible to write them all at the same time with just a few strokes. Therefore, when writing scenes, you must arrange the order. Generally speaking, scene description can be arranged from surface to point. For example, when describing the celebration of Teachers' Day, you can first write about the overall atmosphere of the celebration, outline the "face" situation, and then write about the performance of the principal, teachers, and classmates respectively. In this way, everything can be combined and organized clearly.

Scene description is to describe the scenes and situations of the event in detail and with emphasis. The key is to create the proper atmosphere in the description of the scene, and to show the wonderful scenes one after another, so that people have the feeling of being in the scene.